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The Legend of Calezerb: Chapter 1 (DRAFT)

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NeoUltima is not online. NeoUltima
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01 Jun 2013 04:25 PM

CHAPTER 1: The Uprising

It was a normal day. Wind blowing, bees humming, except today was a special normal day. Today my Dad is coming back from his 2-Year trip from Draz Volcano. My Dad studies all of the strange things that happen in realms. And 2 Years ago, Draz Volcano went crazy. It started to erupt over and over, all of the monsters there blocked the door, and the guardian that usually takes you there was gone. But luckily, my Dad had got in just in time to study it. He said he was bringing me something special from his trip. I hope its not what he got me last time when he went to the Nether Realm, a pile of Dark rocks. "Honey, Dad's home!" Mom said as she was heading down the stairs.
"Coming!" I replied as dashed out of the door.
My Dad was just entering the house. His clothes were burned from top to bottom and he looked younger.

He was decently tall with dark leather boots. He was bald besides a few hairs on his head that he always wanted to stay straight down on his head. He had a small beard of black hair that he seemed to have shaved a little bit and just left the rest. He was wearing a wool jacket and jeans with burn marks and holes in it. His eyes were covered by small shades with red lens.

"How are you guys?" Dad said while dusting himself off.
"We are d--" I cut Mom off "What did you get me?"
"Well, somebody's excited." Dad said while taking out a box from his bag
"Here it is. Your very own Sword!"
"Wow! A Steel Blade! Does that mean I can go fight Monsters now?"
"Yes and No. Ever since Lord Calezerb became our King, he has issued a rule that you must be either a Royal Knight or have permission from him to fight Monsters."
Dad said while sitting on the couch.
"Aw, so I cant fight unless I become a Royal Knight?"
"Thats right. Now get to bed. Its late."
"Okay, Dad!"

I rushed up to my bed and put my sword in it's case. I waited until Dad and Mom were asleep and then I jumped out of bed. I quietly got down stairs and ran to the door. I took a deep breath and ran out the door. But one thing I did not know, Dad was watching the whole thing from the stairs after I got out of bed.
"Good luck, son" Dad said with a grin on his face then went back to sleep.
I was so scared to be outside in the middle of the night alone with monsters. And plus, Calezerb's knights were patrolling.

I took another deep breath and made my way to the gates. As soon as I got there, I had to go back and hide behind a building because the gates were opening. I was about to run out the door but then I saw something that caught my attention: Elite General Dominus Ultimus riding a chariot into the Kingdom. At first I was confused because Dominus always was in his realm. But then I remembered that there was a meeting for all the leaders of each realm. So that means Korblox, the Elemental King, the Water King, Dominus, King Calezerb, the Ice Titan, the Zombie Captain, the Demonic Skeleton, and even MORE leaders will be in this Kingdom tonight. Like the guards were not enough.

After Dominus passed by, I made my way for the gate. it was closing so I had to move quickly. I jumped to the top and used my sword to help me up. Then I slid down the front of the gate to the ground. The gate slammed closed with a big crash.
"Well, now Im stuck out here."
I made my way through the forests to the Goblin Realm portal. As I was about to enter, 2 Robbers appeared out of nowhere behind me and knocked me out. Everything went black. When I woke up, I could not believe my eyes: It was The........



END OF DRAFT CHAPTER 1

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01 Jun 2013 04:26 PM
Wow.. sounds cool.
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01 Jun 2013 07:55 PM
Awesome! Continue!
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01 Jun 2013 11:01 PM
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amazing. continue continue CONTINUE
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CONTINUE
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18 Jun 2013 07:06 PM
Not bad. Be more descriptive, describe where he his, how he feels. What hes thinking. Small stuff like that. But nice idea. Conitue
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19 Jun 2013 10:40 AM
I SAID CONTINUE!
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30 Jun 2013 02:32 PM
Guys I know him, he is continuing and will update it soon!
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09 Jul 2013 12:47 PM
continue!
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18 Dec 2016 01:20 AM
awesome make more!
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Ended up becoming famous. Nice.
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