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| 29 May 2013 08:39 PM |
Theflame1234( Spad3s ): Flobody's Nawless, definitely no trying the Society, These adult spitters writing mindlessly. It's the childs' brains their rewir-ing. Now to speak, there's posers far as eyes can see. They're playing a game o' hide n' seek, it's kinda weak. It's gonna take more than third-eye to silence me. It's the same kinda speech, metaphorically take a look outside the blinds and peek. The fighting ceased, i'm final-ly near the highest peak. These fakes are trying me, sleepin' on me. When i'm bout as loud as sirens, We, Anthemic are the team, and have the right to speak.
Hook: The Diverse University, the words and courtesy fuel the objective to work the streets. You've seen the scenes and already heard the hurt that is current we, Anthemic, don't follow but you can infer what we're blurtin'.
Altar30( Radical ): The more we hear something, the more we believe, A political tool used and conceived, By the anonymous boards that we so dearly "need", And yes it is in quotes on purpose, The only purpose of farming us is our money cause our lives are worthless, We're considered an act , a star in the fun sized circus, But if you can't squeeze a buck from your talent then it's of no benefit, Prioritize those that snap and sneak in to have your neck slit, The same is done elsewhere but censored by fundamentalist, Robbed and no job so crimes the only you can commit, Why? Why not blame the system? Breathe in the vapes and feel the rhythm, Funny gummies making you revision, But in your head your seeing things of another dimension. Its a decent escape, That is until your off and really feel the weight, By then it is too late, And they see some treatment is enough to make you feel alright, But you spend all night spending the dollar on that friend, So that you can overdose and never have to feel it again....
Theflame1234( Spad3s ): Dope, I hope the we can live in prosperity, never near the heir to all these crazy conspiracies, You hearin' me, these other rappers don't really care to speak, about anything but money, drugs, and what mainstreams endeared in, A truthful rapper showed up and thankfully they spared him, never change for someone that hates me, don't care then. I'm careless, there's nothing more here but fear faced Chairmen. I distance myself from all their drama, so i'm nowhere near it. |
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| 29 May 2013 08:43 PM |
| Thanks man! Appreciate it. |
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| 29 May 2013 09:11 PM |
It's not a 'hook' if it's only said once but this was kinda cute 7/10 |
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| 29 May 2013 09:19 PM |
| Someone is getting some girls from this amazing song. :3 |
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| 29 May 2013 09:41 PM |
| Cute? Let me not say anything. . |
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| 29 May 2013 09:43 PM |
| Oh forget it, this song was about Society and children blindly following rappers trends, and being original or diverse in the face of unoriginality. I find nothing "cute." about that. I'd rather this song be complete garbage than "cute." |
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| 29 May 2013 10:03 PM |
Amazing lyrics,it sounds like it came straight from the brain and the soul,keep doing what you do,it's great.
10/10 |
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altar30
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| 29 May 2013 10:41 PM |
| lol I had a feeling you'd say that xD |
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| 29 May 2013 10:42 PM |
| Lol, to be honest I don't really care for ducky's opinion. No offense, i'm just saying. |
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| 29 May 2013 10:43 PM |
| Well tbh I don't think you have any talent as a rapper, you can't line up syllables or even come up with creative lyrics. |
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| 29 May 2013 10:44 PM |
| Okay? How do you suggest I improve other than ranting because I gave you my opinion? |
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| 29 May 2013 10:46 PM |
| I dislike ducky. He dislikes good songs (Reason why I dislike him.) |
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| 29 May 2013 10:49 PM |
| Yeah, and this song wasn't necessarily meant to be creative, it was centered around informing more or less. |
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| 29 May 2013 10:52 PM |
| Yeah, my lyrics aren't supposed to be 'good'. Just wrote to speak to your heart. |
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| 29 May 2013 10:55 PM |
"I dislike ducky. He dislikes good songs (Reason why I dislike him.)"
I've helped so many people by telling them when they suck and how they should get better. Jordan used to suck before I got to him and most of the people who were biggest in the history in MT have taken my advice.
"improve"
1. Sing something that YOU can get with, because if you even try to tell me you feel this you'll just be a phony.
2. Sing something that looks good or is appropriate for your age, not the rappers you like.
3. Try lining up syllables, barely anyone does this. But it makes the song so much better. Like if the first two lines count are 8 and 10, the next two should be 8 and 10. Not doing this isn't called diversity it's called lacking the ability to write music.
4. Don't try singing something so 'unique' because it just makes you run out of ideas as fast as toddlers on stz. I prefer if you go more mainstream, it'll do you good.
5. Try using word play.
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| 29 May 2013 11:01 PM |
| Thank you. That's all I wanted, some constructive criticism not " You suck. Don't make music anymore. " |
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| 30 May 2013 12:51 PM |
This song deserves the nomination for best duo instead of me and Sak's "So Crazy"
Thx for the feedback Ducky and others. |
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