ChanelG
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| 27 May 2013 03:06 PM |
Well, I'm practicing this on a guitar, and I'll be posting this on sound cloud whenever possible. Until then, I hope you like this song, and please rate so I can get better! Thank you! :] ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [Verse I]
Whenever you're not with me I feel somewhat empty Sorry for all the love I took for granted And all the bitter things I chanted But at the end of the day I knew we'd be okay
And I pray, and pray That I'll see you again someday I'm counting all the days goin by But you're the only thing on my mind...
[Chorus] Every time I close my eyes ( I'm thinking of you ) Every time I see a sun rise ( I'm thinking of you ) Every time I see this empty spot next to me... I'm thinking of you.
[Verse II]
I know when girls are sad sometimes they eat ice cream But how can I? When it reminds me of your smile that used to gleam... We would share it together and talk about plans about 'us' forever But now we can't anymore Because the only thing here with me are the tears on the floor
And I pray, and pray That I'll see you again someday I'm counting all the days goin by But you're the only thing on my mind...
[Chorus]
When you were with me It felt like my heart could fly But now all I can do is ask "Why?" And say "I never got a goodbye..."
[Chorus] Every time I close my eyes ( I'm thinking of you ) Every time I see a sun rise ( I'm thinking of you ) Every time I see this empty spot next to me... I'm thinking of you.
Every time I close my eyes... Every time I see a sun rise... Every time I see this empty spot next to me... ....I'm thinking of you.
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johnb
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| 27 May 2013 03:08 PM |
@johnb xD
@Chanel OMG I LOVE THIS :D 10/10!
You know, I can kinda see Taylor Swift singing this for some reason.... Or Carrie Underwood.... either one. Just some female country signer xD. |
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ChanelG
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| 27 May 2013 03:58 PM |
Thank you :D
And cmon now ppl, over 100+ (thank yu! x3) views and only 2 replies? D: I need feedback! HONEST feedback pls!
Thanks! ^3^ |
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johnb
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| 27 May 2013 04:01 PM |
| What can I say? It's MEDi all around, big ups. |
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| 27 May 2013 04:24 PM |
This is hilarious, I can imagine this as some cheesy pop song from the 90's.
Also how can you write a song about something you've never felt, cuz I really doubt you've ever felt this before |
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ChanelG
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| 27 May 2013 04:28 PM |
Lol you can see as whatever you like! ^-^
Have you :o? I mean I haven't, but I've felt something close to it before. |
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| 27 May 2013 04:33 PM |
No offense of course, it's just how I see it. And no I have never felt it before, I'm too young.
And by the way, for what your song is, you've got talent. |
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iwantpsp
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| 27 May 2013 04:34 PM |
Yo,chanel. Why did you leave Aftermath? And nice song. |
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ChanelG
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| 27 May 2013 04:37 PM |
I didn't want to, but I had so many people on my case sayin "you won't be taken seriously" or "fail move", etc. I don't know what the big problem is, but yeah.
And thank you! :D |
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johnb
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| 27 May 2013 04:44 PM |
I don't know what the big problem is, but yeah. __________ Maybe because that label is associated with IwantPSP? |
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ChanelG
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| 27 May 2013 04:48 PM |
| Why does everybody hate iwantpsp so much? He's a cool guy to know T3T. |
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ChanelG
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| 27 May 2013 06:03 PM |
| Awell. So how's everybody doin? Lol |
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johnb
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| 27 May 2013 06:05 PM |
| I'd be doin a whole lot better if I had you |
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PenBlade
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| 27 May 2013 06:06 PM |
Wow, actually not bad. You surprised me. Good job.
7/10. |
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PenBlade
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| 27 May 2013 06:07 PM |
| John, you shouldn't rush these things. Lol. |
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ChanelG
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ChanelG
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