hax
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| 25 May 2013 12:22 PM |
Yeah that's right, your grammar hurt my insides so bad I'm correcting it.
I saw this interesting game. It looked like it was copied. I played it, not recognizing anything, I saw red glowing eyes. I also saw a mouth shape moving with a speech bubble saying, "Help me...Please I'll do anything just help me little girl" I said, with a normal voice, "Weird game..."I walked on waiting for a pop up like the usual, but it never happened. I kept walking not noticing a person named, I'mwaitingforyou, I said, "Fake..."The person came to me, knocking me down, stepping on my arms and legs, and making them fall off. I felt a pain in my arms in real life, and logged off my laptop. I walked downstairs, with blood all over the place, I gasped, dropping to the ground near my mother with her stomach ripped open. She was missing her organs, I looked over to the dead cats, still bawling my eyes out, the cats had their heads slashed open, and they were hanging by a thread. My father was hanging outside the front door, and I saw a broken window with blood footprints leading to it. I heard the cops and opened the door still crying.They put handcuffs on me and put me in their car. They took off the costumes. One jumped in the back, ripping open my stomach, and pouring lemonaid in the opening. I bled to death dying slowly.
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hax
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| 25 May 2013 12:23 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=98145688#98763815
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| 25 May 2013 12:24 PM |
lemonade
✞super high school level soft gunge ✞ |
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pluspower
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| 25 May 2013 12:26 PM |
| That was a real gore fest. Kind of depressing. |
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Skanea
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| 25 May 2013 12:29 PM |
| Terrible, it don't even qualify as a "story" |
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hax
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| 25 May 2013 12:30 PM |
| It's to fast paced. You don't get to delve into the suspension. |
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pluspower
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| 25 May 2013 12:34 PM |
| I thought it needed more of a story. Some sort of reason why this happened. But that's just me. A lot of creepypastas don't really have stories or explanations to things. |
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