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| 25 May 2013 01:03 AM |
I know it's horrid, but rate from 1 - 10 anyway: http://www.roblox.com/The-Kingdom-of-ROBLOX-place?id=92877654
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| 25 May 2013 01:05 AM |
Exactly what I think, MilkDud!
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| 25 May 2013 01:07 AM |
but like in all srslys
Its just a bad thumbnail lel. Looks like a wallpaper if anything, doesn't really say "This is The Kingdom of ROBLOX".
I mean nice effects n' stuff, but not fitting as a thumbnail. :-)))
And the font seems odd for a place called "The Kingdom of ROBLOX", looks more military lol, maybe get some fancy text. |
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| 25 May 2013 01:08 AM |
Ooh, good idea, I like that thought of fancy text. I guess I'll try that.
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| 25 May 2013 01:40 AM |
The new one is pending, I modified it according to MilkDud's revisions. The old one was very bad.
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| 25 May 2013 01:50 AM |
Hence why I said "The new one is pending, I modified it according to MilkDud's revisions. The old one was very bad."
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| 25 May 2013 07:30 AM |
There, it's out of Pending.
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| 25 May 2013 07:33 AM |
@Dman: So it looks good? :D I revised it, so perhaps my changes payed off.
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| 25 May 2013 07:35 AM |
| I'd give it an 8.5 out of 10. Nice effects, though if anything it looks more like a wallpaper than a thumbnail. |
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| 25 May 2013 07:36 AM |
Oh, Awesome, that's only for the WIP stage. I'll make a nicer thumbnail when it's done.
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| 25 May 2013 07:38 AM |
i guess its good
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| 25 May 2013 07:41 AM |
Yeah, that's what I thought - mixed. It's only for a few months, then I can make one that is seriously better.
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| 25 May 2013 07:47 AM |
8.4/10
not bad, but I wouldn't put crowns, rather I'd stage a few pics with studio behind a green screen place, and finally replace the background.
if you want, I can replace background for you. |
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| 25 May 2013 07:54 AM |
I'll be adding effects to some sort of snapshot from the game later on. But because so little is complete, I decided to use crowns.
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| 25 May 2013 07:57 AM |
| It'd be nice if it wasn't filled with Ctrl +C's |
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| 25 May 2013 08:02 AM |
Holy mother of telamon, I give it a 9.5/10. Make me one! |
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| 25 May 2013 08:12 AM |
Not bad. The font is pretty good. But I'd put the text together in the center, they look separated. I'd make the word "the" and "of" smaller, looks better that way.
Since your place is still in progress, I would guess that you can't get a good shot of the kingdom. Add that photo behind the text, then add a fade-in overlay on top. Would look better if you use that instead of the current black bubble gradient background.
These are just my opinion, it's your thumbnail after all. Keep it up! |
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