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| 11 May 2013 12:39 PM |
Glad to have brought out Pen for at least one more song. Hope yall enjoy it. ___________________________________________________________ Hook: PenBlade I know some folk who'd break their neck, and not for a check. I know some folk who'd break their neck, and not for respect. I know some folk who'd break their neck, and not for their pride. They'd break their neck for attention, lemme show you why.
V1: Jester One thing about attention: it's a delicate thing, So be mindful of the problems that attention can bring. It'll tear between brothers, like a surgical knife, "What's so special bout him? Why he in the limelight?" And the females begin to fight, that's why they rarely be hangin', Too many dudes holler at one, the rest of em all hatin', Now they all talkin' about each other behind each other back, "That's why I don't like that trick, she think she all that." Oh yeah, and it'll make you a target if you ain't cautious, That new whip just put your head on the market, soon as you bought it, The big, shiny rims? Yeah, they gon' cause a problem. "Oh, somebody came up now." I know you hear em plottin'. See, Pippen was the ultimate teammate, so I applaud him. Cuz he knew he was a star, but he knew he wasn't Jordan. And I know some nights he felt over-shadowed at the top, He dropped 36 but, "MJ just hit the winning shot!" Heard a whisper in his ear sayin' that he should leave, But he played his role for the greater good of the team. Everybody eatin', that's how it's supposed to go, But once you start to measure your plate next to his, Then it's over fo'.
Hook: PenBlade I know some folk who'd break their neck, and not for a check. I know some folk who'd break their neck, and not for respect. I know some folk who'd break their neck, and not for their pride. They'd break their neck for attention, lemme show you why.
V2: (Pen) When I bring this gun to school, I bet ya that get some attention. The teacher won't forget my name then, No sir! And all the kids who made fun of me? The bullies that were punchin' me? I bet they all run from me! Yup, I'm so sure. (Jester) When I join this gang, I bet ya that get some attention. They'd see me in the streets and they'd respect my mind. Cuz my kind? We the baddest, everybody know what's happenin'. If you reppin' the wrong color, don't cross that line. (Pen) Now I'm locked up for life because of murder, And I'm stressed. (Jester) Someone killed me for my shoes, I guess I'm fresh to death. (Both) But I got the attention that I wanted nevertheless.
Hook: PenBlade I know some folk who'd break their neck, and not for a check. I know some folk who'd break their neck, and not for respect. I know some folk who'd break their neck, and not for their pride. They'd break their neck for attention, lemme show you why.
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m9bob
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| 11 May 2013 05:26 PM |
PenBlade was epic and Young, Some of your lyrics were hard to understand but nevertheless
9/10
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altar30
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| 11 May 2013 05:40 PM |
| Saying "I like the hook" is like a basketball player saying how comfortable a shoe is. Really he means that the shoe is ugly and, because he doesn't want to piss of any parties, he tries to find some redeemable quality for it. Exactly what you're doing, Altar. This rap sucked, all ro raps are inherently bad. |
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| 11 May 2013 06:26 PM |
| Yo, great logic. Thanks yall. |
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| 11 May 2013 06:45 PM |
| Go and record something, this is counter productive. |
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sputspik
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altar30
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| 11 May 2013 07:39 PM |
@Prideofservia,
Id give the song a 7/10 which is higher than average. I was simply stating i liked the hook, never once did i say i didnt like the song nor expressed any sense of discomfort towards this well written wall of text |
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| 11 May 2013 08:40 PM |
| Thanks Altar. And for the record, I do record. See what I did there? |
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sputspik
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| 11 May 2013 08:43 PM |
| Post those links, colored brother. |
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| 12 May 2013 09:25 PM |
| I will. Just sayin though, everyone is colored. One color or another. |
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lila47
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| 13 May 2013 04:51 PM |
| You insulted America in many ways son |
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iwantpsp
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| 13 May 2013 05:11 PM |
| This is pretty disrespectful to America... |
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| 14 May 2013 06:26 PM |
| This is not disrespectful to America in any way whatsoever and that made absolutely no sense. Cuz of the gun thing? I can explain that, but I doubt it'd even get through that thick skull of yours. |
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| 15 May 2013 04:58 PM |
| I still dont see the disrespect to USA..... |
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iwantpsp
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| 15 May 2013 05:03 PM |
Because of the gun thing.And newtown...Must I go on? I get it,But I still would have cut that line out if it was my song |
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| 17 May 2013 12:07 PM |
Argh...No, you don't get it.
We're not talkin about Newtown exactly. We're basically trying to show you that some of these people will do what happened at Newton for one thing: Attention. If you looked at the last few lines closely, you would see that.
"Now I'm locked up for murder." "Someone killed me for my shoes."
We're showing what happens when people do these things. They want attention so much that they will do these crazy, violent things. But in the end, they see what they've done and they realize they're all screwed up etc. etc. |
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iwantpsp
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| 17 May 2013 04:23 PM |
| I knew that.It just sounded like you were talking about newtown.But yea this song is OK.youngjester did the best on here. |
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| 20 May 2013 05:18 PM |
| Thanks, but I wasn't referring to that, tragic as it was. |
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