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| 19 May 2013 03:46 AM |
Krypka crouched behind a collapsed wall, gripping her weapon tightly. She took a chance and peered around her cover. They were still there, two human soldiers, standing alone in the dark, crater filled streets, filled with mixes of water and liquefied rougetonium, giving the water a dull, eery red glow. Shattered glass and a few bodies lay along the sidewalks, pushed aside by human cleanup crews. She looked to where Raze was hiding just 10 feet from her, his back against a shop wall, it's once happy feel now a ghostly reminder of the brutality of war. His rifle was held at the ready. The pair had been hiding for a good twenty minutes waiting for the humans to walk away, not wanting to bring any attention to their position. Krypka listened in on their chatter.
"Damn aliens, they won't stop until they own the entire damned outer rim, won't they?" One of the humans said.
"You think they will stop there? You know Nafarians as much as I. Warmongers. Bloodthirsy warmongers who kill and kill and kill, and for what purpose? To bring greater peace to the galaxy? I'll be damned if their lying buffoon of a leader ever achieves his goal."
Krypka stopped for a minute to mull over what this human had said. He was entirely right in all senses. Her nation was a lie, she knew that already, but the question that has plagued and destroyed her once innocent and friendly mind was that of why she served such a government when she knew the truth. She snapped out of it as Raze motioned frantically, trying to get her attention. His rifle was slug across his back and he had drawn a small knife and was motioning to kill the two humans. Krypk slung her rifle over her back and fumbled with her knife, her arms shaking a bit. Krypka nodded twice and began to emerge from her cover, stepping out into the black streets, Raze close behind.
The two humans continued to babble on about their past family lives before the invasion as they approached. Krypka held her knife in front of her, ready to make her kill. Raze met his target slightly before Krypka, making a slicing motion across the humans neck, the human began to gurgle as he went down, blood frothing from his mouth and the neck wound. His companion, not yet killed by Krypka, screamed and began the shoot a few rounds off at Raze, missing his target in his shock. Krypka cursed under her breath and tackled the human, and plunged the knife into his chest. His limbs jumped a few times before he too died, but silence did not befall them after he died, as a patrol chopper quickly swooped in between the dreary grey buildings that lined the streets, opening fire as it went.
"RUN!" Krypka yelled frantically, as she jumped off of the dead human's body and began to dash quickly to her left, down a side street.
The chopper was quickly joined by a second chopper as it began to chase Krypka down the dark, damp side street, Krypka took a split second to look behind her and saw Raze running in the opposite direction, being chased by the second chopper.
"Damnit Raze! This way!" Krypka shouted, slowing down slightly, only to be forced to return to sprinting after the chopper released a burst of fifty cal fire from it's chin, the shots bouncing off of her red armor and hitting the ground, shooting dirt and asphault in all directions as they hit.
Raze payed no attention to her order and continued running in the opposite direction, with the chopper right behind him, swerving in the air. Krypka cursed under her breath and took a quick look at her surroundings as she ran down the dark streets, passing crumbling, dark buildings as she went, looking for an alleyway to loose the pursuing chopper. She was pushed forward as another round of fifty cal fire slammed into her back, her armor barely holding up against the rounds.
Krypka cursed under her breath, knowing her armor would not be able to take another round of fire from the chopper. She listened intently for the chopper to begin firing again as she sprinted down the street, ready to dodge. After another minute of running down the dark streets, Krypka finally found her out, a dark alley way to her right. She quickly approached it and sprinted into the alley, barely dodging another round of chopper fire. She stopped for a moment, panting and looked into the dark sky, as the chopper passed overhead. Krypka slowly slunk to the ground as a bead of sweat rolled down her face, a feeling of desperation and hopelessness soon overwhelmed her and she buried her face between her knees, sobbing silently. She had no idea where Raze was nor whether or not he was alive or dead, and she knew that she could not complete the task on her own.
It was a good ten minutes before she pulled herself together, and she slowly rose from the dark alley way, taking out her sidearm as she went, she knew where Raze would be headed, and slowly began to pickup the pace as she ran down the dark alley, jumping over corpses of fallen soldiers and rubble from collapsed buildings. She finally exited the alleys and once more found herself on the main road, the tower with their first target looming closer in the distance. Choppers slowly patrolled the area, search lights on, hunting them. -------------------- 3214 GST Nafarian city of Ven'Ziel 8 years before the Auchyut event.
"So, father, what should I do, hypothetically of course." A young, conflicted Krypka asked her father, her red eyes looking into his.
"Report them, anyone who talks these lies and incites rebellion should be killed, no matter their age. Kenzmon replied. "You are sure this is all hypothetical and you really haven't confronted such a person, right?"
Krypka began to rub her arm nervously, her eyes narrowed, looking down towards the beige carpet that covered the floor of the room which they were speaking in. The room was bare save for a black bookshelf against the wall and a desk at the far corner. Larger, red windows overlooked the city, painting the entire city red.
"Yes father, of course." She said as she looked up from the ground and pushed a lock of jet black hair from her face.
"Good, good." Kenzmon mused as he brought his hand to his cleanly shaven face, rubbing it.
"Father, one last thing." Krypka said stepping nervously towards the desk.
"Yes, what is it?" Kenzmon asked
"Why do we declare war so constantly on these planets? Don't we claim to be advocators of peace?"
"You are filled with such deep questions, aren't you little one?" He said, a tone of amusement rising in his voice. "What brings you to ask such questions?"
"Curiosity, that is all father." Krypka said.
"Very well, I will answer your question, but let this be the last one, I have much work to do today and must meet with Ven'Ziel later on about what to do about these damned tourists who waltz their way into the palace these days, but yes, to your question, my dear, we do this for the greater good, most of these planets we attack are human ran, and humans my dearest are a bloody race. But, shall we conquer these worlds, give these races one flag to fight under and good Nafarian ideals, we will plunge the galaxy into an age of greater peace!" Kenzmon explained, his voice rising as he went.
"I see" Krypka said, a feeling of dread and disbelief filing her, "Jack said you would say that" Krypka thought to herself. And the more she pondered what her father said, the more she realized that Jack was correct, in all senses.
"I will be leaving now, father." She said, stepping back towards the black door behind her slowly.
"Yes my dear, remember, for greater peace, there must first be bloody war."
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| 19 May 2013 03:47 AM |
Kenzmon=Lord Pain.(I am lord pain)
☢↭♋⇏☣↭☠ I'm being paid to post on here. Shut up. ♋↭☢⇍☣↭☠ |
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| 19 May 2013 03:49 AM |
| Yeah I'll fix it in the revisions but I need to keep consistant with old chapters. |
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| 19 May 2013 04:14 AM |
| I am not going to read all of that |
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| 19 May 2013 04:14 AM |
oh hey more people dislike your stories
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| 19 May 2013 04:14 AM |
| Nice story Rom! Also, I made a mistake and unfriended you when I cleared a bit of my friend's list. Accept my FR. |
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| 19 May 2013 04:15 AM |
lol no, I actually do have a good ammount of people who like me stories, cyb just dosen't want to read.
Evil did read and enjoy, I have him on my skype.
Now godbye, thanks for the bump. |
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| 19 May 2013 04:16 AM |
| Thanks nick, chapter 9 is coming the following week. And will do. |
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| 19 May 2013 04:17 AM |
so your friends enjoy it only
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| 19 May 2013 04:20 AM |
| Well, no, I just met nick last night after he read one of my works and I, his. Inysa does read my chapters as well and provides good criticism on them which makes me a better writer in general, but again, thank you for the bumps. |
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| 19 May 2013 04:20 AM |
my bumps don't help when it's on the first page
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| 19 May 2013 04:21 AM |
| fine i will read part of it qq |
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| 19 May 2013 04:23 AM |
| Thanks, I have been told I need to continue working on that. |
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| 19 May 2013 04:34 AM |
| I could actually see a book like that come out in RL has detail and good story line |
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| 19 May 2013 04:35 AM |
| Thanks, I take it you read the rest? |
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| 19 May 2013 10:28 AM |
Fantastische Geschichte
~[One does not simply become dangerously stupid like me]~ |
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