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Re: *[VAK]* NEW STORY :SNEAK PEEK:

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spongipuffle is not online. spongipuffle
Joined: 13 May 2010
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14 May 2013 10:37 PM
The rsmithnvm series are back!

This will be the story of Arvak Xevanet Cobar (Javier) this story will be on Arvak's point of view. (I changed the name for several reasons.)

Arvak's story is in 3 books..
First will be Frostrarian, second one of the Cobras and Frost Clan war, and third.. classified..

In this story I'll give the chance of people to choose several things, like who should die, who should be spared, etc. I will use decals, the most taken will be chosen..


This story will be long and the fans of the rsmithnvm series will love it..

My journey of Vaktovia is full of traitors, murderers, and surprises.. Well, my story is pretty damn long, so let's begin.

Here's an sneak peek from the beginning..



"Greetings, I'm Arvak Xevanet Cobar..

I'm immortal of age, I was born with a sister and a brother.. My sister and I were almost the same age her name was Jade, my brother he was older than me, his name was Castellian, I didn't get to know him much.. All of us, have powers.. different powers. I have the power to do things with my eyes, that I still don't know.. Jade, had powers to throw things from her hands and fly.. and my brother.. well, he didn't have that much of good powers.. he just could take some bullet shots without being hurt.. my mother told me he called him "Brickster" as he was hard as a brick.

My sister and I became very good "friends", Castellian was in the Vaktovian Army.. So, I didn't get to know him that much..

I had a very peaceful life, my mother told us to use our power for good, if we don't use them as we should we will get out of control and loose our true soul.. Our powers were the most dangerous things for us.. and our powers we all had were age immortality and see the future..

My sister and I grew together and one day we were going to the Vaktovian Army, We did pretty well in Cadets, graduated in 6 months both of us.

We both earned the rank of Sergeant while years passed.. Castellian was a Vaktovian Captain, still, I didn't talk with him that much, he was like a stranger, my mother said he always wanted to own an empire, be a leader.. his Vaktovian Career was going pretty well.

Well, one of our days, we patrolled a Vaktovian base that had 4 floors, it was a big tower, it was in a Swamp, we call it "Outpost Pyro" or "Swampy Moon Outpost".

We were in the third floor, we call it "Hangar" it had a sniping place, pretty dangerous, you needed to be experienced to snipe there because you could fall easilly..

We stayed away from danger, I always protected my sister.. It was a normal one.. but, that day.. that day, I can't forget, I'm still sad and angry for it...

I was patrolling with her the hangar.. She said "Hey Arvak.." "Yes?" I replied "Do you know when the Attack will be..?" she asked "I don't really know.." I replied.

I suddenly heard a BIG explosion.

"What the hell?!?!" I yelled "Look!" she said, she was pointing at the sniping post where we could see the swamp clearly.. Our eyes looked like shiny bowling balls..
"THEY'RE SHIPS" I yelled. Suddenly I heard an alarm.. That alarm hasn't been in years, the outpost was taking heavy fire.. and there was a huge computer that we call it "Terminal" and it said.. "SWAMPY TAKING HEAVY FIRE. HOSTILES INFILTRATING BASE. DEFENCES DECREASING."

"We need to do something!" she said "Hide, in the Vaktovian room, it's the most secure place in here, I will fight off the raider scum, and will find out who they are." I replied. "Arvak.. don't.." she said.. "It's the only way.. if I die, you will use my immortality to make yours stronger and fight those raiders off.. Understood?" I said.

"But- ah- god.. understood.." She said. I could see her scared nervous face, she was scared of this, because this hasn't happened in Centuaries.. "Good." I said.. "Remember, Vaktovians are NOT afraid of anything." She went to the Vaktovian room running, I pulled out my Assault Rifle and I was going to my way to the elevator.. I opened the door.. and there was a huge thin guy with complete white skin his uniform was black.. his face was creepy and funny at the same time. He yelled "SURPRISE, VAKKIE!" he had a bazooka, luckily he was meters away from me, I started running as fast as I could..

He tried to shoot me, he shot the floor, he didn't hit me, but the force of the explosion was strong enough to make me fly and hit the wall strongly with my head.. I felt a lot of pain, like if I was hit with a bat with spikes in my face.. I faced the floor that was few centimeters away from me.. I felt like if I was falling slowly and in my mind I said.. "This is the end.." when I hit the floor I didn't feel anything.. Simply my vision turned red.. and Blood was falling off me, I couldn't move, I was just facing the Vaktovian door, blood coming out like a slow fountain.. and I saw the people coming to the Vaktovian room... the guy that shot me came to me and said in my face.. "There will be blood, Vaktovian." and walked away he probably thought that I was dead at that moment.. I didn't know if I was or not, but the only thing that mattered at that moment was Jade..

I tried to shout to Jade to escape.. but, I couldn't move, I was in the ground.. just facing the Vaktovian door with my odd red vision.

I saw them taking my sister, a guy was grabbing her like if she was a dead animal.. I looked at her.. I couldn't forget that face, I just couldn't, she was crying facing me screaming and yelling "ARVAK! WHAT DID THEY DO TO YOU!? HELP ME ARVAK HELP ME, HELP M-"

I couldn't hear anything.. or see, It was just like if I was asleep.. I had a nightmare just after that.. I saw my sister coming to me.. "Why didn't you help me Arvak?" she said.. "I.. just.. couldn't-" I said.. She randomly started screaming and yelling "ARVAK.. ARVAK! HELP ME! HELP ME!" I was scared.. it was creepy..

I suddenly woke up in a medical machine.. I knew that cause I saw that before, it just looked different, it seemed like I was in the future, I had like a black mask that was in a form of a "Y" probably for the Vaktovian Symbol. I was in the medical machine filled with water, and there was a person with a white vest with a notebook, he looked like he was surprised to see me awake.. he pressed a button.The water went decreasing slowly, and I could breathe normally, my vision was normal.. and I took off my black mask in my mouth.. the door opened..

I asked "Where's my siste-?" I asked. "Excuse me, sir, what is your name?" he asked interrupting me. "Arvak Xevanet Cobar." I said.. he started typing my name in a computer "Arvak.. Xeva-" he stopped.. "'Arvak Xeva' what 'Cobar'?" he asked "Arvak Xevanet Cobar, X E V-" "Arvak Xevanet Cobar, correct?" he interrupted me again.. "Yes.." this was getting kind of frustrating now.. he clicked the search bar and my name was found instantly.. he was surprised.. he looked at me slowly.. "I- do-don't.. think your sister is alive.." he said "What do you mean?" I asked.

"You've been in a coma for 100 years.."

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COMING SUMMER 2013
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Vorktu is not online. Vorktu
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14 May 2013 10:41 PM
First
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wraith730 is not online. wraith730
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14 May 2013 10:43 PM
Centuries*
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Pirateboy303 is not online. Pirateboy303
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14 May 2013 10:44 PM
El Bueno.
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spongipuffle is not online. spongipuffle
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14 May 2013 10:46 PM
Oh, thanks wraith, sorry, it's pretty late right now, I will make my corrections in the complete chapter, anyways Castellian being included in the story will make sense later.
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Vecrow is not online. Vecrow
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14 May 2013 10:46 PM
Pretty good..?

I wish there was a movie.
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DominusRobloxia is not online. DominusRobloxia
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14 May 2013 10:50 PM
Dun dun dun... Interesting yet adventurous.

-{===>DR<===}-
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GabrielTroissoixante is not online. GabrielTroissoixante
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14 May 2013 11:01 PM
Looks awesome so far.

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gpatton99 is not online. gpatton99
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14 May 2013 11:02 PM
Absolutely horrible, tell me more.
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hunter7777 is not online. hunter7777
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14 May 2013 11:15 PM
I support this sort of imaginative writing. I hope you come to refine your creative talents and I look forward to reading the full story later. Good work, sir.
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jorgegzz6 is not online. jorgegzz6
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14 May 2013 11:16 PM
WOW!
Excelent history i like it!
I wan't more historys
Very nice you are very excelent writer
Very sadly for your sister..
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spongipuffle is not online. spongipuffle
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14 May 2013 11:49 PM
Bump!
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Siprox is not online. Siprox
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15 May 2013 12:36 AM
Wonderful story! Just wonderful!

-Siprox
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Stormyyy is not online. Stormyyy
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15 May 2013 12:37 AM
It's great, now continue please.

-Corporal Alexandra Syndicate of the Vaktovian Empire
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Rangerwield is not online. Rangerwield
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15 May 2013 12:39 AM
Very well made.
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iAnimus is not online. iAnimus
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15 May 2013 12:40 AM
Horrible, I hated it, this should be burned with fire

I love it, tell me more, SELL IT TO THE PUBLIC
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unbearablepain is not online. unbearablepain
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15 May 2013 12:42 AM
I was excited,
Then I saw it was coming out in the summer,
I don't get on Roblox much in the summer.

~Black the beast descends from shadows.~
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bloopy66 is not online. bloopy66
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15 May 2013 01:57 AM
Incredible work sir, cannot wait for more.
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spongipuffle is not online. spongipuffle
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15 May 2013 12:16 PM
Thanks!
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uncoverloser is not online. uncoverloser
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15 May 2013 12:19 PM
Not, bad keep it going.





~ "Bless the mind too small for doubt." ~
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permanentmintpie20 is not online. permanentmintpie20
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15 May 2013 12:20 PM
I demand more.
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klkljr is not online. klkljr
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15 May 2013 12:20 PM
I used to read those...

Back in my vakie days.
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Aiero is not online. Aiero
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15 May 2013 12:21 PM
so many elipses
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theteacher7 is not online. theteacher7
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15 May 2013 12:21 PM
Gpatton be butthurt.

[{King of the meatshields}{TPF Marshal}{You've gotta roll with it, you gotta take your time}]
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gh98765 is not online. gh98765
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15 May 2013 12:22 PM
That was a sneak peak?

Long story is long.

Nice though Spongi.

¤ General Ganex, of the Vaktovian Empire ¤
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