XC64
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| 21 May 2013 07:03 PM |
Seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee how much i care
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ori
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| 21 May 2013 07:04 PM |
u have korean famiry? Dad: You bring shame on household. You no son of mine. You call me sensei now. |
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00iGame00
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| 21 May 2013 07:04 PM |
lolwut
ƊƖƊ Ɩ ΣƔΣƦ ƬΣԼԼ ƳФƲ ƬӇΣ ƊΣƑƖƝƬƖФƝ ФҒ ƖƝϟƛƝƖƬƳ? |
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| 21 May 2013 07:04 PM |
amazing writer
i stopped caring a long time ago |
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| 21 May 2013 07:04 PM |
Nice writing skills. Assuming this was a story. |
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banikus
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| 21 May 2013 07:04 PM |
10/10
THE OFFICIAL RT-OT MESSENGER http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uNgSVAhYdMA |
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XC64
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multrimax
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| 21 May 2013 07:05 PM |
| so its a story of a dad who wants his son to like other men i suppose |
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| 21 May 2013 07:06 PM |
| A bit of mistakes, but in grammar subjects, and I'm assuming you didn't really try your best to fix that, but the actually writing, thumbs up. |
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windbag27
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| 21 May 2013 07:07 PM |
gud job on writing
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| 21 May 2013 07:07 PM |
I would read this again, in fact, I have.
10/10
Bravo! |
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LegoTate
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whitetye
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| 21 May 2013 07:13 PM |
Wow! I could envision this perfectly in my mind. Great writing! This is a talent that you have. You use more description that most authors do. Have you ever heard of Gary Soto? He is a semi-famous author, but his writing is uncomparable to yours. Great job! |
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donuteer
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| 21 May 2013 07:17 PM |
i suddenly want to make a story of my own now
yes, what donuteer said
★★★★★ |
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| 21 May 2013 07:19 PM |
is u guys stupid
this was taken off reddit stupid noobs he didnt make et
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| 21 May 2013 07:19 PM |
chuck how would i kno ;c and where |
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