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| 17 May 2013 11:08 PM |
| There was a scientist who had collected 6 spirits so far, when he comes out, there was no people in the streets the house and the vehicles were smoking.he comes out and he saw a "fat" giant spirit called "Phantom" and suddenly there was a missile straight threw the Phantom's Head. then there was a Helicopter landing to get him out here. once they landed the scientist asked "Who are you?" and a soldier replied "Lieutenant Steve." then they are flying they saw so many Phantoms. invisible. and later the scientist tracked the spirit, the seventh spirit, the scientist asked them to land. they are landing but the phantom killed one of their men. by touching to remove his life. a scientist later tracked and saw the plant. the plant is the seventh spirit, then He realized that everything has spirits, Animals, Humans, Even the earth, the seventh spirit contains the wave. that can kill phantoms, all they need is to go to the earth's spirit called "Gaia" once they reach there they climbed, and the land exploded, they discovered it was the "Phantom Crater" they are very close to "Gaia" they are in the rock near gaia, now scientist has the wave, then they need one to be sacrificed, one soldier wants to go, named "Sergeant Michael" and while the scientist holds the hand of the sergeant, the scientist still holding the hand and the seargent touched the phantom, then the wave is passing to sergeant and passed to the phantom, freezing them, but sergeant had died because he sacrificed himself. while phantom is freezing to death, then the phantom are dead. The soldiers and the scientist have survived. ------End of the story.-------- |
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| 17 May 2013 11:15 PM |
| note: This is a fictional story, none of them are real. |
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HASARAS
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| 18 May 2013 12:13 AM |
| Will you PLEASE stop spamming the role-playing forum with stories, and take it over to M/TV/B! |
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| 18 May 2013 12:21 AM |
| Alright, but I don't know how. |
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HASARAS
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| 18 May 2013 12:23 AM |
| Well, it's east. All you do is go to the main forum page, click Movies/TV/Books, and hit New thread THERE instead of here. |
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| 18 May 2013 01:19 AM |
Isn't role playing for storytelling? I mean, stories are just like role plays, except it's already predetermined, and such. And besides that, M/T/B, is for discussing about movies, books, and television shows, not really submitting your own... |
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| 18 May 2013 01:32 AM |
| Last I checked, you aren't exactly discouraged to post one of your stories here. That is unless it is horribly written with horrible grammar and such. If you try and are being serious, you can post stories here. |
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| 18 May 2013 01:48 AM |
| Not my grammar, my spellings. annoying keyboard or brain. |
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| 18 May 2013 01:51 AM |
| Rangergirl, My writings are simple, idc if my grammar is bad or not. i still love to write. |
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| 18 May 2013 02:13 AM |
Well, if you intend to right a lot, you should learn how to write properly. Why? Because writing is just like talking, its a form of communication. And if you want to write stories, your going to have to make sense, and write properly. It would be weird to read a horror story, expecting to be scared, but instead, be disturbed by the typos and grammar. |
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| 18 May 2013 05:37 AM |
| Stories are completely valid here. Rest assure, you may continue posting in this thread. |
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| 18 May 2013 09:10 AM |
| O.O Um. I wasn't referring to your story. I was referring to the ones that use * (Um. Sorry I suddenly forgot what they are called) and such. They basically write like they are texting or in a game. |
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| 18 May 2013 09:48 AM |
I believe that you are referring to ISRPs.
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| 18 May 2013 10:00 AM |
No. I am referring to the people who write a story and post it but write it like they are in a game.
Jane: *runs* Bob: w8! Jane: *stops* Bob: r u k? Jane: ye |
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| 18 May 2013 10:01 AM |
| I don't think she's talking about ISRPs, maybe the bad ones though. |
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| 18 May 2013 10:02 AM |
| Oh, my apologies. ROBLOX really needs a writing section, because I thought this was strictly roleplay. My bad. |
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