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Re: need someone to look at your game design ?

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mlee23 is not online. mlee23
Joined: 27 Nov 2012
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30 Apr 2013 07:38 PM
Need someone to look at your game design? I am you man i have tested and judged many games the most popular games I have tested are:welcome to the town of robloxia,grand blox auto,raft rideing tycoon,roboxity,and call of robloxia all of them.so if you need some one to test out your game P.M. me or replie to this.all of the games that i have tested have become a major hit
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thedestroyer115 is not online. thedestroyer115
Joined: 19 Dec 2010
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30 Apr 2013 07:42 PM
Mhmm, I am sure the owner of those games personally contacted you to specifically test the game that they can test themselves.
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mlee23 is not online. mlee23
Joined: 27 Nov 2012
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30 Apr 2013 08:05 PM
y whould they test it them selves they would just say its awesome and move on
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evev3 is not online. evev3
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30 Apr 2013 08:14 PM
"why would they *TEST* it ... they'd say *IT'S AWESOME* and move..."

they're TESTING their game, not RATING their game.
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ninjasheep is not online. ninjasheep
Joined: 26 Apr 2008
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01 May 2013 07:37 AM
Yea it just seems like you went to the "famous" place and "rated" it without the owner's knowledge or consent, then you came to the conclusion that it was good, and took some credit for "helping" the creator.

That's not what a critic does, and I doubt you're that indepth about it either.

So prove us wrong, and rate my first place. Post the critique here.
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mlee23 is not online. mlee23
Joined: 27 Nov 2012
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13 May 2013 05:54 PM
it said closed fo updates so i coukdnt but i will critic someones place that commented
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ninjasheep is not online. ninjasheep
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13 May 2013 07:27 PM
You're kidding me. I asked you 12 days ago, when my first actual place (Solitarius Domum) was active. Since then I've lost my place slots and put my RPG as the only active place.
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mlee23 is not online. mlee23
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14 May 2013 08:22 PM
ok make tha game active again and ill cridict it
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ninjasheep is not online. ninjasheep
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14 May 2013 08:46 PM
Against my better judgement, I put the place active for your critique. It better be worth it.
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Guarranteed is not online. Guarranteed
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14 May 2013 08:51 PM
I'm kind of curious why people would want your critique. I could just ask a bunch of people in my Friend's List to give me unbiased opinions and tell me how bad it is if it was that bad.

On top of that, most game developers have a sense of approval for their games and a lot of us know when the game isn't to our standards.
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ninjasheep is not online. ninjasheep
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14 May 2013 09:45 PM
True, although I've found that a lot of my long past friends weren't as unbiasedly honest, so I would usually ask a third party who doesn't know me after my friends get through it.

Also, there is more to critiquing than just going to a place and saying "this passes", it's more about suggestions and a new pair of eyes looking closely at someone's work, the final "rating" is more of a way to summarize the work thus far, with considerations of the game play, map, design, playability, and how it is tied together.

At least, that's how I do my critiques. It's not uncommon for my critiques to be a lengthy essay. Just ask Shadowlego7, I practically gave him a book once.
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Guarranteed is not online. Guarranteed
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14 May 2013 09:51 PM
"book" is what it should be. Looking at this guys grammar I feel he's going to give you a nice one liner with bad spelling. Not something you want, if you want critique then just post a forum, not for someone that's looking for a job.
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GuestCapone is not online. GuestCapone
Joined: 19 Oct 2012
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15 May 2013 12:33 AM
I will criticize your place, I'm often a very harsh person when it comes to this.
But I will also offer you my honest opinion and knowledge on how to make it better.. Unless its just free models.. Then you get nothing but brutish straight to the point and sometimes painful criticism.
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mlee23 is not online. mlee23
Joined: 27 Nov 2012
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15 May 2013 08:09 PM
solitatius domum showcase is a classic game of solveing the puzzles.i solved all the puzzles,i notice that there is big details in very little things like the logs.i give this a 9 out of ten star rateing.it could be better if you would of made more levels.i personaly think that you should make a series of games like this.this game should be interviewed by roblox.but overall a great game. -mlee23
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thedestroyer115 is not online. thedestroyer115
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15 May 2013 08:17 PM
That was the worst review I ever read.
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mlee23 is not online. mlee23
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15 May 2013 08:27 PM
how that wasnt even all of it i had to hop in the shower
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thedestroyer115 is not online. thedestroyer115
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15 May 2013 08:42 PM
Worst excuse I have ever seen too.
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mlee23 is not online. mlee23
Joined: 27 Nov 2012
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15 May 2013 08:52 PM
ok now i am just thinking your a hater DONT PLAYER HATE ON ME
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GuestCapone is not online. GuestCapone
Joined: 19 Oct 2012
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16 May 2013 02:24 AM
bad review, and even worst excuse... If you want to redeem your reviewing, REWRITE it in FULL detail.

I shall give you an example, my good friend ssbdoader. He's currently building a temple, about three days ago he asked me to come by and review his place..

Lets be honest, it was bad. Horribly built, rushed and just cruddy looking.
I gave him my honest opinion, and harsh criticism saying what I didn't like, what parts then breaking the hard news and saying I didn't like about ninety percent of the place, starting with the brick walls. You couldn't tell they were meant to be brick stone, I had to look very hard to notice I wasn't staring at just one part... Then I criticize him about his terrain, wasn't anything too bad just the edges over lapping, and finally the stone floor, you can't tell there's any detail if it wasn't for the flashing bricks.

After criticizing him, I offered him my advice and knowledge in building... Such as what he could do to the brick stone walls to let the players know there IS a brick stone wall there and not just one brick for the wall, how to fix the terrain, how to fix the flashing bricks, and even a few ideas on what to do here and there.

End of example, however one/two days later I get a party from him, seeing that his place has greatly improved since my last visit, I had nothing to be harsh about nothing at all. He did a superb job on his place, I get PM/Parties from him telling me his progress and showing me his updates.

When ever you criticize someone, you should also give you opinion to that person. It helps them build their courage. Also, if the place isn't that all that good, don't use the word "good" or "nice" in a review, the person who's reading the review will just stop there and move onto the next person, instead say its "okay" and tell why it doesn't deserve the title of "nice" or a higher word.

geez, I write long forum posts at wee hours in the morning.
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