LunarEden
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| 15 May 2013 01:34 AM |
I stood at the kitchen sink, rinsing my hands of blood, what had just happened minutes ago still ringing through my mind like a church bell. Afterwards, I walked past the living room and down the hall to my bedroom. I sat in my bed, wrapping my arms around my knees, sitting and trying to forget. Just sitting in the dim light of my uncovered window. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw the shadowy figure once again. He stepped forward, centering Himself into my vision. As usual, I couldn't see His face past the shadow of his hood. He stood there, staring me down. After what seemed like an eternity, He threw down a Klondike bar.
"I hope it was worth it." He muttered in disgust, fading into the black canvas that was the shadow of the night that enveloped my room. |
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| 15 May 2013 01:37 AM |
wat would u do for a klondike bar
ekdee |
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kiddeku
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LunarEden
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| 15 May 2013 01:37 AM |
"you didnt write this :O"
I did write this. |
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| 15 May 2013 01:39 AM |
you can't call it 'decent' since it's based of your own judgement
let others commentate on it first to see whether if it's 'decent' or not
/my opinion |
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| 15 May 2013 01:40 AM |
11/10 maeks me crry evverytiem
-the chicken crossed the read to get away from you- |
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LunarEden
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| 15 May 2013 01:40 AM |
"you can't call it 'decent' since it's based of your own judgement"
I can call it decent because it's my opinion, which I have every right to. |
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kiddeku
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| 15 May 2013 01:40 AM |
| now that i read it again you're right, you added slight modifications... |
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LunarEden
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| 15 May 2013 01:41 AM |
"now that i read it again you're right, you added slight modifications..."
I didn't "modify" anything. I felt like writing something, so I did. |
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| 15 May 2013 01:42 AM |
i'm not saying that it's upright illegal or anything
i'm just trying to suggest that it's a little odd to call something that's probably a-ok "PERFECT 100% ABSOLUTE BEST" or something like that
of course, you're not doing that at all, but you're calling it decent, which in my opinion, is a somewhat fitting category, but still |
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LunarEden
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Radiopack
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| 15 May 2013 02:19 AM |
You killed a fish :O I think.
[̲̲̅̅ᶤ̲̲̅̅ᶠ̲̲̅̅ ̲̲̅̅ʸ̲̲̅̅ᵒ̲̲̅̅ᵘ̲̲̅̅'̲̲̅̅ʳ̲̲̅̅ᵉ̲̲̅̅ ̲̲̅̅ᵍ̲̲̅̅ᵒ̲̲̅̅ᶤ̲̲̅̅ᶰ̲̲̅̅ᵍ̲̲̅̅ ̲̲̅̅ᵗ̲̲̅̅ʰ̲̲̅̅ʳ̲̲̅̅ᵒ̲̲̅̅ᵘ̲̲̅̅ᵍ̲̲̅̅ʰ̲̲̅̅ ̲̲̅̅ʰ̲̲̅̅ᵉ̲̲̅̅ˡ̲̲̅̅ˡ̲̲̅̅˒̲̲̅̅ ̲̲̅̅ᵏ̲̲̅̅ᵉ̲̲̅̅ᵉ̲̲̅̅ᵖ̲̲̅̅ ̲̲̅̅ᵍ̲̲̅̅ᵒ̲̲̅̅ᶤ̲̲̅̅ᶰ̲̲̅̅ᵍ̲̲̅̅] |
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| 15 May 2013 02:20 AM |
I'm trying to work hard on writing to be an author. You need a book of yours published. |
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| 15 May 2013 02:24 AM |
I've had an odd feeling that I've seen this somewhere before.
You(?) posted it here before. |
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