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Re: I wrote a decent short story.

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LunarEden is not online. LunarEden
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15 May 2013 01:34 AM
I stood at the kitchen sink, rinsing my hands of blood, what had just happened minutes ago still ringing through my mind like a church bell. Afterwards, I walked past the living room and down the hall to my bedroom. I sat in my bed, wrapping my arms around my knees, sitting and trying to forget. Just sitting in the dim light of my uncovered window. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw the shadowy figure once again. He stepped forward, centering Himself into my vision. As usual, I couldn't see His face past the shadow of his hood. He stood there, staring me down. After what seemed like an eternity, He threw down a Klondike bar.

"I hope it was worth it." He muttered in disgust, fading into the black canvas that was the shadow of the night that enveloped my room.
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deinemutti360 is not online. deinemutti360
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15 May 2013 01:37 AM
wat would u do for a klondike bar


ekdee
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kiddeku is not online. kiddeku
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15 May 2013 01:37 AM
you didnt write this :O
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LunarEden is not online. LunarEden
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15 May 2013 01:37 AM
"you didnt write this :O"

I did write this.
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MangoCelty is not online. MangoCelty
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15 May 2013 01:39 AM
you can't call it 'decent' since it's based of your own judgement

let others commentate on it first to see whether if it's 'decent' or not

/my opinion
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XxepicpupxX is not online. XxepicpupxX
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15 May 2013 01:40 AM
11/10 maeks me crry evverytiem




-the chicken crossed the read to get away from you-
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LunarEden is not online. LunarEden
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15 May 2013 01:40 AM
"you can't call it 'decent' since it's based of your own judgement"

I can call it decent because it's my opinion, which I have every right to.
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kiddeku is not online. kiddeku
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15 May 2013 01:40 AM
now that i read it again you're right, you added slight modifications...
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LunarEden is not online. LunarEden
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15 May 2013 01:41 AM
"now that i read it again you're right, you added slight modifications..."

I didn't "modify" anything. I felt like writing something, so I did.
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MangoCelty is not online. MangoCelty
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15 May 2013 01:42 AM
i'm not saying that it's upright illegal or anything

i'm just trying to suggest that it's a little odd to call something that's probably a-ok "PERFECT 100% ABSOLUTE BEST" or something like that

of course, you're not doing that at all, but you're calling it decent, which in my opinion, is a somewhat fitting category, but still
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brickwalker is not online. brickwalker
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15 May 2013 01:57 AM
*claps*
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LunarEden is not online. LunarEden
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15 May 2013 02:09 AM
"*claps*"

Thanks. :D
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Radiopack is not online. Radiopack
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15 May 2013 02:19 AM
You killed a fish :O
I think.

[̲̲̅̅ᶤ̲̲̅̅ᶠ̲̲̅̅ ̲̲̅̅ʸ̲̲̅̅ᵒ̲̲̅̅ᵘ̲̲̅̅'̲̲̅̅ʳ̲̲̅̅ᵉ̲̲̅̅ ̲̲̅̅ᵍ̲̲̅̅ᵒ̲̲̅̅ᶤ̲̲̅̅ᶰ̲̲̅̅ᵍ̲̲̅̅ ̲̲̅̅ᵗ̲̲̅̅ʰ̲̲̅̅ʳ̲̲̅̅ᵒ̲̲̅̅ᵘ̲̲̅̅ᵍ̲̲̅̅ʰ̲̲̅̅ ̲̲̅̅ʰ̲̲̅̅ᵉ̲̲̅̅ˡ̲̲̅̅ˡ̲̲̅̅˒̲̲̅̅ ̲̲̅̅ᵏ̲̲̅̅ᵉ̲̲̅̅ᵉ̲̲̅̅ᵖ̲̲̅̅ ̲̲̅̅ᵍ̲̲̅̅ᵒ̲̲̅̅ᶤ̲̲̅̅ᶰ̲̲̅̅ᵍ̲̲̅̅]
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EvilRedPandaa is not online. EvilRedPandaa
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15 May 2013 02:20 AM
I'm trying to work hard on writing to be an author.
You need a book of yours published.
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ProSWAGonist is not online. ProSWAGonist
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15 May 2013 02:24 AM
I've had an odd feeling that I've seen this somewhere before.

You(?) posted it here before.
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