GekkoKing
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| 09 May 2013 09:54 PM |
[[[[[ Important Notice ]]]]]] THIS IS A LONG STORY, AND THIS IS ONLY THE FIRST CHAPTER. IF YOU ENJOY READING, PLEASE TAKE A LOOK AND ENJOY THE STORY. MORE WILL FOLLOW SOON. I ASK ONLY OF YOU NOT TO POST USELESS COMMENTS SUCH AS "TL;DR" OR SOMETHING OF THE SORT. I'M NOT ASKING YOU TO POST UNLESS IT IS LITERARY CRITICISM OR COMPLIMENTS. THANK YOU, SHADOWCHAMPION.
"In the year 2017, ROBLOX corporation is at the height of its profit after recovering from its loss of value between 2015 and 2016. A new team of administrators combined with the new waves of ambition being expressed by its current players have helped make it the top online sandbox game this year! Today we're here to talk about a new game dominating the front page of games on ROBLOX's website, created by an anonymous child genius. This game apparently is supposed to feature scripting in a whole new dimension, and will most likely revolutionize ROBLOX gaming in the future. It has been in development for some time now, and, after months of leaks and sneak previews, it has finally been published today. It has already hooked thousands of players, and it is even rumored that famous ROBLOX veterans like Merely and Nooooooo are returning just to get a glimpse of the game's new features. Ladies and Gentlemen, we present Limited Q-"
shadowchampion paused the video running at the top of the ROBLOX blog. He clasped his hands together, and after taking a deep breath clicked the link featured at the bottom of the page. The games page shot up before his eyes. He searched for the new game. It wasn't hard to find it. Pressing the play button, he reached down to his side and pulled out his Screen-Link goggles. After synching them with the computer, he was truly ready to give the game a go.
In the distance, tens of thousands of featherweight parts were being loaded. The speed at which they placed themselves astonished him. Then, after a few seconds, the screen turned white and the menu GUI opened up. "Welcome to Limited Quest Online. The game will officially open up in 5 minutes. You will be spawned in the first town." A beam of light flashed up and shadowchampion found himself in the first map. Thousands of players covered the town, talking to each other, buying from merchants and forming parties for when the game started. Shadow walked around and admired the buildings around him. The amount of detail was spectacular. He opened the player list to see if any Lmaders were on. Jackpot. In the top ranked players category he saw the names of DarkGenex, Merely, N7 and other famous Lmaders. The rumors were true. Shadow was just about to go look for them when a loud boom shook the entire town. The instantly turned black, and all players froze in their positions. For quite a while, everyone was stuck. Some noobs attempted to free themselves by shouting restricted commands like "thaw/me." It didn't work. Then, the first player attempted to leave the game.
"By all means," spoke a highly auto-tuned voice. "Leave the game. I must warn you however, that if you leave now, your ROBLOX account will be deleted, and you will get IP banned from the website."
The chat bar was instantly swarmed with comments. Shadow changed his settings, allowing only those near him to chat with him. The screen cleared a little, but not much. He spotted a C&Gr near him get banned for swearing. And he still couldn't move. In frustration, he directed his attention towards the system message once again. "It would be such a shame if you left, now wouldn't it? After all, I spent lots of time developing the code for this auto-deletion thing. Not that I was in a rush, you know. The administrators are so clueless, and now that the game is up they are powerless to stop it..."
More comments flew up in the chat bar: "The admins will get you!" "You'll get banned if you keep this up any longer!" Occasionally a noob even said "My daddy is builderman he will fire you!" However, the message just continued appearing on everyone's screen. None of the threats flying about had any impact on what was yet to come.
"Let me give you an understanding of what is happening. I've taken the liberty to make this game a little bit more fun by implementing some hacks into the system. Any player who tries to log out will lose their account. ROBLOX cannot stop me, for if they shut it down they will lose all their active players." The voice sounded smug at this point. "There are currently 300,000 players on my servers right now. It does not need to be said how much money the company will lose if they let 100,000 BC members go down the drain. Anyhow, I control everything at this point. Now all that needs to be explained is how to get out of this mess."
Shadow thought to himself. What was the point? The creator of this game would get into huge trouble with the law no matter what happened, and he couldn't imagine anyone risking prison time just to enrich players in a high-stakes game. It didn't add up.
"I have taken all Limited Collectible Items from each of your accounts." The voice started again suddenly. "They are now scattered throughout my world, just waiting for you to find them. They will be a great help to you and your health as you try to beat the game. Yes, that. In order to escape this world, you must find me, hidden somewhere across this huge virtual universe, and defeat me in battle. The limiteds are here to aid you. And, one last thing. I will only respawn 500 times. Only 500 players will make it out. The limiteds are keeping their current stock, so eventually they will become scarce. I suggest you make haste. Until next time, my friends."
With that final shocking message, the voice receded. The words churned through Shadow's head. Only 500 players...
He knew what he had to do. Get the limiteds before the others. Train and become strong enough to defeat the creator. Escape. He held down the shift key with his finger and sprinted off into the midst of the town. Chaos ensued.
{Chapter 2 will be released in about 5-7 days. Don't blame me if it takes longer, I have school too. I hope you enjoyed it, it will only get better.}
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| 09 May 2013 09:56 PM |
| this my attempt to write something other than my novel ATM. |
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| 09 May 2013 10:01 PM |
| Oh yeah, if you could bump before reading to help me out u get +1000 respect |
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| 09 May 2013 10:28 PM |
chu writing a novel too? I ish writing one too but i ish too lazy to type out my pages and edit them
Launching Monkeys at Donkeys Since 6/4/2012 -http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=96654508- |
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| 09 May 2013 10:37 PM |
| cool. I have like 30 pages of single spaced 12-font so there no point in posting it |
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| 09 May 2013 10:39 PM |
qq i regret hand-writting mine in zee first place
Launching Monkeys at Donkeys Since 6/4/2012 -http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=96654508- |
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| 09 May 2013 10:41 PM |
ouch Handwriting qq
oh well I'm hoping to finish mine in 2 years, working on this short novella too. My friend who writes for arbitrators blog might try to get this published hopefully |
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| 09 May 2013 10:43 PM |
| Yay almost 100 views. Hope u all be reading |
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| 09 May 2013 10:43 PM |
| Sounds interesting. Read it all. :o |
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| 09 May 2013 10:47 PM |
yay That's enough for me to write chapter 2 |
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flops12
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| 09 May 2013 10:48 PM |
| nice. :D why am I not in it q.q |
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kazagent
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| 09 May 2013 10:49 PM |
This is... Blinding. I would read if there was double spaced or something.
Make this limited! http://www.roblox.com/Spec-Beta-Biograft-Energy-Sword-item?id=14876573 |
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Ninja6786
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| 09 May 2013 10:54 PM |
just read oh gawd so sexy i have a feeling that the creator is actually liek a admin or a player and this is actually doing a good thing secretly. and put me in pl0x
Launching Monkeys at Donkeys Since 6/4/2012 -http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=96654508- |
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| 09 May 2013 11:51 PM |
might double space but idk
All known lmaders will be featured unless I forget...
Prepare for chapter 2! |
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| 10 May 2013 09:07 AM |
Chapter 2 soon
Unless I forget some of u, most known lmaders will make an appearance throughout theses stories |
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Kignis
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| 14 May 2013 10:05 AM |
hey kig! I'll giv u a fre blue katana of thousand ters if u be my frand
send 2 toastedpulp |
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puffy6
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| Joined: 20 Nov 2009 |
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| 14 May 2013 10:07 AM |
| Sounds alot like Sword Art Online c: |
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novastarx
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| 14 May 2013 10:16 AM |
should I read it I really need a tl;dr
#Determination |
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jack16052
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| 25 May 2013 07:04 PM |
| Commenting so I can read it tomorrow. Interested. |
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