Faxu
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| 12 May 2013 07:01 PM |
I started a FIM Fiction today. What do you think of the first two chapters? Constructive criticism is welcome. :D
If you think I'm going too fast with the plot, don't worry, I have things planned.
Story Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/103372/microscopic-interaction
Yes, the picture is terrible. I'm waiting for offers. |
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Faxu
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Faxu
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dekkonot
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| 12 May 2013 07:06 PM |
I'd look at it, but my parents are sitting right there and it'd be awkward...
~ Linguam latinam est optimum ~ |
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Section16
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Faxu
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Faxu
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Section16
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Lapsit
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| 12 May 2013 07:13 PM |
| suuuuuuuuuucccccccckkkkkkksssssssss |
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Faxu
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Faxu
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| 12 May 2013 07:54 PM |
| The only person who gives a normal response is a brony. Makes sense. |
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| 12 May 2013 07:55 PM |
| @Fazu Well good luck and RePwnedYou I still remember that TNT91 story. XD |
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chu240
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| 12 May 2013 07:56 PM |
| I like it :3 Keep it up :D |
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Faxu
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