vladski
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| 09 May 2013 04:28 PM |
Piratyy tried not to panic as Ghost approached him. Piratyy's body was damaged. Badly. Blo od soaked through his shirt, his clothes were ripped badly... Not to mention a lot of cuts and bruises. Ghost began to grin slowly, and then he stopped. Ghost looked as if he was life-less. Piratyy knew he was planning something. After what seemed like an hour, Ghost lifted his finger. "I will give you one more chance..." he said. "...to change it all." Piratyy's frightened face grew even more scared than before. He looked around him, and saw what looked like the world fading away. Even the dead bodies on the ground faded into nothing. Piratyy took another look at Ghost. "I hope you'll make the right choices..." Ghost said, as Piratyy fell into the nothing.
Shall I continue this?
"Tiny was a good fellow. He hated everyone and everything, but a good heart, nonetheless. Please be more reasonable with my minions next time." |
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icyfelix
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| 09 May 2013 04:35 PM |
| This is well written, continue. |
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PB1o1
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vladski
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| 09 May 2013 04:46 PM |
Piratyy was awakened by the sound of a ringing alarm. It was only 11:47 AM, so he pulled the bed sheets over his head and tried to go back to sleep. After a minute, he realized what had just happened. His battle with Ghost had... Well... "Restarted". Ghost had given him another chance to fix his mistakes. It was unlikely of Ghost, but Piratyy was still very generous with his mercy.
Piratyy got out of his bed, put some clothes on, and walked outside. He completely ignored the summer heat, and decided to go for a walk. While he was walking, he bumped into someone. "Oh, I'm sorry..." Piratyy said as he tried to straighten himself. It took him a moment to realize he found Vladski. "It's been a while, Piratyy." Vladski said. "I haven't seen Ghost in months."
Piratyy had a short flashback of Ghost's mercy. When he reset everything...
"What do you think happened to him...?" Vladski asked. Piratyy tried to say something, but couldn't bring up the courage to do it. Why couldn't he talk to Vladski? They used to play Metal Gear and Crash Team Racing together all the time.
Piratyy looked behind Vladski, and saw Ghost standing there, grinning. No one else noticed him. Nak, a good friend of Vladski's, walked through him. Ghost had literally become a GHOST. It was basically like that scene from Harry P0tter and the Chamber of Secrets.
"Well, okay then..." Vladski said, and walked away. Piratyy knew he had to figure out something. He didn't even remember what he done wrong in the first place. He knew he was going to find out the secrets from Ghost himself.
"Tiny was a good fellow. He hated everyone and everything, but a good heart, nonetheless. Please be more reasonable with my minions next time." |
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PB1o1
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vladski
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| 09 May 2013 04:48 PM |
Here's why I decided to make Piratyy the main character in this; Piratyy is a well known VGFer that everyone likes. I figured that makes it necessary to make him the main character.
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| 09 May 2013 04:54 PM |
| Can I be in the story? Pwetty please? |
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vladski
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| 09 May 2013 04:56 PM |
@Mage
Yes. I'm still thinking of an idea for the third chapter, though...
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| 09 May 2013 04:57 PM |
uh what
☭President of Russia☭ |
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| 09 May 2013 05:01 PM |
| Lemme be in there. I would like to be the rescuer or something. |
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tydog98
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| 09 May 2013 05:04 PM |
I demand a part, please
Never tell me the odds |
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| 09 May 2013 05:05 PM |
I call being the shadowy puppet master that's been behind everything all along...
Pwetty please? |
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| 09 May 2013 05:06 PM |
pengy demands a part too
-MARK IV STYLE MOTHATRUCKA- |
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tydog98
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| 09 May 2013 05:08 PM |
Spoiler alert, Mage
Never tell me the odds |
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