gingy1000
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| 03 May 2013 08:08 PM |
This is a prechapter its just the backround of the main character and so far only one character by Totallyrandomguy. So first try of writing. _______________________________________________________________________ My name is David Jeffery just a 6th grader at Elm Street Middle School and my parents well you must mean my parent my father died as his car blew up as my mother said... She would never tell me his name which always disapointed me. but besides that she was a mechanic she also loved to build mechanical things she always told me; you can fix anything if however its hard recycle it into something new. That has so far helped me a lot in life. In ways you will never imagine. During me free time after i'm done schoolwork I like to help my mom at work. _______________________________________________________________________ Okay Prechapter done 3 replies and 3 more characters and chapter one will start but I got a vivid idea for chapter one if I don't have 3 more characters soon all I need is one. |
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gingy1000
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| 04 May 2013 05:14 PM |
Oh well I just feel like more writing. _______________________________________________________________________ ~Chapter One~
Today I had to go to boring old school with boring old teachers but today just felt like it would be a bit different than most days mostly because of 4th period, which was my most favorite teacher whos name was Mr. Johnson he was my Latin teacher and today he was bringing his sword collection. Honestly I have no idea how he got them in school but I really don't care, but today Today was going to be the day where my whole life changed. First it was when Mr. Johnson and I were racing to learn latin words and he would try to write on the chalkboard (Which was very annoying) While I used chalk to write Latin words and it was whoever beat Mr. Johnson was the one who got to use the sword next round, Luckily I won but he was really close so Ciero my best friend was next, I used the sword and It just felt like it should naturally be in my hand... so I did beat Ciero and I beat my whole class then Mr. Johnson came up to me and said," David you should try getting swordfighting lessons they could come in handy and you'd be very talented." Then he said "And Ceiro Good job aswell!" The one thing that bothered me so much is that he was always onto us just not anyone else if he always tell us good job seperatly like were a totally different species it made me feel sorta famous. Thats when everything bad happened Then the principal Mrs. Peter came and she asked me and Ciero "Where is it!?" We both looked at each other then at Mrs. Peter like she was insane. So she asked again "Where is IT!?" Then she took us both to her office.... _______________________________________________________________________ DUN DUN DUN!!!! What happens next you might ask 2 replies then you see Idc if there from the same person its just fun writing! |
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gingy1000
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| 04 May 2013 05:15 PM |
Totally I wasn't sure what your characters name was but it was Ciero right?
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HASARAS
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| 04 May 2013 07:06 PM |
| This isn't role-playing in the first place. Not to mention it's terrible. |
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gingy1000
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| 04 May 2013 09:21 PM |
| Don't have anything nice to say don't say anything at all please and Idc if I put this in roleplaying. This was my first time anyway and everything goes uphill from here! |
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gingy1000
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| 04 May 2013 09:23 PM |
| Also not like theres a Fan-Fic Category. |
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HASARAS
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| 04 May 2013 10:35 PM |
| Try Movies/TV/Books if you want to post stories. And learn to write before you do it, too-it's stuff like this that gives Fan fiction a bad name. |
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| 04 May 2013 11:05 PM |
| -,- Dude just let him be, he didn't know.. |
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zamzamin
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| 05 May 2013 12:36 AM |
Has, no. no one gives a sht anymore. |
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gingy1000
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| 05 May 2013 09:27 AM |
| Actually has I looked up on the fourums this forum is for writing stories :P |
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gingy1000
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| 05 May 2013 09:28 AM |
| Also Has mind shutting up and leaving me alone and maybe other people like it. Just because you don't like it doesn't meean everyone else does. |
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HASARAS
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| 05 May 2013 09:43 AM |
It would take a pretty bad sense of literature to like this.
And no, no it's not. It is for making ROLEPLAYS, dimwit, not STORIES! |
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gingy1000
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| 05 May 2013 09:45 AM |
Note: Haters leave you aren't wanted. ~Chapter 2~ We were in Mrs. Peters office when all of a sudden she turned into this giant monster with a giant body and one giant eye in the center of her face she had giant hands, then we saw Mr. Johnson throw me the sword he had let us use in class earlier and said, "Fight that thing guys!" To me it just seemed wrong to kill our prinicpal but being that huge monster I didn't really care. I swung at Mrs. Peter and she just slapped me, but it didn't feel like any normal slap. It more felt like a giant pickup truck was just thrown at my face. so I just randomly swung my sword and I didn't even realize I had swung at Ciero "Dude! What was that for!?" "I'm sorry bro didn't mean it!" Finally we had killed Mrs. Peter and when we went back to class I told them about Mrs. Peter and they all looked at me like I was insane. Eventually Mr. Johnson told us to meet him at Long Point Island so they could talk. Then for the first time since we killed Mrs. Peter Ciero had said "Why Long Point Island?" "Because Ciero its a very important place for people like you" "Ookay?" I had said. ~Time skip to afterschool~ "Okay so Ciero Mr. Johnson said Long Point Island right?" "Uhh yea I think." "Mhkay." When Ciero and I were at Long point island something that looked like a sheild magicly popped out of the ground and I had said "I looks sorta like a map." "Yea it sorta does" said Ciero "Should we follow it?" I had said. "Probably should." When me and Ciero got the the end of the map I had said "Oh my gosh. This is awesome." Heck Yeah! Said Ciero. Then we saw Mr. Johnson he was riding a horse to us, wait not a horse he was the horse... "Wait if Mr. Johnson was half horse all along how did we see his feet...... "Magic, David." Said Mr. Johnson. _______________________________________________________________________ The end I need one more character to continue. |
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HASARAS
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| 05 May 2013 03:13 PM |
| Please, god please, leave and never come back. Get an original plot, learn to write and what a roleplay is, then we might accept you as a helot. |
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gingy1000
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| 05 May 2013 05:35 PM |
| Has why don't you stop you don't need to read this if you don't want to -_- |
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gingy1000
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| 05 May 2013 05:37 PM |
| and Has the roleplaying IS FOR WRITING FAN-FICS/STORIES WHICH IS EXACTLY WHAT THIS IS! |
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gingy1000
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| 05 May 2013 05:37 PM |
| for proof click on fourms on the top write and scroll down to the bottom and read what the role-playing is for! |
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HASARAS
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| 05 May 2013 06:15 PM |
"role-play out a scenario with other players"
Totally says write Fanfics and stories, and definetly not ROLEPLAYING! |
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zamzamin
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| 06 May 2013 02:09 AM |
Has, theres no reason to fight about this anymore like I said no one gives a damn anymore.
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gingy1000
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| 06 May 2013 04:26 PM |
| -_- I agree with zam but really if you don't like this why do you read it its a waste of time to read and tell me what you think. |
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gingy1000
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| 06 May 2013 08:31 PM |
| Has you are wasting my time and yours by posting theese if you don't like my series you can leave but I will bet at least one person is enjoying it but your ruining it for them. So do you mind just bugging off? |
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| 06 May 2013 08:57 PM |
| This has some potential, but it is full of run on sentences, it is more of a copy than a fan story, it is worded horribly, the grammar is crap, I suggest you give you ideas to a person who knows how to write. Also, get the heck out of the roleplay forums. |
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