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| 05 May 2013 06:46 PM |
After an umbrage with a neighboring country, Kolechia, the great communist nation of Arstotzka strives to regain lost power and independance. Immigration rates are rising dramatically, with persons [yes, that is proper grammar] flocking to avoid civil wars in their own city-state. To compensate for the immigration, the nation of Arstotzka opens a border-control checkpoint in the city of East Grestin. It was dubbed the East Grestin Checkpoint, with a single booth controlled by one person.
They hired only three people for the job, two being nonchalant constables and the other being the paper-checker, denying or accepting passports that came in through the shutter. And after interviews came in, only one was accepted.
You.
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You walk in to your decrepit booth, not quite ready for your adequate work. It wasn't much of a station, but it suffices, you suppose. The rulebook and passport-book sit before you, the pages vowing to be turned some time. The shutters open up deliberately, while a button lies next to the shutters. Hesitatingly, you press the button. It had a red tinge and felt quite frosty. A robotic voice broke your moment of silence.
"NEXT!"
A man, weathered with the effects of old age, stumbles up the shutter. He smiles and hands you his passport.
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tl;dr, Dystopian Document Thriller. Takes place in November 23, 1982.
Whats the point of this SPFC, you ask?
You must check people's passports and make sure they are not invalid. For example, the DOB saying "June 21, 1981" when the person is of old age.
Correct them by mentioning it. I will take care of the rest.
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| 05 May 2013 07:23 PM |
>Check official Aristotzkan Notice specifying if foreign passports are allowed.
-Glory to Aristotzka- |
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| 05 May 2013 07:40 PM |
Foreign passports are not allowed.
Though, the man is from Arstotzka. He is growing impatient.
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| 05 May 2013 07:50 PM |
| >Quickly compare the date of expiration to today's date. Slide out stamp bar. |
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| 05 May 2013 07:51 PM |
________________
DOE: 12/19/84
TODAY: 11/23/83 |
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| 05 May 2013 07:53 PM |
| >Set passport over the stamp bar and scan over the photo included with the passport. |
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| 05 May 2013 07:55 PM |
The passport rests under the stamps.
The photo looks directly like the man; no discrepancies. |
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| 05 May 2013 07:56 PM |
>Stamp the passport. Hand it to the man.
ACCEPTED.
>Reach for the intercom.
"NEXT." |
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| 05 May 2013 07:58 PM |
The man thanks you and accepts the passport. He walks out.
"Glory to Arstotzka."
A woman nearing the age of 40 walks up to you; she's clearly in a hurry. "Come on, I'm waiting."
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| 05 May 2013 07:59 PM |
>DISCREPANCY DETECTED.
"Where is your passport?" |
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| 05 May 2013 08:00 PM |
"Passport? Oh.."
She fumbles about in her purse, and hands you a passport.
It has a purple tinge to its front. |
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| 05 May 2013 08:03 PM |
>Kolechia?
DISCREPANCY DETECTED.
>Open passport and slide out stamp bar. Hand it back to woman.
DENIED.
>"Sorry; Aristotzkans only."
>Reach for intercom.
"NEXT." |
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| 05 May 2013 08:07 PM |
The woman leans forward and narrows her eyes. "Go to hell." she mutters and snatches her passport back.
A young man at age 20 walks up to you and hands you a passport. He has a grin on his face.
"Glory to Arstotzka." |
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| 05 May 2013 08:08 PM |
>Check the color of the passport, open it up. Keep the stamp bar out.
"Glory to Aristotzka." |
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| 05 May 2013 08:11 PM |
It has the dark green hue of Arstotzka on it.
The man straightens his trenchcoat.
PASSPORT
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NAME: JIM HOWDELFO AGE: 25
ARSTOTZKA
ISSUING CITY: PARADIZNA
DATE: 6/7/91
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| 05 May 2013 08:12 PM |
| >Check the expiration date. Skim over the picture and gender. |
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| 05 May 2013 08:14 PM |
The man hums a sorrowful tune.
__________________________________
DATE: 6/7/91
GENDER: MALE
The picture looks like the man, but without his fluffy coat. |
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| 05 May 2013 08:15 PM |
>DISCREPANCY DETECTED.
"This does not look like you." |
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| 05 May 2013 08:16 PM |
"Oh?"
"Let me see."
The man takes it back deliberately and looks at the picture. "Sir, are you blind?" |
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| 05 May 2013 08:18 PM |
>Take it back and stamp the passport.
"I was just kidding you."
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| 05 May 2013 08:22 PM |
The man doesn't look too amused. Though, he still grabs the passport.
+5$
Another man walks in, he doesn't look too happy. He hands you no passport and instead balls his fist.
"It was a mistake to open this checkpoint."
Instead of leaving, he aims a punch at your torso. |
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HASARAS
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| 05 May 2013 08:24 PM |
| Spring backwards and call for security. |
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