Kaliburr
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| 03 May 2013 07:50 PM |
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qOyyTs7d0hU
"It tastes like grapes and... suck" ~2 |
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| 03 May 2013 07:52 PM |
| Too flat, needs more of a rising momentum feeling, reach a climax, after having several parts going on at once. Right now, its decent, but all together I get the feeling of "flat", nothing exciting. |
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