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Prank On the School: A Horror Story

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watermelonmouse is not online. watermelonmouse
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27 Apr 2013 08:01 PM
All the characters are MADE UP!!!




Anna played a prank on the school. I told her not to, but of course it only makes it worse. She has been missing for two days.

I went biking with Holly, one of my buds, to the school park. As we passed by the entrance to the school, we noticed a bag with cans of spray paint, toilet paper rolls, and silly string on the ground.
“Holly,” I said, “this is Anna's bag....”
“Oh my gosh,” Holly said. “What happened?!”
On the floor, there was “Anna” scribbled with red stuff. Blood, I thought.
“Well,” Holly said. “we can't just let her be missing. She must be still doing her prank on the school. Let's call Cindy, Amy, and Paris to come over here and help us!”
So, in ten minutes, everyone was here.
“Well girls,” I said, “Anna has gone missing, and we need to get her out of the school.”
We all went inside to find darkness. As we walked farther away from the front doors- which were surprisingly unlocked, it grew darker, until we couldn't see.
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27 Apr 2013 08:02 PM
“Anyone got a flashlight?” I asked.
“Yeah,” said Cindy. “I got two.”
“Okay,” I said, “I’ll get one, and Cindy, since they’re yours, you get the other one.”
We went into the cafeteria first.
“Everything looks normal in here,” I said. “There’s the stage, the tables, and the kitchen…wait! There’s a bag over there! Turn on the lights, will you Amy?”
Now, Amy is the “scaredy cat” here. So why in the world did I just tell her to turn on the lights?!
Then lights then flickered on and the bag was gone. Remember, we were using our flashlights.\
“Huh,” I said. “I thought there was a bag here….”
I didn’t even get to finish. The light flickered on, then off. On, then off. On, then off.
“AMY!” I screamed out of fright.
“What?” Amy said next to me. “I’m right here.”
“Then who’s over there…?” I questioned.
I looked at the light switch. There was no one there.
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watermelonmouse is not online. watermelonmouse
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27 Apr 2013 08:04 PM
~To Be Continued...~
Might take me awhile....

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27 Apr 2013 08:04 PM
ok
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27 Apr 2013 08:06 PM
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27 Apr 2013 08:16 PM
~CONTINUED~


“GUYS!” I yelled. “THERE’S NO ONE THERE!”
As always, Amy ran to the door first.
“IT’S LOCKED!” Amy screamed. When she turned in the flickering light, I saw the tears in her eyes. She needed to get out now.
The lights suddenly went back on, without any flickering.
There was the bag. Did I imagine it? I thought. Am I dreaming?
“Do-do you think Anna’s in there?” Paris stammered.
“I don’t know,” Holly said frightened.
“I’ll go look,” said Cindy- the bravest one here.
Cindy slowly walked to the other side of the cafeteria, and opened the potato-sack bag.
“No way,” Cindy said confused. “That’s impossible.”
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27 Apr 2013 08:17 PM
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27 Apr 2013 08:24 PM
Short one. Sorry. It takes a lot of work to edit. ._.



She tried to pull something out for about five minutes. Eventually she gave up.
“Guys!” she yelled across the room. “I kinda need help.”
We pulled out what seemed like a human.
“Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!” Amy screamed.
“It’s Anna,” I said startled.
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27 Apr 2013 08:42 PM
Anna must have had a bruise or something, because she had a scar barely hidden by her side-bangs. It didn’t look like an ordinary cut, though. It was the kind the do for surgery. Anna didn’t have this scar yesterday when I saw her at homeroom, I thought.
The lights started to flicker again.
“Oh, crud balls,” I said out of sarcasm.
I saw a figure on the stage. No one else saw it but me. It was more of a shadow than an object….
Soon the lights turned off. Our flashlights didn’t work. We had nothing. Fortunately, I was already adjusted to the darkness, so I saw them. They were the color of shadows, a greyish-black depending on the darkness. They had long fingers, and they had spikes on their head. I kept imagining they couldn’t see us, but my daydream was interrupted by the lights flickering back on.
Once they were on, I asked Anna all the questions I had about that scar.
“What happened?!” I asked Anna.
“I-I don’t know what you’re talking about,” Anna said confused.
“The scar!” I said. “The one on your head!”
Anna then touched her head. She felt the scar and started freaking out.
“H-how did th-that get there?!” she said confused and crying.
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watermelonmouse is not online. watermelonmouse
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27 Apr 2013 08:52 PM
“I don’t know, Anna,” I said. “You should know. You were the one there when you got it!”
“All I remember is having spray paint in my hand, feeling a big pain on my back and falling on the grass, and then waking up to find you guys!” she said crying very hard.
“Anna,” I said. “Who knocked you out?”
“The shadows,” she said like she was telling a spooky ghost story.
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watermelonmouse is not online. watermelonmouse
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27 Apr 2013 08:55 PM
Next One's Gonna Take FOREVER Guys. Be Patient.

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27 Apr 2013 08:56 PM
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27 Apr 2013 08:57 PM
xdd spambot r swag
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watermelonmouse is not online. watermelonmouse
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27 Apr 2013 09:16 PM
I felt sore all over. I couldn’t run anymore.
“Wait guys!” I said. “I need a rest break from running one and a half miles.”
How did I get here, you ask? Let’s make a long story short. The lights turned off again, and when they turned back on, Anna, and Amy were gone. We searched for any clues and found a basement. It’s weird though, because I have been at this school for eight months, and I have never noticed this door leading to a basement that the principle doesn’t even know it exists! So…we kept
“stair-running” (so we don’t fall) down the steep stairs until I said to take a rest break.
There were bags (the potato-sack ones) next to us against the wall. Then I got an idea. If they, for some reason, start to come up the stairs, we’ll hide in the bags.
Good timing, I thought. There were the “Shadows” coming up the stairs.
“Girls!” I whispered in my loudest-quiet whisper, “hide in here!”
So we did. Plus, we were being picked up.
When we got out, we were in the cafeteria- with the lights out.
“Great idea, Callie!” Holly said with big sarcasm.
Thankfully, the flashlights worked.
“Sorry guys,” I mumbled. “It was either death, or hide.”
“Whatever they were,” Cindy stated, “they didn’t want us here. Why else would they lift the bags and take them here if we weren’t in there. They knew we were in here, so, it was either knock out, or hide. I like hide better. Don’t you?
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27 Apr 2013 09:18 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BydYgfCmekQ
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27 Apr 2013 09:20 PM
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watermelonmouse is not online. watermelonmouse
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27 Apr 2013 09:21 PM
@ calculator
Um...okay....

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watermelonmouse is not online. watermelonmouse
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27 Apr 2013 09:27 PM
@ somepony

"while the premise is overdone and bland, i feel this is a breath of fresh air compared to other stories on roblox that are just big blocks of words with no paragraphs

also, you seriously need to work on your pacing"


-_- Wow noob. And this time, you're a noob- beginner. As a writer, I try to keep the reader hooked. If you don't like it, well, that's YOUR OPINION. It is not overdone. it is keeping you to want more and more. And with the "pacing", I spend my time to edit and make sure I didn't add to many details.
By the way, you will end up dumb if you don't train your brain how to spell and capitalize. -_-
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27 Apr 2013 09:28 PM
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watermelonmouse is not online. watermelonmouse
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27 Apr 2013 09:31 PM
If you hate this, or me, somepony, why come back?
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27 Apr 2013 09:32 PM
@water
your opinon
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watermelonmouse is not online. watermelonmouse
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27 Apr 2013 09:32 PM
Well you didn't have to read it if you didn't want to Flunken.

P.S.= SomePony, I didn't yell at you. This is yelling: HEY!
Not Yelling: Hey.
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