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| 27 Apr 2013 01:51 PM |
*Clears throat*
Once again, I'll start up my story behind ReeseMcBlox' Diary!
ReeseMcBlox: I got to make the Forum rules! I'm so excited! *Reese started typing up the Forum rules* *Reese hears a strange sound* ReeseMcBlox: What's that? I beter go check it out. Probably my darling cat Darla. *ReeseMcBlox rushes upstairs* *She sees a Diary on her entertainent stand* ReeseMcBlox: How'd this get here? *Resses opens the book and starts reading it* ReeseMcBlox: How does this person know my secrets? I betetr find out who left this here. *Reese races down stairs and calls her mom* ReeseMcBlox: Hello, mom, did you by any chance sneak into my place and put a diary on my entertainment stand? Reese's Mom: No, why? ReeseMcBlox: Just wondering. Bye! Reese's Mom: Bye honey. *Reese starts reading the diary again* *She stops lookign curiuos* *She runs downstairs again, and gets a hand lense* *She carefully looks at the diary and the fingerprints* ReeseMcBlox: Hmm, what could this be? *the phone rings* *Reese goes downstairs and answers the phone* John: I left a Diary at your house. ReeseMcBlox: Okay, that scared me, how do you know all that stuff? John: You put it on your application. ReeseMcBlox: Oh..... John: Well, I just called to tell you that. ReeseMcBlox: Okay, bye! John: Bye! *Reese starts back up on the Rules for Forums* *Reese hears another noise* ReeseMcBlox: Um, Darla is that you?
To Be Continued...
P.S. Part 4, might be longer, depends what I think of next! |
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| 27 Apr 2013 01:54 PM |
Can you please fit them all on one thread? It's crowding the front page so RP's can't be seen.
And I would enjoy it a lot more if it had tons more detail, was crafted into story form, had paragraphs instead word walls, longer parts, and looked over before posting to fix grammatical errors.
"Sir, w-w-we need 50% of the 99% a-and the support o-of at least 1% of the 1% if you're gonna have 42% of the 100% to get 50%." |
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| 27 Apr 2013 01:58 PM |
| Can you please write a good story that doesn't have *'s, "reese's mom:"'s and etc.? Perhaps could you read a how-to grammar guide for 2 year olds? |
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