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| 23 Apr 2013 06:23 PM |
and it's tough because I have the main idea and everything down
but I'm just having trouble writing the rising action and intro and everything
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:24 PM |
| involve hyper realistic blood |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:25 PM |
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'the hyper realistic hyper realistic was hyper realistic'
is this good? |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:26 PM |
yes that is perfect
i know you dont get it but the hyperrealistic blood thing is a reference of sorts somewhat involving creepypasta in a way i guess |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:27 PM |
lol super I know what you mean
also this story isn't gonna be like that though
it's gonna be like and insane guy nailing birds to the wall in his closet |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:28 PM |
add an ugly photoshoped pic, the story doesn't have to be good to be known
look at jeff the killer |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:29 PM |
oh you do? i dont mean that in a rude sounding way i just didnt think you did .__.
oh is the insane guy the main char. or just the main "villain" |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:33 PM |
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okay so do you want me to tell you everything I've got down for the story right now? |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:38 PM |
well that's a different approach to a horror story i dont think i've ever seen the main character be the "horror" giver off guy thing :o
sure, i've got time to kill |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:47 PM |
basically he moves to this town to study its asylum the nurses tell him that one of the most prominent signs of insanity is when the patient thinks that birds are constantly watching them the town calls it bird syndrome bla blabbity blaaa other crap happens leading up to more crap the guy starts suddenly seeing/noticing birds everywhere he starts feeling watched while he sleeps he eventually starts catching the birds and killing them by nailing them to the wall in his closet he gouges out their eyes every night so he doesn't feel watched; he hallucinates that their eyes grow back every day he starts being all insane and also cuts their toungues out he gets admitted to the asylum and freaks out and then gouges out his own eyes using his bare fingers
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:49 PM |
| i'm a horror, put me in it |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:50 PM |
that seems really short :/
but i guess that was just a summary of it, right? |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:54 PM |
| i think the main character's name should be scott |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:54 PM |
scott pilgrim?
ololoolo
I never saw that movie |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:55 PM |
lol ok
#sometimes im legit, sometimes im not, this is one of those times. |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:56 PM |
that's exactly what i thought after thinking of the name scott ._.
neither have i, actually .-. |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:56 PM |
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| 23 Apr 2013 06:59 PM |
thanks a lot cinema works
YOU RUINED PEOPLE NAMED SCOTT EVERYWHERE |
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| 23 Apr 2013 07:00 PM |
| actually i think the guy who made the graphic novel (i dont know if it's considered a manga .-.) should be blamed |
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| 23 Apr 2013 07:05 PM |
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sorry, but you've been cut
we just can't have people like you in the company
those girls weren't even old enough to drive
you're fired
super
mission : find him and punch him in balls |
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| 23 Apr 2013 07:07 PM |
ok here is a good one
make Si from Duck Dynasty make sense you have a great story now |
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