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Re: I'm trying to write this creepypasta/horror genre story

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moonlight9989 is not online. moonlight9989
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23 Apr 2013 06:23 PM
and it's tough because I have the main idea and everything down

but I'm just having trouble writing the rising action and intro and everything

fff
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Super64 is not online. Super64
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23 Apr 2013 06:24 PM
involve hyper realistic blood
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moonlight9989 is not online. moonlight9989
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23 Apr 2013 06:25 PM
super

'the hyper realistic hyper realistic was hyper realistic'

is this good?
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Super64 is not online. Super64
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23 Apr 2013 06:26 PM
yes
that is perfect

i know you dont get it but the hyperrealistic blood thing is a reference of sorts
somewhat involving creepypasta
in a way
i guess
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VVuVV is not online. VVuVV
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23 Apr 2013 06:27 PM
still the best
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moonlight9989 is not online. moonlight9989
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23 Apr 2013 06:27 PM
lol super I know what you mean

also this story isn't gonna be like that though

it's gonna be like and insane guy nailing birds to the wall in his closet
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outfromboneville is not online. outfromboneville
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23 Apr 2013 06:28 PM
add an ugly photoshoped pic, the story doesn't have to be good to be known

look at jeff the killer
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Super64 is not online. Super64
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23 Apr 2013 06:29 PM
oh you do?
i dont mean that in a rude sounding way
i just didnt think you did
.__.

oh
is the insane guy the main char. or just the main "villain"
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moonlight9989 is not online. moonlight9989
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23 Apr 2013 06:33 PM
protagonist

okay so do you want me to tell you everything I've got down for the story right now?
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Super64 is not online. Super64
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23 Apr 2013 06:38 PM
well that's a different approach to a horror story
i dont think i've ever seen the main character be the "horror" giver off guy thing
:o

sure, i've got time to kill
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moonlight9989 is not online. moonlight9989
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23 Apr 2013 06:47 PM
basically he moves to this town to study its asylum
the nurses tell him that one of the most prominent signs of insanity is when the patient thinks that birds are constantly watching them
the town calls it bird syndrome bla blabbity blaaa
other crap happens leading up to more crap
the guy starts suddenly seeing/noticing birds everywhere
he starts feeling watched while he sleeps
he eventually starts catching the birds and killing them by nailing them to the wall in his closet
he gouges out their eyes every night so he doesn't feel watched; he hallucinates that their eyes grow back every day
he starts being all insane and also cuts their toungues out
he gets admitted to the asylum and freaks out and then gouges out his own eyes using his bare fingers


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Phasmophobia is not online. Phasmophobia
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23 Apr 2013 06:48 PM
im like 124 posts ahead
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Sandtrooper582 is not online. Sandtrooper582
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23 Apr 2013 06:49 PM
i'm a horror, put me in it
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Super64 is not online. Super64
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23 Apr 2013 06:50 PM
that seems really short
:/

but i guess that was just a summary of it, right?
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moonlight9989 is not online. moonlight9989
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23 Apr 2013 06:52 PM
yeah it's only a summary
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Super64 is not online. Super64
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23 Apr 2013 06:54 PM
i think the main character's name should be scott
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moonlight9989 is not online. moonlight9989
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23 Apr 2013 06:54 PM
scott pilgrim?

ololoolo

I never saw that movie
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BlueNinjaFishy is not online. BlueNinjaFishy
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23 Apr 2013 06:55 PM
lol ok

#sometimes im legit, sometimes im not, this is one of those times.
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Super64 is not online. Super64
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23 Apr 2013 06:56 PM
that's exactly what i thought after thinking of the name scott
._.

neither have i, actually
.-.
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CountMovieteller is not online. CountMovieteller
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23 Apr 2013 06:56 PM
involve hyper realistic blood
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moonlight9989 is not online. moonlight9989
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23 Apr 2013 06:59 PM
thanks a lot cinema works

YOU RUINED PEOPLE NAMED SCOTT EVERYWHERE
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Sandtrooper582 is not online. Sandtrooper582
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23 Apr 2013 06:59 PM
am i being added??
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Super64 is not online. Super64
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23 Apr 2013 07:00 PM
actually i think the guy who made the graphic novel (i dont know if it's considered a manga .-.) should be blamed
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moonlight9989 is not online. moonlight9989
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23 Apr 2013 07:05 PM
sand

sorry, but you've been cut

we just can't have people like you in the company

those girls weren't even old enough to drive

you're fired

super

mission : find him and punch him in balls
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turtlepenguin654 is not online. turtlepenguin654
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23 Apr 2013 07:07 PM
ok here is a good one

make Si from Duck Dynasty make sense you have a great story now
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