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| 25 Mar 2013 01:02 PM |
{Prologue}
Sullivan Karvosar is sitting in his chair, throwing darts at a picture of FEAR Commander, SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX. Furious he was, until two people came in the room, a tall man with a robotic arm and leg that makes noise they move and a man with an cybernetic eye patch. "What is you want Vizpovus, Edzakor?" He scowled. "The attack plan is complete, sire." Sullivan grinned. "Good work." Sullivan later stood up and threw the picture of SONIC into the fire in the fireplace. As it burned Sullivan said, "Soon, SONIC and all of Venezia, will fall.."
----- "I'm so excited!" TheLittleGoomba thought. He was excited because there was a festival honoring the greatest leaders of FEAR. Goomba was wearing a black suit with matching pants and a red tie. He later left his house to see his friend Duckdude112, he was wearing a black vest with a green tie and black jeans.
"You ready for this, Goomba?" asked Duck.
"Yea I am!" Goomba said with an excited look.
---- Two hours later, Duck and Goomba were at the location of the festival, FEAR Fort Alianor II. Goomba took a seat next to FEAR Officer, Diuto717. Diuto was wearing an orange tie with a black vest and black jeans.
"Welcome my Venezian, Siccian, Iratian, Lymphian, and Alsuian comrades!" Said SONIC on a microphone.
"Are you ready for the fun to begin?" asked SONIC.
"Yeah!" everybody cheered.
"Then let the party... begin!"
Every FEAR member started to dance and eat.
---- Somewhere on the mountains near Fort Alianor II, Sullivan was prepared for the attack. Sullivan was wearing a party hat with a pair of singlasses. He also wore a pair of light blue jeans with a white t-shirt. He pulled out his phone from is pocket and texted SONIC these words;
"3..2..1.. Boom."
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| 25 Mar 2013 01:06 PM |
| Oh. I LOVE a good mystery story! |
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| 25 Mar 2013 01:40 PM |
| I want to be in this, boi. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 01:48 PM |
| You will, I'm not going to add every person who wants to be in this story on one chapter. I'll add more people in every chapter. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 02:08 PM |
| That's cool. Do you think you could add me? |
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diuto717
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| 25 Mar 2013 04:19 PM |
| You guys should've asked to be in it BEFORE it started, like I did. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 04:19 PM |
| Wow, this is pretty awesome. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 05:38 PM |
| More people should read this. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 05:42 PM |
| Now, i just need to be in one of the later chapters, than it will be somewhat more amazing than without me :D |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:09 PM |
| Love good mystery stories...make sure to put me in it. :) |
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| 25 Mar 2013 07:19 PM |
| @diuto717 I evaluated it. :] |
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| 25 Mar 2013 07:19 PM |
| Umm, how cna i put this together...... I LOVE IT! |
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| 25 Mar 2013 07:21 PM |
| Don't forgeto make me a main character please c: |
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jake4573
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| 25 Mar 2013 07:23 PM |
| @Trev, Yes, you may be a character. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 07:24 PM |
| Make me as sullivan's men. :3 |
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| 25 Mar 2013 07:29 PM |
| Yeyz . Im your friend in the story goomba! :D |
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