Dino572
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| 20 Apr 2013 01:15 AM |
I rise up, to see a stromy sky, no sun, freezing, windy, white. Its a snowy arena, perfect way to freeze to death!
"Welcome tributes, to the 67th Hunger Games arena! Good luck, and fight in honor of your district!"
All tributes, 24 of us all lined up around the cornucopia equal amount of distance. I am by the District One Male, and the District 5 Female, and me from District 4. Great a career.
He looks at me, and smiles. I panic and look at the items. I see a sea green color backpack, just like my arena jacket. I see it has some items by it. A bow and arrow, just what I need, and a knife. 5.. 4.. 3.. This is it... 2.. 1.. The gong sounds and I step off, my feet sinking into the snow. The District One male tackles me with a axe and swings at my head but I move, and he falls.
I run in falling, as he try's to get up and chase me. I pick up the see green backpack, its heavy witch means it must have some food, a bottle, and some extra warming stuff!
Then ther'es the bow and arrow, I am about to pick it up. I am tackled, by the District One male again! He says "I will make sure you die!" I knew it was the end.
My district partner, Kayla runs in and pushes him on the floor, gives me the bow and arrow, I put the arrows into my pack and hold the bow, and I begin to run out. Many are dead.
Kayla yells "RUN! I WILL FIND YOU LATER!" I begin to run, with my bow and arrow and my sea green pack. I run to the forest, hoping to find a river or pond near a tree. I run and walk for about 30 minutes. I find a lake, and climb the tree near it.
The night comes, and its freezing, I want a fire but it will lead tributes to me and to my death. I begin to hear music, its the fallen. 9 tributes died at the bloodbath. Well the bloodbath was long and dangerous, as I almost got killed.
Our 9 fallen tributes..I am hoping not Kayla. The District Three Male and Female, District Five Female, District Six Male and Female, District Eight Male, District Ten Female, and District Twelve Male and Female.
Thank god Kayla's alive. It starts getting really cold, so I decide to climb up to the leaves and open my pack. I got many items in it. A full water bottle, Some crackers, and grapes. A sleeping bag, Some matches and A rope.
I open the yellow sleeping bag and its nice a warm. I start to lay down, and get in my sleeping bag. Will I wake up to the next day?
~Chapter 2 coming soon!~ P.S. Hope you enjoyed, did my best :) |
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elfxninja
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| 20 Apr 2013 06:15 AM |
go
die
Who are you? Where am I? |
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ZaraTiger
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| 20 Apr 2013 09:16 AM |
| Too fast. Back it up, add a CS, maybe people will join. |
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Riku1257
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| 20 Apr 2013 09:33 AM |
>Too fast. Back it up, ass a CS, maybe people will join.
It's a story you duncecap. |
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FIRECAKE
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| 20 Apr 2013 09:39 AM |
please write original stories and don't rip off copyrighted books thank you
⊂=-҉Ξ҉-=⊃ Verb conjugator, plus herb inhalator ⊂=-҉Ξ҉-=⊃ |
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ZaraTiger
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Siekureh
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| 20 Apr 2013 11:27 AM |
wrong forum too fast unoriginal |
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Riku1257
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| 20 Apr 2013 02:19 PM |
It's a story. Which you CAN post here.
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| 20 Apr 2013 02:24 PM |
Stories don't go here.
This forum is for "fictional stories in which you roleplay your characters." I see no role playing here.
And besides, it's not even a GOOD story. Notice the only people giving you complements are your friends.
- You're just jealous because the voices only talk to me. |
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Riku1257
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| 20 Apr 2013 07:10 PM |
>This forum is for posting fictional stories involving your characters.
^This is in the rules of the RP Forum. |
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Quasar99
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| 20 Apr 2013 07:12 PM |
"stories dont go here" then where do they go
"Well maybe I'm just rhetorical!" "NO YOU'RE NOT!" "Now you're just being transcendant!" |
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Riku1257
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| 20 Apr 2013 07:19 PM |
| My sentiments exactly Quasar. My sentiments exactly. |
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| 20 Apr 2013 07:20 PM |
| *I grab a bone and begin smashing away at my monitor, I throw it up in the air, it coming down as a gun, I then go to OP's house and blow his sodding brains out.* |
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Riku1257
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| 21 Apr 2013 10:52 AM |
@OP & Quasar; This belongs in the Movies/TV/Books forum.
The description of that forum explains why.
"Does your character belong in the pages of a novel or on the silver screen?" <---
- You're just jealous because the voices only talk to me. |
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