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| 10 Apr 2013 09:17 PM |
(Part one here) http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=94510073.
"Whats that?" says Hia. "Where?" says Ultra. "Up on top of the gate." "Hmmm, Wacky do you have binoculars?" says Ultra "Always have them." says Wacky as looking though the binoculars. "Oh my, they got Ash and Grey!" shouts Wacky. "Keep quiet! We have got to rescure them. Time to call back up" says Hia as reaches for communication device. "Hello? Anyone come in, is anyone out there? Hello?" says hia into the device. "Got you loud and clear." says the voice. "Alright, this is Rhino speaking, requesting back up at quadrant V2-56." "Alright, this is agent Free, Freesuper. We got you on the map, It will take us another 5 hours before we can reach you." "Okay alright, operatives Ash and Grey have been captured, and taken into the stronghold." says Hia. "Hold out as long as you can, I will see you in 5 hours." says Grey. "Alright, ultra and wacky lets move out." |
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| 10 Apr 2013 09:29 PM |
| Nothing like my stories, and too short. |
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| 10 Apr 2013 09:46 PM |
@dg
why would you want to be in such a terrible story?
this looks like something me as a 6th grader would write.
god awful. |
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| 10 Apr 2013 09:46 PM |
| I wrote my story in 5th grade... |
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| 11 Apr 2013 07:38 AM |
| Dude! I am in 6th grade! THERE SHORT STORIES THAT COME ONE AT A TIME. I do have a life outside of ROBLOX, so their short. |
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Tippee
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| 11 Apr 2013 08:16 AM |
| @Icy, calm down. I give credit to hial for at least trying and giving something he enjoys a shot. In my opinion I would pretty much say it takes a lot of courage to write something such as he did. It is a lot harder to write something such as this then it is to spew out negative comments towards it. I hold my hat off to hial. |
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PvtBrownV
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