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| 05 Apr 2013 03:05 PM |
Hi guys! I'm DancingQueen24 and this is a song I wrote called "Don't Bring Me Down with Hate" 100% written by me Enjoy!
[Rap] Jubril101: I took the hate and I threw it on the ground, I can't do this no I can't back down, You may think you're the cool kid in town, When clearly you haven't looked around
Ahem aren't you missing something? Somethin that can't be replaced maybe a little someone King of Ace I'm almost at home base I can't be brought down, I hope by now you realised you aren't the coolest kid in town...
[Chorus] DancingQueen24: I've been burned to the ground and struck down with hate, People move on and don't stop like a figure 8, I'm making the right moves like in chess, oh checkmate I won't let anybody bring me down Bring me down with hate!
[Rap] Jubril101: You say you're hotter than the sun, I'll make an exception You're mind is more confusing than an inception Glass half full? More like glass half empty Make me mad? Oh God don't tempt me
Only going up no not going down "I go down I take you with me" No, not this time around I'm not sticking up and I'm not sitting down Only here to get my crown Nothing greater, and nothing less I hope by now you just confess That all you do is hate hate hate And that you're the King of Jacka** and I'm the Queen of Ace! #peace
[Chorus] I've been burned to the ground and struck down with hate! People move on and don't stop like a figure 8! I'm making the right moves like in chess, oh checkmate! I won't let anybody bring me down Bring me down with hate!
[Rap] Last laugh, Last laugh Looking through your bad tracks Playing back the back-stabs Good one, clap clap You really think that hurt? You really thought I was that weak? Really though I was some kind of freak? Well just so you know, you might've won this round I hope you sing along while you hear it through the stero cleaning the McDonalds' ground
[Chorus] I've been burned to the ground and struck down with hate! People move on and don't stop like a figure 8! I'm making the right moves like in chess, oh checkmate! I won't let anybody bring me down Bring me down with hate!
[Bridge] So don't give up, don't give up your crown Don't let people hurt you or bring you down And don't sacrifice mistakes or fill yourself with hate Because in the end who will be the last one laughing? The last one laughing... Oh the last one laugh-ing The last one laughing yeah..
[Chorus] I've been burned to the ground and struck down with hate! People move on and don't stop like a figure 8! I'm making the right moves like in chess, oh checkmate! I'm not letting anybody bring me down Bring me down with hate! Oh no don't bring me down! No bring me down with hate! With hate, with hate, with hate Oh don't bring me down with hate! |
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jubril101
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| 05 Apr 2013 05:18 PM |
| Please comment! Give your honest opinionsss! |
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nosaj72
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| 05 Apr 2013 05:45 PM |
| I think it's really cool...this is the first song that Jub raps in, right? |
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jubril101
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| 05 Apr 2013 05:58 PM |
| ;p I've sang in other songs too |
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| 05 Apr 2013 09:40 PM |
| You should record you singing this then post it on youtube and post the link here cause i realy wana here this. |
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johnb
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| 05 Apr 2013 09:41 PM |
| Let's burn her on the cross |
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| 05 Apr 2013 09:43 PM |
I think it might be good, but like troll said, I'd need to hear it. It looks like decent enough lyrics, but I'd have to hear it to really tell if it's good or a bust. Overall, decent. 7/10. |
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lily17777
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| 05 Apr 2013 09:46 PM |
johnb
*Grabs match* *Nods head* |
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| 05 Apr 2013 09:47 PM |
| It wasn't that bad. I've seen THAT bad. This is ok. |
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| 05 Apr 2013 10:08 PM |
| Thanks guys! I can't sing it right now but I will soon! |
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Zarikel
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| 06 Apr 2013 10:27 AM |
| Girl, you'll be working at McDonalds if you "sing and dance" on ROBLOX. I mean honestly. I actually get somewhere in life. Loser. And I agree with JohnB that you should be burned on a cross. You witch. Love you temper queen. :) |
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| 06 Apr 2013 10:41 AM |
| Lol Zar. I have a good education and I have a life. Just because I play roblox doesn't mean I'm going to work at McDonalds. Stop hating because you're jealous of me. :) |
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Zarikel
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| 06 Apr 2013 11:12 AM |
| JEALOUS? OF YOU?! HAHAHAHAHAH! LOL THAT IS A GOOD ONE! I don't want to be some rude girl who acts like she is the best at everything she does even though she can really suck. I accept my flaws. You should learn that to! Temper queen! |
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| 06 Apr 2013 11:16 AM |
| I honestly don't understand how you stalk me yet is not jealous. Leave me alone for the love of God... |
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djflame0
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| 06 Apr 2013 11:24 AM |
| Great job 9.5/10, reppin Reloaded Records all day |
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| 06 Apr 2013 11:26 AM |
:o I'm not in even ReRe but okay :D |
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9247
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9247
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