shotty331
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| 07 Apr 2013 08:19 AM |
you wake to find your self in a cold hard bed.a red light blinds your eyes.you taste a sweet taste in your mouth. you realize its blood.you get upto fid your freinds gone!you go to the cockpit.you find the captain dead.you hear noise that startles you.you turn around....
please reply so i can finish |
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CapRex213
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| 07 Apr 2013 08:47 AM |
you wake to find your self in a cold hard bed. - Oh, how strange, I went to sleep the woke up in a bed?!?
a red light blinds your eyes - How does this relate to the rest of the story?
.you taste a sweet taste in your mouth. - Oh, interesting. Must be some sort of chemical.
you realize its blood. - Blood is salty, you incompetent fool.
you get upto fid your freinds gone! - I hate it when I fid my freinds gone. It's horrible.
you go to the cockpit. - What cockpit? You said you woke up in a bed
you find the captain dead. - Why are we in an airplane?
you hear noise that startles you. - You hear noise? How is that grammar? How do you call yourself a human being with that horrific grammatical error?
you turn around.... - Cliffhanger!
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In the end, I found it to be largely horrible. Learn to grammar, learn to spelling. |
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| 07 Apr 2013 08:56 AM |
This is an insult to the Halo universe in general. BEGONE! |
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shotty331
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| 07 Apr 2013 11:04 AM |
| HATERS!let me see YOU do better!!!!!!!!!! |
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shotty331
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| 07 Apr 2013 11:08 AM |
you need to shut up.people who have ben on for a while think all others are noobs and cant play!i might be new but i can play WAY better than you.
plus my keyboard some times doesnt respond |
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Riku1257
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| 07 Apr 2013 11:14 AM |
Does it even matter if we play games here or not? No, no it doesn't. Now begone.
"The ink of a scholar is worth a thousand times more than the blood of a martyr." |
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shotty331
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| 07 Apr 2013 11:21 AM |
| honestly i dont get what you said |
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Riku1257
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| 07 Apr 2013 11:28 AM |
| 'people who have ben on a while thing everyone else is noobs and can't play. i might be new but i can play WAY better than u'. |
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Quasar99
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| 07 Apr 2013 11:30 AM |
"let me see YOU do better" oh god my sides.
"ROSE: THE BUBBLES VON SALAMANCER MEMOIRIAL LIBRARAY!!!" |
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Riku1257
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| 07 Apr 2013 11:38 AM |
Wait, he was serious about wanting to see us do better?
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Mr44
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| 07 Apr 2013 11:57 AM |
"HATERS!let me see YOU do better!!!!!!!!!!"
You find yourself on a bunk in the poorly-maintained crew quarters. Your other shipmates are nowhere to be found, and the emergency siren can be heard faintly. The AI's voice continuously repeats the phrase "Vessel has been compromised; evacuate immediately". Startled, you roll off of the bunk, rush out of the crew quarters and into a dimly lit corridor. You trudge further and further, only to find the bodies of your comrades brutally mutilated in front of you. Their organs had been ripped out, their heads oozing the liquefied remains of their grey matter, their blood splattered all over the floor and walls. No human is capable of this macabre act; something must have found its way onto the ship. Whatever it is, it's not friendly. Suddenly, you hear a vent cover fall behind you. Trembling, you reach for your pistol, ready to kill the creature who did this.
Not bad for a quick 15 minute write-up. |
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shotty331
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| 07 Apr 2013 03:04 PM |
Cont on mr44 Suddenly the lights blink out.they dimly come back on only for you to see nothing there.you stand there startled wondering what happened.you walk to the computer console in the side wall.and press a button only for it to not respond.fustrated you kick the machine.it blinks to life.you go through camera footage and find a file saved 61 minuts before you woke up.you tap the file with couriosity. It starts with a captains log.explaining a mysterious power fail.then goes to a footage from a ship hull camera.a ship comes out of nowhere.and bombards the ship with blue plasma.then the file stops.you look around. Then suddenly... |
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shotty331
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| 07 Apr 2013 04:12 PM |
| You hear a horrid scream.you get out your pistol and run down the hall.you come to a four way corridor.you here the scream but it echoes in the corridor.your intsinkt takes you to the right hall.but there are no lights there.you quietly walk slowly down the hall.you come up to a door covered with mysterious blue blood.you try the key lock on the side wall then it doesn't respond .so you try to pry the door open with your hands but it doesn't work.you look down the hall and see a pipe and you go to pick it up.you gou back to the door and you wedge the pipe in the door and pry it open.you walk inside to find its the brig.you walk down the brig to find a person with his limbs ripped off.you come out the brig to find large footsteps.you follow the footsteps to the captains quarters.you go in silently to find a huge figure about7.8feet tall you try to creep up on him but you step on broken glass and it turns around.it comes toward you and raises a weapon of some sort. But you are quicker than it... |
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