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| 01 Apr 2013 09:28 PM |
(Verse One) A GREAT way to start a day is to kill a debate,no-one wants to hear your debut we just want to be able to See your face and throw disgusting Goo at you,there you run for your life,And here I will pull out my knife,swing it round and round like a kite,I drop it,it lands like a bomb, man no-one wants to hear YOUR sob,get outta my face,you just my FAVORITE disgrace,You know what; scream like a pig,Miss piggie'll save you,As if it was her giving you a mile of your gross music,IS THAT WHAT YOU CALL SKILLS? man you sing like barney, If its fine with me its fine with you,now I will be able to gut you,skin you,leave you for the dead,better run now,got 15 seconds to go,dont fool around,town,and act like a clown now RUN,RUN RUN,go find yo,mamma,go find yo-sheep,or else you'll find a bad beat for your new ringtone.
(Hook) You cant find Hope,You cant find me,Nope, try to hide,find a dead bride, You think you can see,me,you go missing,ill find you,now check who that is behind you, Now,Now,Fool Never look behind you just because you think you cool,dosnt mean to go around singing bad albums-go around,town,skrewin' around,(2x)
(Verse Two) I look at my wall of pictures of my childhood,running,screaming,swimming,but then when i grew up i saw that Hope light gleaming,i saw you the next day,man you think you can escape HAHA,just saw that yout girlfriend is goin' to hot-topic,ill bring her back and we'll have a fine picnic,of her just eating you,man you just TRY to act like a fool,NO your not cool,now go find your girlfriend before i find her. |
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| 01 Apr 2013 10:13 PM |
| Love the wedding metaphor. |
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| 06 Apr 2013 04:08 AM |
Sir, your provoking music.
If your a song writer the first thing to it is you never add exclamation points periods, or commas. Anything your intended in using grammar. The song has a nice charm to it. Just that I don't find it that you should have commas after ever sentence. It ends up becoming a long strands of letters crumbled together In a nonsensical way. |
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| 06 Apr 2013 10:20 AM |
| Not really a 'song'. It only has 2 verses, and no chorus or bridge...I give it a 3/10. |
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| 06 Apr 2013 10:22 AM |
| ^ Coming from the person who takes three words and repeats them back and forth with her other band member |
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| 06 Apr 2013 10:40 AM |
| We may not be able to write songs but I can sure as heck judge them. |
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| 06 Apr 2013 11:19 AM |
| hey i got my 50 views i dont need anything els.YAY!!! lol |
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