chewit9
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:38 AM |
http://imgur.com/R5g1jqI
I'm trying to draw a hat, but I really can't tell if it looks right.
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chewit9
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:39 AM |
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chewit9
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:40 AM |
@mr
I'll take that as a no?
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chewit9
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:42 AM |
bump ..
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dylanb7
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:43 AM |
| It looks like an cap what are you trying to draw? |
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toadjesse
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:43 AM |
| The hat looks okay but the head? under it not. |
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chewit9
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:44 AM |
trying to draw a cap.
and what is wrong with the head?
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:45 AM |
| I like it, but textures would make it look better. |
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:45 AM |
Not too bad. Needs improvement.
+1 respect for music taste :P
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chewit9
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:46 AM |
Is this better or worse?
http://imgur.com/EAJ7HIS
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chewit9
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:47 AM |
@robo
Why thankyou :)
@whoever said it looks shaggy
If by shaggy you mean messy, that's how I draw :)
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ThisIsIce
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:47 AM |
the head is supposed to fit in the cap, you've got the head too big.
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chewit9
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:48 AM |
@this
Look at the second image.
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:49 AM |
| The head still looks fat, the front of the face should be smooth like the back. |
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chewit9
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:49 AM |
@creepy
since when did faces have fronts and backs? qq
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chewit9
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| 05 Apr 2013 08:52 AM |
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| 05 Apr 2013 09:18 AM |
the head is supposed to be inside the big part of the cap, unless your head is deformed, that drawing is unnatural.
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| 05 Apr 2013 09:20 AM |
@this
Did you look at the second image?
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| 05 Apr 2013 09:24 AM |
| Yes, we both looked at the second image and we're telling you the head isn't shaped right. |
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chewit9
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| 05 Apr 2013 09:25 AM |
I can't see what is wrong with it.. :c
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| 05 Apr 2013 09:27 AM |
| The left side of the head sticks out awkwardly. It should be smooth/flat and line up with the top part of the hat like the right side does. |
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| 05 Apr 2013 09:28 AM |
Um. The head is squiffle, but I guess it's the hat you're focusing on. As a sketch, very good shaping. But add 3D shading effects, color, maybe a few seams?
~ If a quiz makes you quizzical, what does a test make you? |
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