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Re: •{[¥]}•Venzia Has Fallen {•} Chapter One•{[¥]}•

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trevorholloway is not online. trevorholloway
Joined: 24 Nov 2010
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05 Apr 2013 08:45 AM
"Get all alive bodies out if the mess! I only want survivors!" Iroc cried. The Venezian trade center was destroyed. All 4 buildings were demolished. FEAR Comets were hijacked and ran straight into the buildings. The Octagon (military HQ) was also destroyed. It was a tragic mess. Who could have done this?
"Sir, it has been cleared no survivors. And the last building has not fell, we still have to search another fallen area. I will report back to you when we are finished." Robloxboop explained. "Hurry up, I don't want to lose any more soldiers today." Iroc demanded. "Okay we'll all work in different areas, everyone pick an area and search for bodies. We must work quick we don't want to get hit by the las-."Roblox said when he paused, did you guys hear that?! Damn it, we need to get out of here the last building is falling! Go go!!
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"I am sorry to state, but we have lost over 6000 people a week ago, this tragic event has killed too many people, hundreds of our own men died from that last fall. As the terrorists that caused this damage will pay for he damage. Justice will be done." Iroc announced to the public on television.
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The whole division of FEAR was attending the memorial that concluded the death of all of the men serving in the vent, that died in the mess. One of the many names, was robloxboop, whom led the whole operation of recovery so other people nigh live another day. Justice will be done, the terrorists will regret the actions, but this will just be the beginning.
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nitron99999 is not online. nitron99999
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05 Apr 2013 08:49 AM
First, like the story BTW can you put me in? :3
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NickiMinajxx212 is not online. NickiMinajxx212
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05 Apr 2013 08:50 AM
Very good bro! I should be in it if your doing some more :D
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Doop99 is not online. Doop99
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05 Apr 2013 08:52 AM
^ Same. But Trevor. If you do put me in call me Roxas in the story k?
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trevorholloway is not online. trevorholloway
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05 Apr 2013 08:53 AM
K. Doop, I about put you in robloxs' spot.
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Doop99 is not online. Doop99
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05 Apr 2013 08:58 AM
K.
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georgek22 is not online. georgek22
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05 Apr 2013 09:01 AM
Now, where's your awesome old friend that helped you lots part?

Nice story, always better with me in it though. :3
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trevorholloway is not online. trevorholloway
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05 Apr 2013 09:03 AM
Lol. You'll be in it. You'll have one of the best parts!
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georgek22 is not online. georgek22
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05 Apr 2013 09:12 AM
Really? :D

Now it'll be good. c:
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NickiMinajxx212 is not online. NickiMinajxx212
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05 Apr 2013 09:18 AM
Trever I'm Your sis why can't I have a big part :c
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trevorholloway is not online. trevorholloway
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05 Apr 2013 09:18 AM
"Sir, what is your response to this?" Iroc asked SONIC. "We'll, we must first find out who has done this to our beloved homeland. We have to find any evidence that could clue us into who did this." SONIC said. "Yes
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{[•3 Months Later•]}
"SONIC, sir, we have all the proof you need. We know what disgraceful clan did this. The group identifies themselves as, Team Domino?" Iroc stated. "Very well, we'll launch an attack in 2 months, get all forces ready for battle. We are going to war. Iroc left the room very excited that we will be answering the call.
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"I'm giving you all details now, when we arrive base in Domino, we will prepare out base and will head out for the first raid tomorrow. We have trained you all non-stop for 2 months, you are all ready. We must be prepared." Trevorholloway told his squad. "I will be your squad leader for the war. Our objective is to control evidence and clues about Team Domino. We will be raiding almost every day and night. 10 minutes until landing."
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"TAKE POSITION THIS PLANE'S GOING DOWN!!! GET INTO POSITION!!
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trevorholloway is not online. trevorholloway
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05 Apr 2013 09:19 AM
After last part, I meant to say, said GeorgeK. On the crashing part.
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NickiMinajxx212 is not online. NickiMinajxx212
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05 Apr 2013 09:28 AM
*Trevor
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trevorholloway is not online. trevorholloway
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05 Apr 2013 09:29 AM
I'm going to add one every five minutes, so 2 more!
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trevorholloway is not online. trevorholloway
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05 Apr 2013 09:30 AM
Comments*
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georgek22 is not online. georgek22
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05 Apr 2013 10:43 AM
Amazing so far, can't wait for more!
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etboy2 is not online. etboy2
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05 Apr 2013 10:45 AM
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trevorholloway is not online. trevorholloway
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05 Apr 2013 11:46 AM
"Is everyone okay?!" Trevor asked. They all muttered yes as they picked themselves up slowly. "We're only about 1 mile from base, we must be very cautious to get there." George exclaimed. They traveled slowly to make sure they were not fought seeming how they are try to reach a secret base. "Shhh, I hear someone, Nicki, get your sniper rifle ready. It seems to be- a FEAR soldier, lets meet out to him. Don't confront him wrong or he might shoot." Trevor stated. "FEAR Replicas! We crashed our plane!" Trevor yelled. The team of 12 boarded a Humber as they went to base and set up camp.
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"Alright guys, we're going to be joining along the regular forces and raiding a base that has one of the Team Domino supervisors. It seems to be a well secured place, we will send half the team on the top , and half on bottom. Once we have killed everyone, take any intell you see." Trevor explained. "George and I will be leading the operation, I will be with the group on the roof, George will be with the team on the bottom. Never leave our missions." There was a minute of pause. The pilot then yelled out 5 minutes until drop off.
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"Go Go Go!! Follow your task and let's make this easy!" Trevor yelled with excitement.
George reached the door on the ground with his squad and they entered surprised the door was unlocked, Trevor went in the top with his squad through a window. It was silent for both squads, until fire from the back hit George in the back as he was lucky to have armor on, it was an easy wave. Squad Echo, on top was having no problem tearing through Dominos one by one. They met each other and searched everywhere but one room, they entered together. They saw at least 30 men waiting for their arrival. Nobody was shot.
It was cleared the HR was dead and gained very valuable information. One bit of intell told them exactly who they would need to go after.
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PurelyRandom is not online. PurelyRandom
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05 Apr 2013 11:55 AM
This doesn't belong in this forum. It probably belongs in that Books Forum or Media Forum.

Don't argue, or I'll bring out the rule book posted at the top of this forum.


It clearly states that this forum is for creating fictional stories to ROLEPLAY your characters in. This is just a story, no role-playing.
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Quasar99 is not online. Quasar99
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05 Apr 2013 12:05 PM
@purely
have you been living in a cave the past months
we accept stories here

"ROSE: THE BUBBLES VON SALAMANCER MEMOIRIAL LIBRARAY!!!"
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PurelyRandom is not online. PurelyRandom
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05 Apr 2013 12:06 PM
oh. well in that case...


Look at all the FEAR kiddies praise their fake gods with virtual weapons.
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georgek22 is not online. georgek22
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05 Apr 2013 12:52 PM
Look at you reading it.

Great story! More! More! More!
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PurelyRandom is not online. PurelyRandom
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05 Apr 2013 04:36 PM
@george; Did I read it? No. Just viewed the posts below it, and all praised him.

Then I look at their primary group, FEAR.

You moron.
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1perrytheplatypus is not online. 1perrytheplatypus
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05 Apr 2013 04:56 PM
... Wait.. How could 6,000 robloxians die? This is.. impossible..
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TaiWolf1234 is not online. TaiWolf1234
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05 Apr 2013 05:00 PM
Purely... T: If you're not going to offer constructive criticism, then why post at all.
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