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Re: Revolt (a sci-fi RP)

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evilsweetblock is not online. evilsweetblock
Joined: 24 Apr 2011
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30 Mar 2013 01:14 AM
Story: In the year of 8791,the empire, a small mercanary group led by a harsh dictator, established its self. and in the course of 9 years, 80% of the world fell to its power, as the final countries made their stand, but all efforts were helpless. everything was lost. they were all conquered by the year of 9002. but in the year of 9005, a man decided to stand up to the empire and established a group of rebels named "the fighters" (there werent many groups to take the simple and cheesy names then, ok?) year after year those two fought, until one day the "fighters" had established a secure foothold in the land, all though it was small, it gave enough hope to start a fire! In the following years, thousands flocked to the "fighters" to help uin the fight, but alas, they were still outnumbered 5 to 1. now it is 9025, and you are either a recruit from the fighters or a faceless soldier of the empire, the fate of the world is in your hands (and a few others).

Charector sheet:
Name:
age:
Rank:
Squad name:
Squad members:
Weapon: Karkland shock rifle (20/200), lazer sword (100% charge)
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bebithetuffle is not online. bebithetuffle
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30 Mar 2013 01:15 AM
This is over 7000 years into the future.

I dont think you could handle something so complicated and so far away.
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evilsweetblock is not online. evilsweetblock
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30 Mar 2013 01:22 AM
Name: Michael
Age: 34
Rank: MSgt
Class: sniper
Squad name: the tylorians
Squad members: jarre (pvt),
Keith "goliath" (Sgt),
frankie (pvt),
Larry "jonboy" davis (Corp.)
Hecter "skinner" jones (1stPvt)
Weapon: gigas Mark XVII scoped rifle (14/280) lazer knife (100% charge)

oh and heres some classes and wepaons:
infantry:
Karkland shock rifle 20/200 ammo lazer sword (100% charge)
Medic:
Heal gun, auto-pistol 12/120 ammo
Sniper:
gigas Mark XVII scoped rifle (14/280 ammo) lazer knife (100% charge)
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evilsweetblock is not online. evilsweetblock
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30 Mar 2013 01:23 AM
But my good man, I've done this already. I've wrote a book on it, I've got the world lay-out, I am perfectly prepared. (totally was doing this since hmmmm I was 8?)
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evilsweetblock is not online. evilsweetblock
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30 Mar 2013 01:27 AM
Name: Michael
Age: 34
Alliegence: fighters (pick fighters or the empire)
Rank: MSgt
Class: sniper
Squad name: the tylorians
Squad members: jarre (pvt),
Keith "goliath" (Sgt),
frankie (pvt),
Larry "jonboy" davis (Corp.)
Hecter "skinner" jones (1stPvt)
Weapon: gigas Mark XVII scoped rifle (14/280) lazer knife (100% charge)

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bebithetuffle is not online. bebithetuffle
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30 Mar 2013 01:34 AM
A book
You wrote and published a book
based on this stupid little idea.

You cant spell Laser right.

And what are you now?
Nine?
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evilsweetblock is not online. evilsweetblock
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30 Mar 2013 02:32 AM
Eh shutup. I worked hard on this, and if you want to hate, hate somewhere else. and yes, I spelled laser lazer because I wanted to because thats what 90% of americas's population believes. and no, it isnt published, but it is very good. ok? now seriously if you dont like it go somewhere else, theres no point in wasting time to post hate comments. and no. I am 12.
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rufusshinra4 is not online. rufusshinra4
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30 Mar 2013 03:16 AM
Charector sheet:
Name:Mr,Death
age:27
Gender:Male
Rank:Captian
Squad name:BLACKWATCH
Squad members:SGT DELTA,CORPORAL ULTRA,PRIVATE JIM,PRIVATE JER,PRIVATE,Yuri.
Weapon: Karkland shock rifle (20/200), lazer sword (100% charge)
Appearance:Wears a Black Uniform with Huge Shoulder pads and Knee pads,wears a Standard Backpack,Wears a Gas MASK with Red visors and such.Also has a Black Military Helmet.Also is 6'5 in height.

ROLEPLAYING Example:
Mr.Death

Moves to Hallway,looks behind him signals his Squad to move up go in Breach mode.They quickly,I set up the breach charge.It blows up we go in Guns blazing.Killing off the whatever was in the room.We collected the intel.Ran out of the building.Then we contacted HQ and Heli came we got out of the Zone.Hit and run...and grab...
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thejuiceypie is not online. thejuiceypie
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30 Mar 2013 06:20 AM
How do we know if it is very good?

Owners bias?
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Supermariomania is not online. Supermariomania
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30 Mar 2013 07:00 AM
Then post the book, so we can congratulate you on your amazing achievement or laugh at its stupidity, depending on how good it is.
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zoozooba444 is not online. zoozooba444
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30 Mar 2013 07:30 AM
I would hate to see the book if you cant spell the simplest of words like Character and Laser.

Help us lord....
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thejuiceypie is not online. thejuiceypie
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30 Mar 2013 08:34 AM
If he's rich he can pay the critics like most books do anyway
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simsf1 is not online. simsf1
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30 Mar 2013 08:51 AM
The only thing funnier than your lack of simple spelling skills (i.e. saying 'all though' rather than 'although') is that giant space in your head where sentence structure and Proper nouns should be. You never even capitalized the names of two MAJOR factions, both of which were perfect examples of your ignorance in the simple world of Proper nouns. And you don't even know when to put THOUGH rathr than ALTHOUGH. I'd suggest going to school a bit longer before making a big fool of yourself and claiming being at something for a while automatically makes you good.
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evilsweetblock is not online. evilsweetblock
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30 Mar 2013 05:46 PM
Well sims, I want you to know, that I wrote this at 4:00 A.M. so I was very, very tired. I am a very good speller but at 4:00 A.M. I got tired and when your tired, you cant spell right.. now im done with this forum some hater ruined it already.
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bebithetuffle is not online. bebithetuffle
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30 Mar 2013 06:35 PM
You said "speller"

"speller"
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FlawlessDrMario is not online. FlawlessDrMario
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30 Mar 2013 06:51 PM
Normally I'm not much of a critic (I think) but ya needs a lot more work. You're 12? Ha you are not even old enough to be on Roblox....
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lien587 is not online. lien587
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30 Mar 2013 07:06 PM
I'm Eleven, And I write better stuff than this. And, I use proper grammar on Youtube Comments.

"You spin me baby, right round, right round, in a manner depriving me of an inertial reference frame, baby!"
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simsf1 is not online. simsf1
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30 Mar 2013 07:53 PM
Uh.... DrMario, this site is for ages 7+
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bebithetuffle is not online. bebithetuffle
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30 Mar 2013 07:53 PM
Forums are for 13+
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simsf1 is not online. simsf1
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30 Mar 2013 08:11 PM
Yeah, but DrMario said he was too young for ROBLOX.
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bebithetuffle is not online. bebithetuffle
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30 Mar 2013 08:13 PM
He meant the forums.
Dont mind him, he's just an idiot
and stop capitalizing ROBLOX
It's stupid.
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simsf1 is not online. simsf1
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30 Mar 2013 08:25 PM
No, it's not technically 'stupd' wen the name of the site is literally stylized as ROBLOX. Chill, bro.

Damn, Zommie was right.
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evilsweetblock is not online. evilsweetblock
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02 Apr 2013 08:27 PM
Yay, people helping me :D


You no like my stories? why dont you read one before gonig into absumptions. this is my first book, and I havent got a single negative comment :3

http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=70341468
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TaiWolf1234 is not online. TaiWolf1234
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02 Apr 2013 08:30 PM
Bebi is so butthurt
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bebithetuffle is not online. bebithetuffle
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02 Apr 2013 08:41 PM
Thank you, you ignorant and somehow loveable zealot.
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