saintboy
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| 20 Feb 2013 05:03 PM |
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Based over traditions Young kids with wishes We were made to survive, but who could grab their attention The devilz pulling them closer, industry full of vultures Striking the hearts of many, when plenty of us were soldiers What happened to original, what happened to the visuals? I feel like these game fouls get more and more intentional But someone has to stop it, change possession on the topic Motivate the people to understand the real logic No matter where you’re from, you’re only left with what’s in your pocket See this is true America; no vision is truly scary as Walking down a road knowing u might not even make it back
(ChorusX2) This is nothing more than a message, Su1cidal aggression Picture perfect progression 4play with a peasant With patience as my attention Tension is escalating so I do this in remembrance Of the soldiers who never made it.
Create toe tagz, I’m vicious Brainwashin attendants The flow is legendary, wear my soul just like a pendent I just hope u see the vision I just hope I made it clear I’m near, witty bars of wisdom Known as a cavalier Artillery through your ears If J3sus weren’t a g0d, there would be nothing left to fear Tell these dudes I’m back, and I’m coming harder than ever Bruce Wayne, Michael Jordan, my inspiration is better So everyday its rise and grind Every minute its time to shine Mama said the world was mine, so ima do it till I die …. Ima do it till I die… Yea ima do it till I die
(ChorusX2) This is nothing more than a message, Su1cidal aggression Picture perfect progression Foreplay with a peasant With patience as my attention Tension is escalating so I do this in remembrance Of the soldiers who never made it. I’m gone….
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Skyriak
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| 20 Feb 2013 06:04 PM |
| u got sum 4 real shi dog kep on goin' doe 4 realz mak like slim |
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saintboy
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| 20 Feb 2013 07:42 PM |
| this is super tough bro good work keep it up ! |
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johnb
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| 20 Feb 2013 08:01 PM |
| Yo this beat waz TUFF! MEDi! Aggravated ASSAULT! Big ups |
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johnb
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| 20 Feb 2013 08:07 PM |
| Yo we were made to survive like TERMINATOR! |
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saintboy
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| 20 Feb 2013 08:21 PM |
| Thanks y'all. I appreciate the feedback. |
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| 20 Feb 2013 08:28 PM |
Eh ok. But I think your rhymes are used in a lot of songs so you need a bit of a difference from them. I think I would consider you a good rapper if you improve a bit more... |
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johnb
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| 20 Feb 2013 08:29 PM |
| Yo this tune is so MEDi that I'd use the hand you wrote the lyrics on to wipe |
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| 20 Feb 2013 08:31 PM |
Progression *
Anyways yeah, just a few corrections and such. :/ |
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saintboy
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| 20 Feb 2013 08:34 PM |
| @biskit Okay. And the good thing is real life I have a good flow. But I usually always freestyle so i'm still getting use to writing lyrics. Probably about my 5th time |
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johnb
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| 20 Feb 2013 08:37 PM |
| Yo in real life I bet you got so much flow you get all the dubs and all the wimmin. You must got more flow than what's flowin out yo flowhole if you know what I mean (little downs irritable bowl syndrome), big ups. |
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saintboy
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| 20 Feb 2013 09:14 PM |
| It isnt bad.....quite nice actually, good job. |
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saintboy
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| 20 Feb 2013 09:25 PM |
SaintBoy now that I think about it your pretty good not that bad really. http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=89851950 |
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johnb
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| 20 Feb 2013 09:25 PM |
| Saint meet me at the hospital roleplay AND BRING GODIVAS! Imma give out a munky wrench tonight |
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| 20 Feb 2013 09:31 PM |
| Very good work , I see alot of talent in you . |
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saintboy
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| 20 Feb 2013 09:54 PM |
@biskit I left u feedback
@john sounds like a plan lol
@road thanks man |
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johnb
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| 20 Feb 2013 09:56 PM |
| Big ups. Now I can't wait to receive a big up from you. |
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saintboy
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| 20 Feb 2013 11:01 PM |
| What does Big ups mean ? Because It sounds positive to me. But I seen some comments you posted leaning towards the negative side. And you said big ups lol I'm just wondering |
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iwantpsp
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| 21 Feb 2013 02:11 AM |
| Join unlimited records and your signed bro... |
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LilRac
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