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saintboy is not online. saintboy
Joined: 05 Apr 2008
Total Posts: 77
20 Feb 2013 05:03 PM
The message

Based over traditions
Young kids with wishes
We were made to survive, but who could grab their attention
The devilz pulling them closer, industry full of vultures
Striking the hearts of many, when plenty of us were soldiers
What happened to original, what happened to the visuals?
I feel like these game fouls get more and more intentional
But someone has to stop it, change possession on the topic
Motivate the people to understand the real logic
No matter where you’re from, you’re only left with what’s in your pocket
See this is true America; no vision is truly scary as
Walking down a road knowing u might not even make it back

(ChorusX2) This is nothing more than a message,
Su1cidal aggression
Picture perfect progression
4play with a peasant
With patience as my attention
Tension is escalating so
I do this in remembrance
Of the soldiers who never made it.

Create toe tagz, I’m vicious
Brainwashin attendants
The flow is legendary, wear my soul just like a pendent
I just hope u see the vision
I just hope I made it clear
I’m near, witty bars of wisdom
Known as a cavalier
Artillery through your ears
If J3sus weren’t a g0d, there would be nothing left to fear
Tell these dudes I’m back, and I’m coming harder than ever
Bruce Wayne, Michael Jordan, my inspiration is better
So everyday its rise and grind
Every minute its time to shine
Mama said the world was mine, so ima do it till I die
…. Ima do it till I die… Yea ima do it till I die

(ChorusX2) This is nothing more than a message,
Su1cidal aggression
Picture perfect progression
Foreplay with a peasant
With patience as my attention
Tension is escalating so
I do this in remembrance
Of the soldiers who never made it.
I’m gone….
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Skyriak is not online. Skyriak
Joined: 17 Feb 2013
Total Posts: 142
20 Feb 2013 06:04 PM
u got sum 4 real shi dog kep on goin' doe 4 realz mak like slim
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saintboy is not online. saintboy
Joined: 05 Apr 2008
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20 Feb 2013 06:42 PM
Appreciate it
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stuntman14 is not online. stuntman14
Joined: 05 Mar 2008
Total Posts: 12
20 Feb 2013 07:42 PM
this is super tough bro good work keep it up !
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johnb is not online. johnb
Joined: 21 Nov 2007
Total Posts: 24998
20 Feb 2013 08:01 PM
Yo this beat waz TUFF! MEDi! Aggravated ASSAULT! Big ups
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Shadybrute is not online. Shadybrute
Joined: 02 Aug 2011
Total Posts: 1725
20 Feb 2013 08:07 PM
9.5/10

Really good stuff.
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johnb is not online. johnb
Joined: 21 Nov 2007
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20 Feb 2013 08:07 PM
Yo we were made to survive like TERMINATOR!
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saintboy is not online. saintboy
Joined: 05 Apr 2008
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20 Feb 2013 08:21 PM
Thanks y'all. I appreciate the feedback.
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biskit7824 is not online. biskit7824
Joined: 02 Oct 2010
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20 Feb 2013 08:28 PM
Eh ok.
But I think your rhymes are used in a lot of songs so you need a bit of a difference from them.
I think I would consider you a good rapper if you improve a bit more...
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johnb is not online. johnb
Joined: 21 Nov 2007
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20 Feb 2013 08:29 PM
Yo this tune is so MEDi that I'd use the hand you wrote the lyrics on to wipe
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biskit7824 is not online. biskit7824
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20 Feb 2013 08:31 PM
Progression *

Anyways yeah, just a few corrections and such. :/
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saintboy is not online. saintboy
Joined: 05 Apr 2008
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20 Feb 2013 08:34 PM
@biskit Okay. And the good thing is real life I have a good flow. But I usually always freestyle so i'm still getting use to writing lyrics. Probably about my 5th time
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johnb is not online. johnb
Joined: 21 Nov 2007
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20 Feb 2013 08:37 PM
Yo in real life I bet you got so much flow you get all the dubs and all the wimmin. You must got more flow than what's flowin out yo flowhole if you know what I mean (little downs irritable bowl syndrome), big ups.
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saintboy is not online. saintboy
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20 Feb 2013 08:41 PM
Yea bro
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sweetiecakes67 is not online. sweetiecakes67
Joined: 30 Oct 2010
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20 Feb 2013 09:14 PM
It isnt bad.....quite nice actually, good job.
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saintboy is not online. saintboy
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20 Feb 2013 09:22 PM
appreciate it
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biskit7824 is not online. biskit7824
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20 Feb 2013 09:25 PM
SaintBoy now that I think about it your pretty good not that bad really.
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=89851950
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johnb is not online. johnb
Joined: 21 Nov 2007
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20 Feb 2013 09:25 PM
Saint meet me at the hospital roleplay AND BRING GODIVAS! Imma give out a munky wrench tonight
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RoadToRiches is not online. RoadToRiches
Joined: 11 Oct 2012
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20 Feb 2013 09:31 PM
Very good work , I see alot of talent in you .
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saintboy is not online. saintboy
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20 Feb 2013 09:54 PM
@biskit I left u feedback

@john sounds like a plan lol

@road thanks man
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johnb is not online. johnb
Joined: 21 Nov 2007
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20 Feb 2013 09:56 PM
Big ups. Now I can't wait to receive a big up from you.
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saintboy is not online. saintboy
Joined: 05 Apr 2008
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20 Feb 2013 11:01 PM
What does Big ups mean ? Because It sounds positive to me. But I seen some comments you posted leaning towards the negative side. And you said big ups lol I'm just wondering
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TheSandusky is not online. TheSandusky
Joined: 17 Feb 2013
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21 Feb 2013 12:50 AM
im black
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iwantpsp is not online. iwantpsp
Joined: 07 Sep 2010
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21 Feb 2013 02:11 AM
Join unlimited records and your signed bro...
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LilRac is not online. LilRac
Joined: 17 Aug 2012
Total Posts: 572
21 Feb 2013 05:12 AM
Not bad Saint.
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