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Re: Cleavepool's Revenge Chapter 5

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Esabella1026 is not online. Esabella1026
Joined: 23 Aug 2011
Total Posts: 65
05 May 2012 04:55 PM
(this is a warriors fan fiction so if you dont read warriors then this might not make sense)


Sandstorm was devistated. Cleavepool was thrilled. It was all going according to plan. Blaming Sandstorm was just perfect! But she had to figure out who she was going to kill next.
When the cats in the clearing started to go back to their duties, Cleavepool saw a small cream colored apprentice looking talking to Firestar. It was Berrypaw, wondering who should mentor him, now that Firestar believed that Brambleclaw was dead.
Cleavepool narrowed her amber eyes. Yes that brat would do. The clan would like like the peace and quiet. She smirked and walked over to Firestar and Berrypaw. "Excuse me, Firestar, but I could help mentor him. I can fight too, you know."
Firestar looked at Cleavepool. "Alright, Leafpool. You may mentor him, for today."
Cleavepool nodded and turned to look at Berrypaw. The cream colored apprentice grumbled, he did not like the fact that a medicine cat was going to mentor him, even if it was just for a day.
"Oh, come on Berrypaw! Don't be so grumpy. I can fight," Cleavepool's eyes narrowed a bit more and glowed with excitement. "Very well."
When they got to the training hollow, Cleavepool stood a few tail lengths in front of Berrypaw. "Now have you seen this move?"
Berrypaw rolled his eyes and when he looked back to Cleavepool, she wasn't there. He panicked, and turned his head slightly to look behind him, only to see Cleavepool lunge towards him. Suddenly the world was black.
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The cream colored apprentice opened his eyes slowly. His vision was blurry, ans his head hurt. Grumbling, he closed his eyes again. Berrypaw went to move his paw, but to his horror, he discovered that it was held in place. His front legs were sore, like he had put a lot of weight on them. His eyes shot open.
Berrypaw found himself strapped to a tree, it looked like a cross. He started strugling, tugging at what was binding him, trying desprately to get free. A gental voice spoke.
"Oh, you're awake now. It's about time. Lazy apprentice."
The young tom's eyes darted to where the voice came from. Cleavepool stood three tail lengths away. Berrypaw's eyes widened even more with the sudden realization.
"You..." He breathed.
"I'm sorry, I didn't really catch that. What did you say?"
"It was you," He spoke louder. "You did it. You killed Them! You murdurer!"
Cleavepool smirked. "I see you finally came to your senses. Of course I killed them."
The brown tabby she-cat walked closer, stoping when she was face to troat with Berrypaw, and looked up to meet his gaze. "and I'll kill you too." She whispered.
Berrypaw stopped struggling for a minute, just long enough to yell back at Cleavepool.
"You can't do that! Firestar will know! He will come looking for me, and he will find out that you were behind everything! He will exile you, if not have you killed! You won't get away with this!"
"Oh, but I will, young one. If I couldn't make him believe that I was innocent, Sandstorm would still be in camp, basking in the sunlight thinking she's the center of attention."
Berrypaw suddenly realized what was going on. He realized that he probabbly wouldn't make it out of this alive. All he could do about the situation was imagine what horrors were in store for him. Though of course, the worst that he could imagine, was nowhere near what was going to happen.
Quickly, the tailless apprentice snapped out of his train of thought and started thrashing again. Cleavepool backed up, giving him some space so he could flail to himself. She turned, and walked to where she had kept a few torture devices, her trusty cleaver being one. She picked it up, feeling the rough, yet smooth, wooden handle on her tounge. She smirked around it.
She quickly trotted back to where Berrypaw was, making sure that the sun hit the blade in just a way that it glimmered, if just for a second. As soon as the apprentice saw the weapon, he freaked out even more.
"Oh come on Berrypaw! Don't freak out." She set the cleaver down. "I'm not going to use that yet. You will last much, much longer. And lasting longer is a bad thing, trust me."

The brown tabby she-cat lifted one of her paws and flexed her claws. This was going to be fun. She set it down after Berrypaw was even more frightened, and turned to start walking away, but instead of actually leaving, she turned quick, and jumped towards the bound younger cat. She slashed out, and a small amount of red landed on the grass.
Berrypaw shreiked in pain, and turned his head as much as he could, which wasn't much sense he was tied down, and looked at the new gash on his chest. Blood oozed out of the wound, and it stung. Cleavepool, now a good tail-length away from the young tom, turned back to him. Berrypaw lifted his shaking head, and looked at Cleavepool. "...Please... don't... don't hurt me Leafpool..." he gasped. "I never did anything bad to you..."
Cleavepool's lip twitched downward, just barely. She hid her face, and grumbled her reply, "...You did... You did... You all did! You all hurt me! And you all will pay! Do not deny it!" She had started at a whisper but it rose to a screach. Lunging foreward, she slashed at Berrypaw's arm. She slashed, and slashed, and slashed, until his cries stopped. As soon as he stopped making those noises of pain, she lifted her head, and looked at his face.
"Berrypaw... Berrypaw!" She drug her claws across his cheek. "You answer me when I'm talking to you!" He looked up, his terror returned, suddenly mutliplied. "Don't you dare go off into a place in your mind! Don't avoid your fate!"
Tears were streaming down his face when he turned to look at Cleavepool, this was the only indicator to say that he was paying attention, he did not say anything. His lips remained sealed. Cleavepool spoke just one word. "Good."
Cleavepool was about to go back to slashing his arm, but she stopped, and prodded it with her foot first. The apprentice made no indication that he felt anything, but he wasn't in his head, trying to avoid it. Cleavepool growled.
"So I see you can't feel this arm. Lets work on the other, shall we?"
Berrypaw just closed his eyes.
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Red. Everything was red. Sharp green blades of grass were stained with red. Patches of dirt, once a dry brown color were now a chocolate-red. Cleavepool's white toes were now a deep shade of red. Berrypaw's once cream pelt was now stained with blood. His eyes were closed still, but you could still see the rise and fall of his chest.
He wasn't quite finished yet. Cleavepool used her tail to brush against Berrypaw. She got no reaction. He may still be breathing, but he wouldn't be fun to torture anymore. Cleavepool frowned and lashed out, tearing open his throat. She watched whatever wasn't red already get dyed ruby.
Ruby is a beautiful color.
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The body was still warm, when she started dragging it away from where she was. She wanted to put it somewhere where it would cause an uproar, but the only place she could think of was near the camp. Placing the body near the camp, however, would be too big of a risk. She wasn't sure if she was willing to take that risk quite yet.
While she dragged the body, she desided she would take it to the ancient oak. It was near the water anyway, so she could clean the blood off of her paws while she was there. The body lazily slid over the fallen leaves and needles.
When she arrived at the giant tree, she drug the body into place, near the roots. The body lied awkwardly over a root and blood started pooling. Cleavepool smirked, and turned towards the water, she had to rinse the blood off.
The water was icy and cold, she hated it but she rather it clean her than her having to lick off all the blood. That would just take too long. She splashed around, and got out, shaking her paws as soon as she desided her fur was no longer that beautiful ruby color. Then slowly, Cleavepool made her way back to camp.
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MrGiraffe1 is not online. MrGiraffe1
Joined: 23 Jun 2009
Total Posts: 23833
05 May 2012 05:10 PM
Would you mind, perhaps, just keeping all the chapters in one thread?

It’s rather pointless for each one to have a new thread, it’s like each chapter getting its own book!

Sorry if this sounds rude, just really bugging me.
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Silverstorm79 is not online. Silverstorm79
Joined: 19 Mar 2012
Total Posts: 206
26 Mar 2013 02:15 PM
Woah. Amazing fan fiction, its written like the books their based off of, maybe even better. Though its somewhat distrubing how evil Cleavepool/Leafpool is in this. HAHAHA, She beat Tigerstar by a LANDSLIDE.
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