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| 25 Mar 2013 06:07 PM |
Stop, I am always told that, I try to not listen to them, But I end up soaking up the lies with my mentally mop, I strive to survive in such warfare and combat, And when I fall into such darkness I shall hear my sorrowful anthem, I know I am not the only one with pain, Though I can not see the others with it because they are hidding it just as much as me, We try to give the world one of our gifts, But our live seem to only go into vain, To us- they shall ever agree, We try to flee but end up running a lap straight down a cliff, But at least then when we fall into darkness, Maybe then we can forget about there heartlessness, And maybe then we shall not be judged books left on dusty shelves, And maybe then we can finally accept ourselves, We don't have to rise to the top, But we also don't have to stop
I was that kid that also sat alone, but I didn't just sit, I didn't just cry. I was a prey for ants trailing in my intestines like an farm, my throat was like a chinney, burning with such fire. I wished to open my mouth and choke others with the smoke, executing them. But I just couldn't, because it seemed like I was blindfolded trying to defend myself in such a cruel world but it continued to beat me a rod until I was on my knees. I curled in a ball trying to hide, trying to disappear, trying to forget those who I broke bread with and shared my heart with, cutting pieces of my personality- letting them eat it. Now to only see them preying upon my weakness.
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:10 PM |
This....This is sad..... I mean it in the way to be....
If this is the Truth.....I....I got no word to say on it....
If its a story....Well done..... |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:11 PM |
I read the first sentence and got bored.
í αm prícєlєss, вut í αm wíllíng tσ вαrgαín |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:15 PM |
Of course it is a story, a true one. All of our lives is a story and none of them are hard. That is why so many fairytales end with "happy ever after." But no this is no fairytale where I am a princess saved by a mighty knight, recused by a fierce warrior, recused because other cared about my prescene, because they cared when I was there so they risked someone to save me.
But no... No princess I am. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:15 PM |
...Still boring.
Also, did you say none of our lives are hard? :l
í αm prícєlєss, вut í αm wíllíng tσ вαrgαín |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:18 PM |
'All of our lives are a story and none of them are hard.'
Is that implying none of our lives are hard? :l
í αm prícєlєss, вut í αm wíllíng tσ вαrgαín |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:22 PM |
| Just another mistake, and of I did not mean to type that when I craft words speaking of this difficult life. Just another mistake for I am a person creating mistakes like everyone does. Why did you think I am Rian and not a rainbow? |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:28 PM |
tp;idlp
For every mop, there is a piece of copper. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:28 PM |
I have only seen one thing( On the Internet, mind you) that was sadder than this.... And it still involved bullying... I got something for this.... Here...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZAhpdXMh7NY |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:30 PM |
I didn't find this very sad at all.
í αm prícєlєss, вut í αm wíllíng tσ вαrgαín |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:31 PM |
| I just felt like I needed to express myself and now I see there are still others who choose to shut me out. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:33 PM |
I know the feeling to be bullied. People called me fat, they would spit on me call me names and punch, I had one "friend" and then he was being made fun of, for being my friend. He then made fun of me too. Sucky world we live in, huh.
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:33 PM |
@creative
Here we have a man with the name creative going against a story that is creative.
I wouldn't want him to read my stories. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:35 PM |
| 'The world is a hell for everyone, and the bully's make it hell to all......' Bullies are a problem I not only know, but have experienced. I am not alone... |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:36 PM |
Hey, I am not against the story I just found in uninteresting. It is my opinion; judging by all your reactions this is apparently a great story I just don't feel it.
í αm prícєlєss, вut í αm wíllíng tσ вαrgαín |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:38 PM |
| Again, this is not a fiction story, but a true one. I have been wore like a shirt, everyone bragging about me until they wear me out and throw me away. I am a fruitful tree before someone decides to chop me down and hurl me into the fire. I have been bullied harshly. I remember having my glasses smaked down numerous times, shoved around, threatened, insulted, cursed. But I didn't save anything until about three or two years later. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 06:40 PM |
You replied to another person posting their opinions.
One guy said it was sad, then you butt in and say "I don't find this sad at all." When we got the point the first two posts, and you came with it out of nowhere. Let people share their opinions, and don't butt in with your own opinions when you already stated them. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 07:00 PM |
| Sometimes some of us don't survive long enough for the rainbow. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 08:11 PM |
Look rain. I'm going to tell it like like it is. I'm not going to beat around the bush. Just because you are craving sympathy don't create a wannabe sob story. None of the rational thinkers want to hear it. We all know that you have been in a downward sprial after the third repost of GGBHS. None of of care or want to her your sob story.
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| 25 Mar 2013 08:18 PM |
| Sob story? Then you are saying that everyone is making a sob story when those who are hurt express themselves. We are never asking for prideful attention when we are already know we have been rejected that. I want to know if anyone out there can hear me, I know I am not the only one. But I want to hear from others. |
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| 25 Mar 2013 08:25 PM |
Yes, But those people don't cry to a children's game about it. Seriously, Grow up.
ι'м αη αηgєℓ ωιтн α ѕнσтgυη |
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| 25 Mar 2013 08:38 PM |
It's not that you're expressing yourself on a kids game, it's that you're expressing yourself on the internet. There are very little people that will give you positive feedback. or even care. From my point of view, this story is depressing and unnecessary. |
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