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| 23 Mar 2013 01:59 PM |
Yes, the classic plot.
1. Shred 2. moonlight 3. cool 4. crazy 5. anon 6. gleann 7. operationn00b 9. segasaturn 10. diamonddragonair
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Chapter 1/
It was Friday the 13th, TNT91 was throwing a big birthday bash at 9PM. Apparently, he was born on the 13th so yeah. Moonlight took extra care to make sure she looked lovely. With her sparkling blood red bow and a blood red dress to match, she was ready. Moonlight loved blood, gore and murder. Such fascinating topics! She didn't care if those stupid kids thought she was gross when she was the one to touch that dead deer next to the school during recess! Pfft. Anyway, Moonlight walked quietly to the mansion. She always wondered how TNT91 got so rich without doing anything. Oh well, she thought. The girl knocked on the door ten times, caressing the carved wooden interior. Ah, how she loved doors. Suddenly, the door creaked open and she saw a large mass of people. Everyone, all ten, had arrived. You could see TNT91 flirting with the pretty geann12348 or Shred sitting down and writing in his 'journal'. She smiled, this would be a wild night.
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| 23 Mar 2013 01:59 PM |
Continue.
And the Daleks. We're the only two left. There's no one else... REGENERATE! |
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:00 PM |
>You could see TNT91 flirting with the pretty geann12348
HAHHAHAAAHAA |
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:05 PM |
Continue, but you should make the next one longer. And, if you want, write it as a script instead of like this.
idk you don't hvae to obviously, it's just what i i like better but it's not really my choise because yeah
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:08 PM |
Chapter 2/
CrazyCharmanderFan was having an average chat with Shred. Of course, average meant Pokemon. Suddenly, he noticed a guest appear after 10 knocks, he himself had only knocked 9 times. Quite peculiar. He saw Moonlight. Oh yes, Moonlight. CrazyCharmander fan liked Moonlight, she was some chick called DiamondDragonair's friend. Of course, DiamondDragonair wasn't invited since TNT91 dislikes her, which was a bummer. He waved to Moonlight and walked toward her. "Heey!!" He said. "Hello, pleased to make your salutations." She nodded. "Uh.. Yeah. Please to make your... saladtations." Crazy said, forgetting the last word she said. Bummer. "So yo man, I've been thinkin'!!!" "What?" She asked, intrigued. "Let's make this the BEST night of our lives!!! :DDD" "Uh. Yes, it very well shall be the best night of our lives, I wouldn't have visited if it wouldn't." She said. I then walked over to Anon. He was always sooo quiet, but he was dignified, I guess. Suddenly, I heard an 11th knock on the door.
( 2nd chapters also tend to be boring )
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:09 PM |
| I kinda don't act like that but ok. |
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:10 PM |
| I'm so excited to see what happens next |
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:17 PM |
Chapter 3/
What a bore, he couldn't even stand next to Moonlight for a couple of seconds! She saw him walk over to Anonymous, and suddenly craved to see his blood splattered on the floor. Yum!
She walked over to TNT91, who was STILL flirting with Gleann. "Greetings, TNT91. Such a lovely party you have conducted." "yeah man. xD" He said, grabbing Gleann close. Gleann looked mildly awkward. Perhaps, she thought, Gleann wasn't expecting this. "anyway, ;), wanna hang out with us, gurlfriend?" He said while winking, obviously offering to flirt/whatever with him. "Depends. Do you have anything that will interest me?" "oh baby i got EVERYTHING." Moonlight smirked. "Then perhaps you have common sense?" She said as she pulled out a bottle, along with a small knife. "omg. i always knew u were physcho!!! xD" He said as he walked off with poor Gleann. Moonlight was left standing alone, how pitiful. She walked to the bathroom when suddenly the lights flickered off and then she heard a scream.
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:18 PM |
hurray for knives
continue pls |
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:19 PM |
| My eyes are 10x dialated O.O |
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:31 PM |
Chapter 4/
Crazy suddenly heard a shriek. Oh my Arceus!!!!!! I quickly raced over to the kitchen, where TNT91 and everyone else was. "What the lavender town was that???" He yelled, and then he looked at the ground. Dead. Dead. Dead.
Chapter 4/ Part 2/ Moonlight gazed upon the dead body before me. It was Gleann. She had blood all over her, and various wounds affecting her. It was tragic, yes. But Moonlight was resisting the urge to go lick all that blood off the floor and feast on the body! Yum! But alas, she was in front of people. She stared at Tnt91. "Somebody must call the police." She said. "This is..." Anonymous muttered to himself. Everyone was shaken. And then there was a shattering of glass.
( 4th chapters can be bad )
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:34 PM |
that is exactly how I would react
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:35 PM |
| is cool me cause I posted to sign up in your story :p |
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:36 PM |
This is what Moon truly looks like after this : http://im gur.co m/9zOde sa
If you can't see it, use magnification application/exe or something. And the Daleks. We're the only two left. There's no one else... REGENERATE! |
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:38 PM |
| I love how you made me act like Pokemon with "Oh my arceus" and "what in Lavender town was that?!" |
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:41 PM |
no one posted so
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thought someone would do it |
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| 23 Mar 2013 02:49 PM |
Le bawmb.
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