Quasar99
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:12 PM |
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After the death of Matthias; father of the to-be Warrior of Redwall Mattimeo; most hope was lost from the Redwallers. Feasts weren't as good at their formers; fights that had gone on had no vigor and vim in them. The Redwaller's weakness was the perfect time to strike. Tismut the Sly; son of a ferret whos name is not to be revealed; was a brown ferret, a streak of black going down his back and a war tattoo painted on his forehead. His dream was to destroy Redwall Abbey, whether it be by slaughtering them or taking it down brick by brick, every nip of sandstone would be gone and he would build his own fortress there; one that would be so melancholy even the happiest would cower in fear at it. And he would take it over, and discover the secrets of Martin the Warrior; before he destroys it. Everything would be lost. His only motive; a word that seemed to ring in his head like an eerie sound from a corridor, REVENGE!
His horde consisted of ferrets, weasels, stoats, rats, and sea vermin; all either captured to use as slaves or had been in his mercenary band before he gave it up to destroy Redwall Abbey for his father. His way would not be to take over redwall and slaughter everyone in it (though he would resort to that, surely!), but something rather mysterious. He used to be a normal ferret; usually wandering around, wondering about new things in the world. He went out one day with his father to find herbs and bushes of berries; possibly to get food. That day, his father had been struck with an arrow in a flash of light. He tried to run back; but was shot in the paw with a wooden shaft sticking out of it like a huge splinter. Thrown in a ditch, Tismut appeared to be dead until his mother found him; with the herbs and spices, and had fixed him up a bit. Tismut vowed that he would destroy Redwall some day; believing it was them who killed his father. But it wasn't.
We all know of the Tales of Redwall; some legends, some true. Each accomplishing a feat of popularity, saving the Abbey once again. But Tismut knows too great the power of the Redwall Warrior's Sword, knowing that it has killed many enemies before him. His plan will be greater than any other's. He would not kidnap the children of Redwall; He would not slaughter them all. And it's time to find out what he's going to do.
Make up your own story; this is KIND OF A SANDBOX!
[Suggestion of Animals to Be (you can have other animals if you want, like geese)]
Mouse Rat Sea Rat Badger Mole Shrew Otter Wildcat (although they are not liked, they are still allowed in Redwall Abbey) Bat (Very rare; it is unlikely I will accept your CS if you're a bat.) Hare Fox Weasel Stoat Frog
THESE ARE JUST *SUGGESTIONS* KAY?
[Something I REALLY NEED TO ESTABLISH: Dialects!]
Dialects are a lot different in Redwall than in the real world. Most mice, rats, and sea rats would rather say "matey" and "eh" than "friend" and "right". However, there is one dialect I really need to establish: Molespeak.
The molespeak is a lot different from the other dialects; usually substituting words for eachother and changing names around to match what they hear. Such as in Mossflower, Young Dinny says "Gonffen" and not "Gonff" and Foremole says "Abbaut Mordalfuzz" instead of "Abbot Mordalfus". They put unneccessary apostrophes in places, and have odd names for things. They are almost IMPOSSIBLE to understand, usually not having very good grammar.
[Rules]
1. Please, please, please, follow at least SOME of the lore of Redwall. You're in medieval times; not modern times. And you're animals, not humans.
2. This can technically be a sandbox; although please at least focus on the storyline of Tismut.
3. Be respectful of fellow RPers, dont leave them out of the game and if they do something wrong reply respectfully and not sadisticly. If you don't do this, you'll go through this one process: 1: Kick - Cant' RP for an hour 2: Halfban - Can't RP for a day 3: Ban - Can't rp for four days 4: Banban - Can't RP for two and a half weeks. 5: How did you get THIS far? - Can't RP for a month. 6: I give up. - Can't roleplay FOREVER
Other small things will only be a kick for 10 minutes.
[The CS]
NAME: RANK: (Such as Captain, General, Abbot, Brother, Sister, the Sly, such as Tismut is) AGE: (in seasons) TYPE OF ANIMAL: (see list above) APPEARANCE: (if different from normal animal) ARMOUR: SIDE: (Tismut, Redwall Abbey) MORALITY: (Like, what side you're leaning to. Good, Evil, Chaotic, in the middle, etc. You can still be part of Tismut and be good.) WEAPON: ITEMS: OTHER:
Yeah. Lesdothis.
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Quasar99
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:18 PM |
heeelllo?
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blobbob
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:18 PM |
Posting. Please hold.
I'm not quite finished. |
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blobbob
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:21 PM |
NAME: Jamal Silverpaw RANK: Brother AGE: 50 (I assume is old) TYPE OF ANIMAL: Badger APPEARANCE: The paws of Jamal are a bright silver color. Hence the name "Silverpaw" ARMOUR: He wears a dark brown monk robe SIDE: Redwall MORALITY: Good WEAPON: A large wooden club. ITEMS: A necklace of a small circle of silver with an emerald in the middle. OTHER: He has been in the abbey since anyone can remember. He is kind and gentle and enjoys food and drink. While a peaceful badger he can snap at a moments notice in defense of his beloved Redwall. You can usually find him sunbathing, swimming/fishing or reading a book. Assuming he's not eating. |
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Quasar99
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:23 PM |
accepted; suppose we wait for two more?
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:26 PM |
NAME: Histun Heatleaf RANK: Lord AGE: (in seasons) 72 TYPE OF ANIMAL: (see list above) Mole APPEARANCE: (if different from normal animal) He has a long, white streak down his back; the opposite of Tismut's. ARMOUR: A small titanium-lined leather chest plate; but he often wears his green robe and mittens. SIDE: (Tismut, Redwall Abbey) Redwall Abbey; although he comes from the east. MORALITY: Good WEAPON: A small dagger and a flail; but he rarely resorts to fighting. ITEMS: His mother's prized possession; a small claw-mitten in which you can still dig and not be chilly. OTHER: non
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:40 PM |
heeellllooo?
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