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| 22 Mar 2013 06:58 PM |
| It won't be bad. It will have OTers in it, it will have adventure and 7 chapters to it. Called OT: Ultimate Storm. |
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Zakro
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Litemare
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| 22 Mar 2013 06:59 PM |
just the name is cancerous
such a task will never be accomplished by such a terrible writer
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:00 PM |
| http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hfuERD3UOS4 |
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:00 PM |
pls include a part where i tak advantage of super64 it is my dream |
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jimmy2054
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:00 PM |
| You and good stories aren't exactly a match made in heaven. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:00 PM |
| The title needs more pizzazz. |
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7ZJ
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:01 PM |
| Okay, give us an introduction, newbie. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:04 PM |
Introduction: Prologue
"Now you will all fear death" "Destructive burn!" Fires spread everywhere and OTers are running, struggling for survival. Everyone lays down in pain. As fire rolls down the streets. Heaven and earth shake together. But a OTer with a red shirt and red pants comes. "So you came" Zero said.
OT: Ultimate Storm. |
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Litemare
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:06 PM |
| It isn't awful! My reviews are always negative or mediocre. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:07 PM |
| The story kinda lacks originality.. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:08 PM |
ever wonder why?
because you are awful |
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:09 PM |
Moonlight. I AM NOT AWFUL! STOP MESSING AROUND WITH ME AND GET THE HALE OUT OF HERE! |
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Litemare
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:11 PM |
yeah
no
I'm just speaking everyone's minds |
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:11 PM |
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hkIZR-CE3iY No... |
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:13 PM |
| The protagonist is me!!! JESUS! IT GIVES YOU A HINT!!! |
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| 22 Mar 2013 07:14 PM |
"Called OT: Ultimate Storm."
"OT:Ultimate Storm"
"Ultimate Storm"
are you serious
Yui810GhostofOTPast - getting banned since 2007 |
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