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| 22 Mar 2013 03:17 PM |
A small girl of maybe seven sprinted through her house, many pictures clenched in her fist. "MOM! MOM! MOM!," she screamed as she ran into the living room, crashing onto the couch. Her pictures, beautiful drawings of humans and other creatures, spilled onto her mother's lap. The girl rolled onto the ground, reaching for them. She then stared at the speckled carpet, taking a deep breaths, attempting to calm herself. The small pieces of paper slipped from her trembling fingers as she waited for her mother to look up from her latest project. After what felt like hours the little girl heard one soft, stern word. "What?" "Look at what I d-d-drew," the tiny brunette said as she held up two of the pictures that had not fallen to the ground. Each picture held three or four humans, each human looking or seeming different. Each human seemed to have... Evolved. The girl frowned, waiting for her mother's opinion on her drawings. "Do you like them? I worked extr-" "Okay. They are okay," her mother said before looking at the computer that lay beside her. "Now, my dear Claire, would you mind leaving? I have work to do." The child nodded, reaching for her remaining pictures. "No. Leave them here." Claire once again nodded. She then ran out of the room, wondering what would happen to her art work. Her mother would probably destroy her pictures, she always did. She thought drawing was an unhealthy obsession, one that could only be made worse when fictional beings were the subject. As she walked down an empty hallway she heard the Noise. The noise of the shredder, the one machine that was constantly being used to hurt her. A tear fell from the girl's eye as she trudged up the stairs to her room. "Those were my favorites," flopping onto her bed, burying her face in a large teddy bear. "My favorite," she repeated, quietly. She still had no idea why she showed her mother the pictures, each time they were destroyed. In fact she had only salvaged two pictures, and these hung somewhere in her dark closet. And they would hang their for years, forgotten by the small dreamer.
In the next room a young teenager sat at his desk, writing. Plastered on the walls of this room were many drawings and pictures, each one more unique then the next. Each one was drawn by his young Claire. Claire didn't know that her brother had her drawings, she didn't know that some of her art work had been saved for how could she when she was banned from this room? And how would she feel if she found out that her brother was using her pictures for research, for planning? How would she feel if she realized that her dream of super heroes and mutants would come true because of her brother, not her? How would she feel? She would be furious, she would be upset. She would cry and cry and then, due to guilt Nathan would be forced to tear up his work. He would be forced to give up the research that he had collected for the past three years. He would lose everything, and he could just not risk that. He knew that he HAD to be the reason that the humans had Evolved. In the future he needed to be praised for his work. He never got enough praise in the present.
Fast forward to a few hundred years later. The boy and his little sister had an uneasy alliance. With Claire's dreams and Nathan's talents in the sciences they both discovered something that would truly change the world, a mutagen that could truly evolve any human or animal into a new "species." If you were to combine said mutagen with another one, composed of a mixture of many different and some would say rare chemicals, creatures could fast forward through millions of years of evolution. If these mutagens worked correctly a new species could be created within a few decades. At most it would take a century or two. And all it had taken were a few pictures and a attention deprived genius. Sadly, humans have flaws. None of us are perfect. Whether it be in action, thought, or whatever else humans will find some way, intentionally or unintentionally, to mess things up. The mutagen was flawed because of human flaws. It wasn't intentional and it wasn't at all stoppable for these problems were caused by genetics. Genetics were what caused little Claire to dream of evolution in the first place. She had one of the mutagens in her blood, as did her brother and an unmentioned sister. Her entire family held the secret to continued evolution in them yet none had known about it. Until Claire was born the mutagen had gone by unnoticed. This mutagen was not known to exist and because in all her other family members it was found in small amounts it was untraceable. Somehow, by chance, Claire was born with a high concentration of this mutagen. It seemed to speak to her, giving her visions of what could be. It planted, somewhat twisted, dreams in her mind. It told her of the future and, knowing no other way to express her dreams, she drew them. This would later awaken something hidden in her brother, making him addicted to the sciences of evolution. Few knew of their project. In fact, besides a few trusted scientists, only the middle child, a girl named Nadine, knew about the plan. All who worked on the project believed that it was a brilliant idea and overlooked all flaws. Only Nadine could see them. Only she knew the mutagen was also a poison. No one believed her. The scientists believed that she was uneducated therefore knew nothing. She could not tell the world for they would think she was insane. Even her siblings didn't believe her, instead they shunned her. They barred her from the project, telling her that they did not need a non-believer on their team... If only they had listened to her. Maybe then all of this could be stopped....
Once again fast forward in time. Centuries later the mutagen was released into the world, or at the very least a very small part of the world. Their was an island off the coast of the US. No one lived here, in fact most thought it was unlivable. It was a perilous place, perfect for the Project. Here humans and a few animals injected with the two mutagens were left. They would be provided with a pack of basic supplies and then, left alone. Here natural selection could do its job, killing off those that were not fit to live and letting those who were prosper. Descendents of those who worked on the Project watched over this island. They made sure the Evolved never left. As the centuries passed and nearly all the survivors had evolved into magnificent creatures they started to dream of another world. Ever since they were placed on this island stories of the rest of the world were passed on from generation to generation. It was no wonder that the Evolved grew sick of their home. For years they had planned to leave and they had finally found a reason to leave. The poison in the mutagen slowly started to cause a sickness in the Evolved. Since its effects were finally beginning to show the effects were not major. The Evolved were more suspectable to illness and sometimes were a bit physically weak. Any powers or gifts they had were not majorly affected though, on rare occasions, they did not always work. The Evolved wanted a cure and, believing that somewhere in the world there was one, they stormed off the island. The descendents of the Scientists could do nothing to stop them as the evolve flocked into the US... The Evolved have been wandering around the coastal city of Diamond Bay. It has been a month since their escape and the Scientists want them back. They have sent out a group now known as the Hunters to find them and bring them back to the island. Many Evolved have already been recaptured. Others, who cause to much trouble, are killed. Despite the recent massacres few humans realize that Evolved are in their midst and the Hunters want to keep it that way. There is one group that also knows about the Evolved existence. This group is known as the Protectors. They are the Descendants of Nadine. They have long watched the island that was previously home to the Evolved. When they escaped the Protectors followed them to Diamond Bay. They are also trying to hunt down the Evolved but they want to help them. They want to cure them and make them normal, non-disease ridden, humans.
Plot Overview: A group of scientists found the key to Evolution. They sent a bunch of humans to a nearby island after injecting them with two different mutagens. The humans soon evolved and, centuries later, the Evolved leave the island. The descendants of the Scientists send a group of Hunters after the escaped Evolved. The Hunters do whatever they can to rid the city of Diamond Bay of the Evolved. Sometimes the Hunters take them back to the island, other times the Evolved are killed. Another group, called the Protectors, know that the Evolved have a disease that is slowly killing them. They want to help the Evolved. The Protectors want to cure the Evolved disease. They also want to turn the Evolved back into normal humans.
Notes: Yeah... I noticed this got progressively cliche as I continued writing it. It wasn't meant to be like that but I kind of ran out of ideas.... ): The world hasn't really changed at all. Each time it came close to a discovery something brought it down so it is basically the same world we live in now. Um... Scientists are in charge of the Hunters. Hunters hunt the Evolved. The Evolved are humans who have gifts, powers, or mutations. Humans don't really know about the Evolved. The Protectors want to cure the Evolved of their evolutionary "gifts" and a disease they were given.
Rules: No g-modding, ubering, being a mary-sue/ gary-stue, metagaming, exc.... Use grammar, story-mode, correct spelling, exc. Listen to me and then the Admins. Admins can ban people and accept them. I can add rules at any time. I can remove rules at any time. I can change them at any time. I honestly can't think of any more rules so... Yeah...
Admins: Um... I don't know yet...
Scientist/ Protector/ Hunter/ Normal Human: Name: A.ge: Gender: Personality (Not Required): Appearance: Items (May include some weapons. Not many if you are a normal human/ Scientist): Group: Bio (At least something): Other:
Evolved: Name: A.ge: Gender: Personality (Not Required): Appearance: Items (You can have some weapons but not many): Powers/ Gifts/ Mutations: (Don't go overboard.) Bio (At least something): Other: |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:18 PM |
| Nice writing, pretty original too. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:28 PM |
Putting Original in the title doesn't make it original.
Leave before I pull your intestines up through your throat. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:33 PM |
Did you DSERIOUSLY JUST TAKE RANGER'S THREAD YOU IDIOT How IDIOTIC can you get?! Taking a thread that is still active! It's so obvious. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:35 PM |
| Dude, this is original, it's in the name. Moron. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:35 PM |
What do you mean it has original in title so it is original ~~~~~Idiots~~~~~~~~ |
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Mr44
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:35 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=84562721
lolsooriginal |
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Lonnee
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:35 PM |
Look, this is NOT HIS THREAD. He copied from a good friend of mine who worked her butt off to write this! He PLAGERIZED and in no way in HELL am I letting him take CREDIT over someone ELSES work! This is NOT his thread, I repeat NOT his thread! The real one was made by RangerGirl3373. >.<
I HATE people like this with a PASSION. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:35 PM |
@Cheese
"Putting Original in the title doesn't make it original." |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:36 PM |
| Dude, I made this thread months ago and it is STILL active. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:36 PM |
no. taking someone's thread and putting "original" in the name doesn't make it original
quit mocking it |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:36 PM |
@Lonnee
IT seems to ME that YOU like to DO a lot of RANDOM CAPITALIZATIONS. WE can read just FINE without all of THIS randomly placed CAPITILIZATIONS. |
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mash123
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:37 PM |
| You damn thief that is prettttyyyy low -.- |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:38 PM |
@Scooby
Hypocrisy does not prove a point.
It just makes you look like an idiot. |
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Lonnee
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:38 PM |
| Dude, putting "Original" in the title DOESN'T make it that! The guy that said that is right. I hope you freaking get banned. Or termed. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:38 PM |
| It is original dooods ur soooo stoopid so just gou awa becuz it iz mi thred and is orignal and i wrkd mi bu.t of tring tu tip thiz |
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Lonnee
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:39 PM |
| Plagerizing can get you in jail, did you know that? Ranger could call the authorities and have you sued and put in jail. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:39 PM |
@SP
I was not being a hypocrite moron. I was trying to show him an example if how ridiculous it looks. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:39 PM |
cheese i swqear to feuih
get the hell out of the forum right now quit mocking people and using some stupid ass language that you find funny
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mash123
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:40 PM |
| I think this is a troll and we may have just fell for it but at least we stopped it form taking off. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:40 PM |
| @Loonee, you poor soul. Thinking that cheese could get arrested for this. There is no copyright, she posted on a public site. He is allowed to use this information. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 03:41 PM |
| LOLZ THIS THRED ALREDY TAKED OF DODZ |
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