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| 21 Mar 2013 10:40 PM |
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We see a man in a grimy bathroom, alone. He pulls out a case from his jacket. He removes a syringe, and injects the syringe into his wrist. He then splashes water on his face, and washes his hands.
He leaves the bathroom, and walks into a bar. He sits down at a table and tells a girl he's sorry for leaving and asks what they were talking about before he left. She said she was talking about her fears. He grins, and tells her to continue. She talks about being stalked mercilessly into a dark alley and murdered. He grins wider.
After a few drinks they leave. The man leads her towards the back of the bar, and says his car is on the otherside of the alley. They go into the alley, and the man punches her. She begins to scurry the other way - deeper into the alley. He pulls out a gun and shoots her.
"Thanks, for the rush." He says as the film ends. -----------------------------------------------------------------
This is more or less a few ideas jumbled together. The finished product will be more polished. |
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| 22 Mar 2013 02:42 AM |
its quite random, introduce a small background story of the man and it will flow better
~ Disguising yourself as a N00B 'cause you got swag ~ |
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| 22 Mar 2013 02:55 AM |
If this were to ever be filmed, it would only be to get funding for a feature length film.
The feature length film would then give more details of the character, a larger story, etc. |
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