iwantpsp
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| 20 Mar 2013 11:26 PM |
**His song entirely plays** Wow rare back from the grave/hall of fame of ro-rap yologod
thank you fans
yes that is I i have a third eye illumanati swag on deck wow based yea dats me young yolo swagging like concrete i got the game on lock like starfox the violin kicks in all my swag kicks in swag to the maximum maximus overlord swaggin for duty kraz-e put a marker in booty swag on deck cause im radical islam swaggin allah akbar mahmoud ji-mahd swaggin young based lord ever to the max omg basedyolo you sure got stacks-Yolomasterflash
V1:I said I didn't like your songs,Your wack more wack then cheddar jack boi understand Stepping on me lyrically is quicksand Your trash,not wanted,useless and broken "Swag on deck cuz im radical" You are weak,We wish you to get out,I don't wanna have your feelings more hurt then this [EDIT FOR 1 MINUTE] this guy is a piece of crap. Forget him,I'm done with losers like him. |
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| 21 Mar 2013 10:33 AM |
>Your now hated by rap.
yolomasterflash IS rap |
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Altair55
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| 21 Mar 2013 11:01 AM |
what kind of rhyme scheme are you using? right, none
also, your most complex line was "your wack more wack then chedder jack", look at the first guy's (imo)
swag on deck cause im radical islam swaggin allah akbar mahmoud ji-mahd swaggin young based lord ever to the max
even though he's obviously joking that tears apart anything you've ever posted. the second and third line play off of 'radical' and it seems as though ji-mahd (supposed to be pronounced like mod) is bent to rhyme with RADical, SWAGgin, and max.
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Rezdonox
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| 21 Mar 2013 03:11 PM |
theres a difference between rap, and talentless utter crap
this is all the second one |
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shonyshon
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| 21 Mar 2013 03:14 PM |
0/10.
PSP's logic: Thinks he knows everything about rap because he can recite all the lyrics to Lose Yourself and Not Afraid, and can rhyme two basic words together and fit in meaningless words in between.
Honestly, you're a half ass rapper and a plain fan-boy. And no Private Message with a forum URL inside of it will change that.
Swerve>^ |
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| 21 Mar 2013 03:32 PM |
| this is better https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZtW9V9PJDHU |
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| 21 Mar 2013 05:34 PM |
do a barrel roll
~ offical dave of ot, status of the day: why tiara why ~ |
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Fozdi
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lily17777
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| 21 Mar 2013 06:00 PM |
"illumanati" Do you even know what Illuminati is? Spell correctly too, explains why you're a rapper. |
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lila47
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shonyshon
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| 21 Mar 2013 06:35 PM |
"Spell correctly too, explains why you're a rapper."
I'll have you know, I currently have a 3.5 grade-point-average and can spell quite fluently. I also write my own "raps" on my spare time.
That post was absolutely idiotic on your part. It's like me assuming you're Satanic because you listen to metal. |
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| 21 Mar 2013 08:38 PM |
| Shony wins again. Lily, just cuz rappers typically use slang in their rhymes, and some of us are from the urban areas in town, doesn't mean we aren't smart. I do just fine in school and I hardly listen to anything but rap. That post was just stupid and made you look ridiculous. (I probably spelled ridiculous wrong, oh well.) |
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KRSOne
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| 21 Mar 2013 08:50 PM |
"0/10.
PSP's logic: Thinks he knows everything about rap because he can recite all the lyrics to Lose Yourself and Not Afraid, and can rhyme two basic words together and fit in meaningless words in between.
Honestly, you're a half ass rapper and a plain fan-boy. And no Private Message with a forum URL inside of it will change that."
Well said.
@lily, You're always on forums about rap, yet you don't know jack about it. There are rappers such as Nas, MF DOOM and many other rappers that actually grew up in public housing, and actually wanted to be rappers, and widened their vocabulary by reading dictionaries. How do you think these people come up with legendary lines like:
"It ain't hard to tell, I excel then prevail The mic is contacted, I attract clientele My mic check is life or death, breathing a sniper's breath I exhale the yellow smoke of buddha through righteous steps"
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"Catch a throatful From the fire vocaled Ash and molten glass like Eyjafjallajökull The volcano out of Iceland He'll conquer and destroy the rap world like the white men Learnt from a pro as a mentor Started with a bird nest and burnt it to a cinder That'll get the party kicking Plus your little charred body is smoldered like chicken As the dollar continues to lose momentum He need land from murdered indians that represent 'em Gold is up, urging all thugs Trade your chains for cash and splurge it on drugs Or a more secure investment: Food or water A couple of gallons for your cutest daughter And thank him as a Yankee fellow southerner Don't forget the general rank, 'ello guv'nor"
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link6249
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| 21 Mar 2013 11:29 PM |
Well. Since I'm bored I'll upload PSP's part to souncloud. FIrst I'll create a soundcloud account. It'll be fun. xD
PSP.
You watch it too. |
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link6249
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| 21 Mar 2013 11:48 PM |
Oh. Damn it.
DAMN IT.
I feel like an idiot. :c
even though it's fun. xd |
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