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Re: The Decay of Secrets [FEAR]

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DimensonRip is not online. DimensonRip
Joined: 20 Dec 2011
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13 Jan 2013 10:40 PM
Death.
The stink of decay surrounded the garden of SONIC. As a body was lifted out of the dirt A body of the great Commander SONIC. A man who had disappeared for 6 months and finally was found. Found dead. The question was how...and by who?

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Dimensonrip walked out of the interrogation room. He had been there the night SONIC disappeared. Along with Protectorzz, Roboticman1212, and NiraGold. They were having a private meeting at SONIC’s mansion. That night he disappeared and wasn’t found. . FEAR was now in chaos, due to indeed their commander had been killed. Who’s fault was this...for now all the blame was pointed on these 4.

“Great...I bet I’ll see myself on the cover of Venezia’s Most Hated.” Pro commented.

“It’s not too bad...” Dimenson reassured.

“Well, I didn’t do it....” Nira said. All of them were sure none of the others had committed murder.

“It had to be a FEAR member, someone high up...how would he enter the mansion?” Robot said.

“Well...no..not exactly. If I remember that was the week of the clan summit meeting. Which was held in Venezia.” Dimenson said. He thought if any member or clan leader hated SONIC very much. He thought many people did. It was interrupted. All 4 of them recieved a message at the same time. It was a blocked ID.

“Death is my favorite scent. I’d kill for it. I know what you did. Secrets are easily spread. Right Zach and Maple? For now I am your SONIC, your Commander. Do what I say. Mentioning me to others isn’t a good idea. The best secrets are the most twisted.”
-S
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Neel664 is not online. Neel664
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13 Jan 2013 10:41 PM
1st, and hi. :D
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bot1242 is not online. bot1242
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13 Jan 2013 10:44 PM
Can I be in it?

FEAR MAJ Bot1242
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TheMrSmarty is not online. TheMrSmarty
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13 Jan 2013 10:47 PM
:o Nice beginning.
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cpb1199 is not online. cpb1199
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13 Jan 2013 11:11 PM
I wanna be in it, please.
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RAG3GUY is not online. RAG3GUY
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13 Jan 2013 11:13 PM
Very nice story, well done DimensionRip 10/10!
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smorg30 is not online. smorg30
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14 Jan 2013 12:02 AM
S? Yes, I admit. I did it.
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nonHelperBot is not online. nonHelperBot
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14 Jan 2013 01:14 AM
SONICs dead? BrianK is commander now. HE KILLED SONIC!!
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nonHelperBot is not online. nonHelperBot
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14 Jan 2013 01:16 AM
If SONIC died, then Brian would take command, in the hint it said "I am your commander now" That means the one speaking is Brian, likely not 100% but likely
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Livnmailife is not online. Livnmailife
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14 Jan 2013 12:33 PM
Sounds pretty cool Dimension... It would be cooler if I was in it :3
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bladexflame is not online. bladexflame
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14 Jan 2013 05:56 PM
Holy.... This is epic.... MAKE ANOTHER ONE!
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Protectorzz is not online. Protectorzz
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14 Jan 2013 05:58 PM
I love it . If you write more or a lot tonight, I'll shout it in Chapters.
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robloxboop03 is not online. robloxboop03
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14 Jan 2013 05:59 PM
Could I be in the next one?
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trevorholloway is not online. trevorholloway
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14 Jan 2013 06:00 PM
Stealing Pretty Little Liars eh?
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sammyboy1044 is not online. sammyboy1044
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14 Jan 2013 06:01 PM
legit11
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Harveer12121Alt is not online. Harveer12121Alt
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14 Jan 2013 06:06 PM
The things you write are flawless.

Good job, and keep up the good work.

Also, try to add the Magnus family in it.

I am Enzo, kthx

-{ ~Lord Density }- GSC or die.
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trevorholloway is not online. trevorholloway
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14 Jan 2013 06:08 PM
Seriously. Nobody else noticed this is almost exactly like Pretty little liars? There are 4 of them suspected of killing their popular friend and a person named A killed there friends and is threatning them... Nobody?
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Redsoxs4 is not online. Redsoxs4
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14 Jan 2013 06:11 PM
I call the bad guy. <3
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ZaggerII is not online. ZaggerII
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14 Jan 2013 06:11 PM
Can I be in the Next one? Just asking...
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DimensonRip is not online. DimensonRip
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14 Jan 2013 06:11 PM
Trevor, It isn't majorly based of that. Most people dont even know what that serious is. It's much more different. I just like the idea of murder and mystery.
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DimensonRip is not online. DimensonRip
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14 Jan 2013 06:43 PM
The FirSt Secret

[Change: Since Nira Quit FEAR, Lilprivera is now taking her place]

Secrets. They tear people apart. At first Dimenson was confused on what this person was talking about. But he thought back, to the first day him and his three friends started their toll of secrets that would continue on.

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Three years ago, the 4 friends were at an ice cream parlor. Andrew2899lee got a scoop. He walked next to Protectorzz, and spilled his near-melted vanilla gelato all over him.
“Oops. My mistake.” He said in a sarcastic voice.
“Why you are such a-” Pro said, but was interrupted.
“Don’t even. He’s too low for it anyways.” Robotic suggested. Sadly, Protectorzz wasn’t the kind of mellow guy to accept apology. He wanted revenge. That night they played a trick Andrew.
The plan was simple. Spread sleet on the stairs of his house. So that he’d fall back into the snow and get a face full of ice. It went terribly wrong. That night, Andrew did go back to his house, and did slip. But not on to the snow, onto the stairs. The stone stairs. He had an extremely bad head injury. Causing him to become blind.
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For now no one knew that secret. Or so they thought as another message came on their phone.
“Revenge is a dish best served cold. Or in your case revenge was something caused by a cold dish being dumped. :]
-S”
“But..But how does he-” Lil stuttered.
“For now we should be careful. It seems this person knows much more than we think. “Dimenson said. As they walked someone ran up to catch to them.
“Hey Pro, hey others. Anyways Protectorzz, my birthday is this this weekend. Your invited, of course. You guys should come too.” Neel664 said, and than walked into the bus stationed next to them.
“We should go!” Protectorzz said.
“Err.. I’m not very fond of going to your best friend’s birthday party. He kind of creeps me out.” Lil said. Another ring came, another message.
“Happy Birthday to you! You're living right now! But you will die too. Go to that birthday, or face the same fate as your precious commander will meet the birthday boy.
Love
-S
PS: What should I get him? Do you think a few liters of poison will do?”
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robloxboop03 is not online. robloxboop03
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14 Jan 2013 06:44 PM
Add me= epic story twist.
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darklord5674 is not online. darklord5674
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14 Jan 2013 06:47 PM
^Don't add some noob. Add me. 피_피 This is my epic face.
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robloxboop03 is not online. robloxboop03
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14 Jan 2013 06:49 PM
^ means up. Not yourself Dark.
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darklord5674 is not online. darklord5674
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14 Jan 2013 06:52 PM
^Roblox you finally pass your lesson. You get a F. For just knowing that this "^" means.
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