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benningtonguy is not online. benningtonguy
Joined: 21 Dec 2008
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15 Mar 2013 10:18 PM
Warning: Word wall. It's a decent story I'm making though.

READ THE INTRODUCTION FIRST OR ELSE YOU'LL BE CONFUSED: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=91660761

Chapter I – 2000 years later

Demolished buildings lay on the earth all the way to the horizon. A grey dust swarmed around the ruins. ROBLOXia was a dead planet now – there was no life to be found anywhere. Except for a few ROBLOXian bodies, that lay scattered across the whole country. These were the bodies of the few who were not affected by sunlight – a rare, mutant gene that could withstand the sunlight. Even with this gene, the bodies still lay there, with no life.
All ROBLOXians are connected to the supercomputer underground, as so the rest of material objects in ROBLOXia. A supercomputer than runs for millions of studs underground. The end of the ROBLOXian cities 2000 years ago caused the supercomputer to do an emergency shutdown, and would not restart until 2000 years later. This, scientists hoped, would allow enough time for ROBLOXia to recover itself from a severe disaster. It was ROBLOXia’s last hope of survival.
A whining alarm sounded underground. Lights flickered on, and the sounds of CPUs filled the silence of the dead insides of ROBLOXia. Every seemingly dead body in ROBLOXia was brought back to life.
Benningtonguy’s eyes opened, very slowly, the darkness of sleep escaping him. His head was woozy, and his limbs still had little feeling in them. He sat up, and looked around with glazed eyes. Dust covered his plastic body, making him appear as a living statue.
“What…Where am I?” he thought.
He squinted through the dust. His vision was minimal, he could only see about 50 studs in front of him. Crumbled building fragments lay in small hills all around his. It was dead silent.
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There is one thing that the moderators forgot to tell ROBLOXia. Nobody really knew that there was a supercomputer underground that controlled everything. If somebody got to the supercomputer somehow, they would be confiscated by security and have their mind erased.
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Benningtonguy had been walking for what felt like an eternity. His legs were weary. The ground met his body, and he blacked out.
“…Are you alive?” said a voice, very faintly.
Benningtonguy opened his eyes and found another ROBLOXian standing over him. His body was also covered in a thick layer of dust.
“Who are you?” said benningtonguy.
“My name is 15rawsone. What’s your name? Are you okay?” said 15rawsone.
“I’m benningtonguy, and I think I’m fine...” benningtonguy said, drifting off into thought. “Wait, what the hell happened? Where’s the city? The forum? My friends!” He started to panic.
“I don’t know. I just really don’t.” said 15rawsone, looking worried. “Maybe we will find some more people if we keep walking. Come on, it’s the most we can do. We should really stretch a bit. Looks like we’ve been out for a while.
The two ROBLOXians continued walking, disappearing into the dusty atmosphere.
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benningtonguy is not online. benningtonguy
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15 Mar 2013 10:19 PM
bumpity
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15rawsone is not online. 15rawsone
Joined: 03 Aug 2008
Total Posts: 46785
15 Mar 2013 10:20 PM
This cutscene makes me feel like were in the movie Lost.

I like it, nice work :p
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benningtonguy is not online. benningtonguy
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15 Mar 2013 10:21 PM
tanks <3
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tatelikecake is not online. tatelikecake
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15 Mar 2013 10:22 PM
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benningtonguy is not online. benningtonguy
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15 Mar 2013 10:23 PM
calm down

my chapters are usually short...

we need a bit of "down time" before the rest of the rising action starts, that intro was mind-blowing
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BenIdol is not online. BenIdol
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15 Mar 2013 10:23 PM
no one cares
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benningtonguy is not online. benningtonguy
Joined: 21 Dec 2008
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15 Mar 2013 10:26 PM
plus this is gonna be way longer than ur guest story
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Invictium is not online. Invictium
Joined: 22 Jan 2013
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15 Mar 2013 10:34 PM
eew wordwall

report it for spam
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SWAGxElite is not online. SWAGxElite
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15 Mar 2013 10:46 PM
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