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CaramelMooatte is not online. CaramelMooatte
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15 Mar 2013 10:21 PM
We are going to use this thread to post poems.

We leave feedback on other's poems.

Everyone should post a poem. Any poem. Serious or fun, depressing or joyful.

It'll be neat.
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NilPirate is not online. NilPirate
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15 Mar 2013 10:23 PM
Apparently we made threads at the same time. I'll copypasta mine over to here, so we only have one to use.
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Ultracrash is not online. Ultracrash
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15 Mar 2013 10:23 PM
Roses are red.

Violets are blue.

In Texas, this Chainsaw kills you.

No, seriously I have nothing.

I'll be reading though.
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NilPirate is not online. NilPirate
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15 Mar 2013 10:24 PM
The sound of an opera
sweeping choir, booming drum
the violin is roaring and the flute accompanies
a fullness of spirit, a purpose to life
but here I am sitting down
listening to processed electrons
the eternal random shifting
a silent, purposeless world below
and life above.

Inspired by this symphony piece: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xDtDvi8OUY8
VGM 5evr guise
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15 Mar 2013 10:24 PM
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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15 Mar 2013 10:25 PM
Darkness overhead,
Shielded by storms
and clouded with deadends

I don't know what to do
So I'm going straight in
backwards or forwards
I don't care which

Just show me the light
Answer my warnings
Give me the future
For which I fight.


This is my badly written poem inspired by terminator ye.
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CaramelMooatte is not online. CaramelMooatte
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15 Mar 2013 10:27 PM
-Ultra-

Love it, man. Love it.

-Nil-

Wow. That's pretty cool.

I like it.

-Prom-

I like yours too. You all are amazing poets <3

Here I go:

That wonderful numbness.
Hearing nothing but your heartbeat
In the carcass
That hides your soul.
The sound of silence
Its a beautiful thing.
The death can commence
You hear the bell ring.
The round is over
The match is done,
But you aren't the winner.
You haven't won.
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Ultracrash is not online. Ultracrash
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15 Mar 2013 10:29 PM
Those are wonderful.

I'm liking all of these.
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15 Mar 2013 10:29 PM
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CaramelMooatte is not online. CaramelMooatte
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15 Mar 2013 10:31 PM
Prom is the name I know Leslie by. Sorry for confusion.
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15 Mar 2013 10:33 PM
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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15 Mar 2013 10:33 PM
Me and cookie go way back. <3
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NilPirate is not online. NilPirate
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15 Mar 2013 10:34 PM
moar~!

A long ways away,
a town stands at the cross
of a river and a road
built of wood and stone
sun comes and goes
wheel spins and turns.

They say this town has a name
but I don't remember
from the mountain all towns look alike
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15 Mar 2013 10:34 PM
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NilPirate is not online. NilPirate
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15 Mar 2013 10:35 PM
SPOILER: LeslieVernon is secretly MCAdo is secretly Ultracrash
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CaramelMooatte is not online. CaramelMooatte
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15 Mar 2013 10:38 PM
Yeah me and prom. Like. bffs k.

Nil, you're a really amazing writer...

Another of mine:

Smile. I'm going to tell you a love story.
No its not the normal kind, and for that I'm sorry.
But its a deeper kind, the [stuff] that will never die.
The kind that would make your psychiatrist sit back and sigh.


This story is between a girl and her razor,
How after going to school dressed in her blazer,
All the guys she wanted and still the one she would favor,
Was the old blessed? Damned?
Razor.

At home in the tub she'd lay
Making stains that would forever stay
Not on her clothes, but much deeper
All her problems seeming steeper.
Causing her to stain more
Dripping down her arms, onto the floor.

Every day the date would begin
She started to think of the lust as a kind of sin,
The relationship where no one ever wins,
Yet it was the one she would savor,
The old blessed?
Damned?
Razor.

Yet the dates still happened,
No one knew,
Her secret was fatally gorgeous,
Some wounds are too deep to sew.

The date went wrong,
How? No one knew,
All they heard was the song.
The song of her life, that she wrote with the thing,
They found out it was her only reason to sing.

The diary stated everything anyone needed know:

"Addicted:
Self-Inflicted."

She died for her love,
In his clutches,
All in vain.
Because of those things which are easily stained.
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NilPirate is not online. NilPirate
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15 Mar 2013 10:39 PM
O_O

That was an amazing poem. Started off kinda wonky with the psychiatrist line, but went into "ohgodswhat" mode pretty fast.
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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15 Mar 2013 10:40 PM
Srsly you're like the empress of rhymes

Id like to write a poem in the vein of ultra's

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Jason is pissed
and hes coming to get you
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15 Mar 2013 10:42 PM
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CaramelMooatte is not online. CaramelMooatte
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15 Mar 2013 10:48 PM
Most of my poems are about cutting. And suicide.

Or burning, I like to burn myself also.

I have issues. :)
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15 Mar 2013 10:51 PM
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Ultracrash is not online. Ultracrash
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15 Mar 2013 10:53 PM
Mario,

Get out.
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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15 Mar 2013 10:53 PM
Lovely.
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15 Mar 2013 10:54 PM
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