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| 08 Mar 2013 05:55 PM |
so basicly the story (as short as i can keep it)is that humans are the dominant species,but sub-humans have been created.The humans have started thinking that the sub-humans are freaks,and a war has broken out!Now you are either a sub- human or a human, (i DO allow non human related things like demons and angels)choose your side and break out in the war,or join forces and bring peace among the land! Name: (insert your characters name here) Species: (insert your characters species here,like humans,demons,angels etc etc) Age: (you should know what to do here :|) Nationality: (insert here where your character was born) Appearance (please be descriptive!!) Personality: (you should also know what to do here :|) Favorite weapon/weapons (if they are fighting in the war,or get into a battle) Pet: (if they have one) Now please enjoy this roleplay! (i will not be part of it,so enjoy!) |
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| 08 Mar 2013 05:58 PM |
No. Just no. Please, stop this. |
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| 08 Mar 2013 06:02 PM |
| whats wrong with it?..why are you hating it?..please just give me a good description why you think i should "stop this" |
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| 08 Mar 2013 06:04 PM |
Sorry for the lag post. Anyway, please use better grammar. It's a must for RPing. Next, make a better story, and separate it into paragraphs. This seems like a good RP, and I think I would enjoy it. |
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| 08 Mar 2013 06:15 PM |
| And besides..i was bored when i made this! i was bored,didn't want to watch a movie,didn't want to play a video game..i wanted to see a story be made RIGHT in front of me,on my computer monitor,i wanted to see the creativity of the people.So thats why i made this,so i hope you can make a good description of why i should stop this.And i can't stop a whole bunch of threads.I can't go around and go like you saying "no..just no..stop this..please"so,i hope your description is good. |
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| 08 Mar 2013 06:15 PM |
| OH..sorry i thought you were a hater! i'm sorry dude,i misunderstood :| |
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| 08 Mar 2013 06:16 PM |
I was trolling at the start. But this is good, your going in the right direction too. |
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| 08 Mar 2013 06:22 PM |
| Okay,i will think of a better story for a few days,and i can probably re-post this is a few days! so i hope you have a good rest of the day my fine sir! |
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| 08 Mar 2013 06:26 PM |
| Also, capitalize "I" and put spaces after commas and periods. That will get you far. |
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