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| 06 Mar 2013 05:00 PM |
"Each day is just another step in this journey of life."
You have your bags, baskets, goods, and staffs collected. You venture out with your other fellow settlers. You wander what will you create, friendships, war, a world power? Your choice.
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1.) Be respectful 2.) Use *()* when not roleplaying 3.) Be activate 4.) Be Realistic 5.) Try to make a paragraph every roleplaying post 6.) More rules may yet to come
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Cryptonic
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| 06 Mar 2013 05:09 PM |
| yay, hmm. You cant I have it lol Nothing |
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| 06 Mar 2013 05:34 PM |
You cant handle deep crap You make roleplays about cats frolicking through the tulips. |
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| 06 Mar 2013 05:38 PM |
| It seems to be an experiment.... Shorter roleplays have more joiners. No... Why should I want to handle crap? I've made some extremely long roleplays before that have been ignored. |
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Cryptonic
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| 06 Mar 2013 05:41 PM |
| bumpers op offer. Nah you dont. special stuff |
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fathat121
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| 06 Mar 2013 05:45 PM |
| This roleplay has too much opinions. No one will want to join a roleplay without any plot. Even so, I don't think that insulting this roleplaying is in order. Just remember to make a roleplay that doesn't give too much choice (make a storyline). |
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| 06 Mar 2013 05:52 PM |
| (You want Rian to give you a plot line.. She will...) |
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fathat121
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| 06 Mar 2013 05:54 PM |
| Oh no! I made a grammar mistake. The plural of opinion is "opinion"; not "opinions"! I feel so terrible inside. Just kidding. On a different matter, I am eager to see your plot. Be sure that is corresponds to your C.S template. If not, then just make a new one. |
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| 06 Mar 2013 05:55 PM |
Have you seen my work. My really art work?
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=68721366&PageIndex=1 |
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fathat121
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| 06 Mar 2013 05:56 PM |
Well, technically the plural "opinion" is dependant upon other words.
Ex.1 : Too much opinion
Ex. 2: Too many opinions.
I still used it incorrectly though. |
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| 06 Mar 2013 05:57 PM |
You know you're speaking to someone who usually makes large, well written plots for all her(his?) roleplays, which are normally unique, new ideas, or pleasant surprises from the normal humdrum of our simple society.
Cause it sounds like you're trying to speak to someone who has never done this before. |
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| 06 Mar 2013 05:59 PM |
Fathat knows how to offer truly helpful criticism.
Props for you, Fathat. |
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fathat121
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| 06 Mar 2013 05:59 PM |
There are grammar mistakes, but they are few, and it seems as though you really revised, and edited your work. Also, the plot is quite engaging. You have earned my respect as an advanced writer.
P.S: Your grammar mistakes never interfered with the comprehension of your story. |
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| 06 Mar 2013 06:03 PM |
| Rian, one of these days you should repost that old thread. :) |
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Cryptonic
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| 06 Mar 2013 06:09 PM |
| LOL does that sound? I have it lol that |
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| 06 Mar 2013 06:09 PM |
It seems that When Heroes Rise is still dragging it's near dead self along.
Now I feel silly :I |
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| 06 Mar 2013 06:14 PM |
| I will make a second one, hopefully. |
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| 06 Mar 2013 06:15 PM |
I for some reason what to make a very scary kind of character. No real powers. Just pure intimidation, and an invoker of fear.
But, my charrie will have to wait. |
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