KateXyo
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| 26 Feb 2013 03:15 PM |
The life of a loner.
The story: You are asleep. You are tired but for some reason, tonight you could not get to sleep. You yawn and step out of bed, opening the curtains, you stare up at the beautiful moon, glittering in the night. It happened to be a full moon this very night, this is where it all began..
You hear a frightening scream, so you run downstairs to where your mother and father are to see if everything is alright. You notice they are gone. And there is blood everywhere. You think "They couldn't have been killed?!?" "Where have they gone?!" "How would ----" you turn around to see your parents are actually in a corner, still alive and ready for death. You secretly run into the kitchen, get a knife and kill the mysterious shadow trying to kill your parents.
Your parents blink and realise it was actually YOU that helped them. They - as if being controlled at the same time, run over and give you a big hug. They say "You actually did it! You did it! How?"
Admins - Chosen by KateXyo can make 10 characters. Anyone else can only make 5. KateXyo can make unlimited :3
I choose whether your character is appliable for Roleplay. If not, then you make a new character or just not roleplay at all.
Human CS:
Name: Age: Inventory: Bio: [If N/A type N/A] Hobbies: Weapons [Only 2 weapons, Not too OP (OverPowered)] Special Powers [Again not too overpowered, if N/A type N/A] Any other comments to make your character seem any clearer?
Werewolf CS: Name: Age: Alpha Wolf or not? Inventory: Bio: [If N/A type N/A] Hobbies: Weapons [Only 2 weapons, Not too OP (OverPowered)] Special Powers [Again not too overpowered, if N/A type N/A] Any other comments to make your character seem any clearer?
Vampire CS: Name: Age: Inventory: Bio: [If N/A type N/A] Hobbies: Weapons [Only 2 weapons, Not too OP (OverPowered)] Special Powers [Again not too overpowered, if N/A type N/A] Any other comments to make your character seem any clearer?
Troll CS: Name: Age: Inventory: Bio: [If N/A type N/A] Hobbies: Weapons [Only 2 weapons, Not too OP (OverPowered)] Special Powers [Again not too overpowered, if N/A type N/A] Any other comments to make your character seem any clearer?
Elf CS: Name: Age: Inventory: Bio: [If N/A type N/A] Hobbies: Weapons [Only 2 weapons, Not too OP (OverPowered)] Special Powers [Again not too overpowered, if N/A type N/A] Any other comments to make your character seem any clearer?
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| 26 Feb 2013 03:18 PM |
Eh, the grammar could have been better and the species choices were a bit fan-girly, all-in-all it wasn't that bad though. If this was your first RP it makes it that much better.
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| 26 Feb 2013 03:18 PM |
Again it wasn't that bad but this might help you:
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=90311215
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| 26 Feb 2013 03:35 PM |
(I COMPLETELY MISREAD THE TITLE....so as an apology I shall make a character. I'm also curious to see where you are going with this.)
HUMAN IS ME
Name: Cole Demcher
Gender: Male
Age: 18 Inventory: Nothing
Appearance: Cole has fair skin and an average build, he has messy brown hair that sticks up in a few locations. It covers most of his head excluding his face. Cole also has hazel eyes. He wears a black pea coat with a white T-shirt underneath. A simple black tribal design is in the corner of the shirt. He also wears jeans and black and white checkered sneakers.
Bio: Cole cannot remember much right now. He is truly sorry.
Hobbies: Again Cole cannot remember right now.
Weapons: Lefty and his good friend Righty
Special Powers: Rewrite - I shall explain. Cole can rewrite his body up to 12 times. He can make himself stronger, i.e. stronger arms or maybe nightvision. He has a meter for himself, he envisions it like a clock. Each power takes up a certain amount of time on the clock, more powerful powers can take up 3 or 4 hours on his "clock". If Cole strengthen's himself too much he will go insane and someone will have to find a way to calm him down, knock him unconsious or kill him. Cole can alternitavely rewrite his mind. Removing all of his upgrades and 5 or 6 months of memory. When he wakes up he cannot perform the most basic motor functions. As of right now he can move and talk like an average human.
Any other comments to make. Nah
your character seem any clearer? Uh....isn't this the same thing? |
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KateXyo
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| 05 Mar 2013 02:35 AM |
[Accepted] but the last bit, "Any other comments to make." "Your Character seem any clearer?
is actually "Any other comments to make your character seem any clearer?"
Sorry for the mix-up!
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AT4W
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coppermop
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| Joined: 13 Jan 2009 |
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| 05 Mar 2013 08:40 AM |
At first I thought this was a troll by the title. I read the thread and it's pretty good, although the CS's took up most of the thread. :P Overall, it's good for a first roleplay.
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Millicus
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| Joined: 04 Sep 2013 |
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| 02 Nov 2013 11:20 AM |
looking back at my very first RP....
it was quite crappy *cri* |
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Millicus
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