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| 04 Mar 2013 03:53 PM |
Tomorrow I'm going to be entering two of my poems to Georgia's Young Author Competition (or something like that..) and not exactly sure which ones to enter.
I have all of them here; http://deemedintodarkness.deviantart.com/gallery/
Some of the older ones I edited in my actual poetry journal haven't been updated in the dA gallery. I could pull up my journal and type them up if needed.
I think the prize is a $50 Best Buy gift card but I'm more in it to see how good my poetry actually is. I'm leaning towards
http://deemedintodarkness.deviantart.com/art/Certain-Artwork-331922679
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http://deemedintodarkness.deviantart.com/art/Division-341066360
but of course I'm still unsure if these are the best choices.
Would be appreciated if some of you were to tell me which of my better ones I should submit. |
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snakehunt
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| 04 Mar 2013 04:03 PM |
| I would read them, but I'm busy at the moment. |
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Graulas
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Mr44
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| 04 Mar 2013 04:30 PM |
Hm, I seem to be in the minority here.
Certain Artwork. |
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Graulas
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| 04 Mar 2013 04:31 PM |
By the way, I think it is spectacular you're showing your writing skills to the world.
You're going to win it, Cruel.
My next question: What are you going to purchase with your Best Buy gift card? You better start planning now.
#support |
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| 04 Mar 2013 04:31 PM |
I can submit up to two. Not sure which ones.
Guess the two I showed are favored.
"Sir, w-w-we need 50% of the 99% a-and the support o-of at least 1% of the 1% if you're gonna have 42% of the 100% to get 50%." |
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| 04 Mar 2013 04:33 PM |
Not exactly sure yet Graul and thanks a ton.
"Sir, w-w-we need 50% of the 99% a-and the support o-of at least 1% of the 1% if you're gonna have 42% of the 100% to get 50%." |
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snakehunt
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| 04 Mar 2013 04:35 PM |
Ok.... Division looks good. |
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| 04 Mar 2013 04:52 PM |
Alright.
Any other ones beside Division/Certain Artwork?
"Sir, w-w-we need 50% of the 99% a-and the support o-of at least 1% of the 1% if you're gonna have 42% of the 100% to get 50%." |
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| 04 Mar 2013 04:59 PM |
You're on dA? Dudeski, you need to tell us about these things beforehand. I mean, I gotta stalk SOMEONE in my spare time. |
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| 04 Mar 2013 05:04 PM |
I read Division and I like it...Also, I couldn't pry my eyes away from your picture...I always thought you would be Hispanic. I dunno.
í αm prícєlєss, вut í αm wíllíng tσ вαrgαín |
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| 04 Mar 2013 05:05 PM |
Oh well didn't know if any of RP would really want to have my account since just about everything on there is poetry.
And aren't celebs the normal choice?
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| 04 Mar 2013 05:08 PM |
Huh. Well thanks. I guess Division will be one of the two I send.
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| 04 Mar 2013 05:57 PM |
I guess bump.
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| 04 Mar 2013 06:13 PM |
Huh.. Should I edit the format of it or is it good as is?
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| 04 Mar 2013 06:25 PM |
I personally think Division is an overused subject So I say Hilton Thanks and Rambles, Temples, and Realms |
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AT4W
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| 04 Mar 2013 06:26 PM |
| I also enjoy No Perfect Choice. |
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| 04 Mar 2013 07:02 PM |
So you think Division is too generic?
I'm not sure about Hilton Thanks but maybe Rambles, Temples, and Realms.. bleh. Hard to choose.
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| 04 Mar 2013 07:40 PM |
Yes The judges will roll their eyes at such an overused topic |
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| 04 Mar 2013 07:59 PM |
Well then.. How would 'Certain Artwork' fare?
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| 04 Mar 2013 08:01 PM |
memories is your best work
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| 04 Mar 2013 08:25 PM |
| Personally, I like 'Certain Artwork' and 'On the Knoll' the most. |
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