crazy051
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| 02 Mar 2013 12:11 AM |
This is my first song ever. I'm not good at rapping so you might not like it but I have to make a song sooner or later or I will no longer by known as a ro-rapper.
PS: I never knew it would be this hard to write a song. And it's not even a great song. xD
Also check out my plans: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=90627214
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You only live once not twice , when you think your about to die , you say everything's gonna be okay but then your life says goodbye.
That's why ya gotta be careful
All my words add up to an earful
All my life commends
My family just pretends
But im not going down with out a fight
You see my fist then there's no light!
I see people with knifes
Risking there own life's
I can't deal with these lifes.
I guess this is goodbye. |
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johnb
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| 02 Mar 2013 12:13 AM |
I see people with Em16s Rocking those frayed jeans, Leatha leatha, Stealthy stealthy, Like a mau5 |
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crazy051
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| 02 Mar 2013 12:17 AM |
| I don't know if that was mocking me or complementing me. |
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crazy051
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bud390
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| 02 Mar 2013 12:57 AM |
Listening and having fun with music is for me. Writing it? Not for me.
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crazy051
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| 02 Mar 2013 01:05 AM |
| Same here but if i dont write a song soon instead on freestyle rapping i might loose my name under the list of ro-rappers. |
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| 02 Mar 2013 05:04 AM |
That's not a song yet, that's just a poem.
Compose some music to go with the lyrics and then you'll have a song. |
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crazy051
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| 02 Mar 2013 06:45 AM |
| Well , sorry I should have just said lyrics I guess. |
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crazy051
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| 02 Mar 2013 08:21 AM |
| I think it is alright, though the rhyming doesn't necessarily need to be repetitive, it'll add a little more circulation and animation to your song and the way it's portrayed. |
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| 02 Mar 2013 08:26 AM |
| Johnb made the smile come out in his 'verse' , big ups big ups. |
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music2016
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| 02 Mar 2013 09:41 AM |
| This in't even a "song" it is so short. |
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crazy051
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Jared343
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| 02 Mar 2013 10:24 AM |
| This isn't a song, it has no sound. |
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| 02 Mar 2013 12:14 PM |
| That subject fix works better... |
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crazy051
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crazy051
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