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Re: Part of my first song

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crazy051 is not online. crazy051
Joined: 01 Feb 2013
Total Posts: 789
02 Mar 2013 12:11 AM
This is my first song ever. I'm not good at rapping so you might not like it but I have to make a song sooner or later or I will no longer by known as a ro-rapper.

PS: I never knew it would be this hard to write a song. And it's not even a great song. xD

Also check out my plans: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=90627214

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You only live once not twice , when you think your about to die , you say everything's gonna be okay but then your life says goodbye.

That's why ya gotta be careful

All my words add up to an earful

All my life commends

My family just pretends

But im not going down with out a fight

You see my fist then there's no light!

I see people with knifes

Risking there own life's

I can't deal with these lifes.

I guess this is goodbye.
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johnb is not online. johnb
Joined: 21 Nov 2007
Total Posts: 24998
02 Mar 2013 12:13 AM
I see people with Em16s
Rocking those frayed jeans,
Leatha leatha,
Stealthy stealthy,
Like a mau5
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crazy051 is not online. crazy051
Joined: 01 Feb 2013
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02 Mar 2013 12:17 AM
I don't know if that was mocking me or complementing me.
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crazy051 is not online. crazy051
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02 Mar 2013 12:43 AM
bump
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bud390 is not online. bud390
Joined: 02 May 2010
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02 Mar 2013 12:57 AM
Listening and having fun with music is for me.
Writing it?
Not for me.
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crazy051 is not online. crazy051
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02 Mar 2013 01:05 AM
Same here but if i dont write a song soon instead on freestyle rapping i might loose my name under the list of ro-rappers.
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stuntddude is not online. stuntddude
Joined: 03 Aug 2011
Total Posts: 1630
02 Mar 2013 05:04 AM
That's not a song yet, that's just a poem.

Compose some music to go with the lyrics and then you'll have a song.
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crazy051 is not online. crazy051
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02 Mar 2013 06:45 AM
Well , sorry I should have just said lyrics I guess.
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crazy051 is not online. crazy051
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02 Mar 2013 07:58 AM
bump.
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CinnaAndRue is not online. CinnaAndRue
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02 Mar 2013 08:21 AM
I think it is alright, though the rhyming doesn't necessarily need to be repetitive, it'll add a little more circulation and animation to your song and the way it's portrayed.
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awesomelilwayne29 is not online. awesomelilwayne29
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02 Mar 2013 08:26 AM
Johnb made the smile come out in his 'verse' , big ups big ups.
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music2016 is not online. music2016
Joined: 04 Jan 2012
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02 Mar 2013 08:31 AM
It should be Ro-Poets..
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biskit7824 is not online. biskit7824
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02 Mar 2013 09:41 AM
This in't even a "song" it is so short.
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crazy051 is not online. crazy051
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02 Mar 2013 09:43 AM
It's part of a song.
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RhysEddy1234 is not online. RhysEddy1234
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02 Mar 2013 09:58 AM
yolo!!!
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Jared343 is not online. Jared343
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02 Mar 2013 10:24 AM
This isn't a song, it has no sound.
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twoshuesnewaccount is not online. twoshuesnewaccount
Joined: 24 Dec 2012
Total Posts: 115
02 Mar 2013 12:14 PM
That subject fix works better...
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crazy051 is not online. crazy051
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02 Mar 2013 01:05 PM
Yea
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crazy051 is not online. crazy051
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02 Mar 2013 02:38 PM
Būmp
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