darkjinx
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| 28 Jan 2013 11:18 AM |
"For many years the Nations of Fire, Water, Earth and Air Normads lived in peace. Kept together by the Avatar. The only person who could master all elements."
"The Cycle controlled where and what element the Avatar would be born to. Water was Winter, Earth is Spring, Fire is Summer and Air Autumn."
"This is where our story begins. Years ago. An Airbender Aang, The avatar. He was discovered by two water-benders. Sokka and Katara. Katara was the last water-bender before her grand-mothers friend. Hama was taken away. She was imprisoned with many. Chained at dinner, humidity raised high. She escaped. With an art of Blood-bending. A type of Water-Bending. To control the water inside the body. Blood. "
"Aang has died, Korra is deceased. The earth-bender Jenlia has faded. The fire-bender Kirrith has Fallen. A new avatar Is yet to be claimed. The only problem is. It's not an Airbender. The Cycle has fallen. A new season is added. The Avatars are falling."
"The New cycle has been arranged. By the Fire Nation Leader. Lithina, Earth Kingdom Queen, Qinsu. The Water Tribe leader of North, Luio. The Water Tribe leader of South, Ke-Chy and the Air Normad Representative and Leader of the four Temples, Ge-Ni-Soe."
"The New cycle is based off a new season. It is between Autumn and winter, It is called Pencese, The season of Red. It has been added to the cycle. Yue, The Moon Spirit has told the spirits of these new changes, And corruption has come for us"
"The Cycle; The avatar's will proceed in this current order. Blood-Bender, Water-Bender, Earth-Bender, Fire-Bender, Air-Bender. This means the next Avatar will be a blood bender. With this it gives them the power of controlling Water easily too."
"This may be a new beginning, but it does not mean we all approve. The Equalists are outraged. They are planning to raise a revaluation and destroy the Avatar Cycle. But the Avatar is not yet claimed."
"Blood-Benders are born into a land between the Air-temples and Water Tribes. Because Its season is between Winter and Autumn. The land of Blood-benders is 3 big Islands. Each island is half Ice and half rock."
"They are coming. Help. Please"
"The Equalists are attacking. They are raising an army. We need Hero's. and He.roine's are you one of them? But, without the Avatar. We are useless."
"This is signed by Lin-Hou, I am a descendent of Kyoshi. Like Princess Yue. I am confined by a Spirit. This was messaged on the day of Kirriths death."
~Rules~ -The Avatar is reserved. -No Godmodding -I want proper RP like so; "I swept my hand across the misty air. A string of Wind flushes across me towards the figure". Not "I fired a ball of wind at the guy. It was foggy". -Put Kyoshi on Other. To be allowed in. -You can't just "Be able to Bend" If your under 16. You haft to learn. -Only admins can be leaders. And they haft to have the given names. -Anyone can be a lord or Lady or aristocracy. But 4 Max for each element(Including Blood-Bending)
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Name: A.g.e: Element(Put Non-Bender If not a Elemental-Bender): Ho.me: Occupation: Family: Bio: Extra Info: Title(Like if Royal or Aristocrat?) Other: |
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darkjinx
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| 28 Jan 2013 11:19 AM |
| All my "Tests" were checking what was blocking it. |
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GenFears
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| 28 Jan 2013 11:36 AM |
Pray repost with better grammar and less paragraphs; I do quite like it.
'An educated people can be easily governed.'--Frederick The Great |
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darkjinx
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| 28 Jan 2013 12:13 PM |
Its written as a story. There not paragraphs. There speeches. There showing how they were said.
±Selflessness and Bravery are the same. They can both take Criticism± |
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Danieltck
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| 28 Jan 2013 03:50 PM |
Name:TCK A.g.e:5 Element:AIR Ho.me: NA Occupation:NA Family:Na Bio: NA Extra Info:NA Title: NA Other |
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| 28 Jan 2013 03:56 PM |
| (Is this Avatar the last Airbender or Avatar with the blue cat things?) |
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darkjinx
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Quasar99
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| 28 Jan 2013 05:33 PM |
'aang is dead' u dont say
anyways, i might join this not too sure tho
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| 28 Jan 2013 05:58 PM |
Name: Kai'u (Kai-ooh) Milan (Mih-Lahn)
Age: 17
Gender: Female ((Added this))
Element: Fire
Home: ((Could you tell me all the possible places I could put here? Thankee!))
Occupation: She works as a dancer and hopes to someday be a powerful fire bender.
Family: Mother: Kan'a (Kah-Nah) (Deceased) Father: Kar'u (Kah-Roo) (Deceased) Brother: Kal'i (Kahl-Ee)
Bio: Kai'u was born into her happy little family. She was able to use her bending at a young age but only when she was under a ton of emotions (such as fury, depression, extreme emotions and stuff, y'know?). Kai'u and her brother were best friends, always hanging out and stuff like that. Her parents were middle-class and got enough money to send their children to bending classes, which therefore gave Kai'u better control of her powers. After a few years of this school Kai'u came back to find that her parents were dead and there was no money left for them (ohnoes!), so she had to take up a job. That job was dancing in the street, an easy job for her.
Description: Kai'u has long, black hair in a style that resembles that of Ty-Lee (being that she has the braid, the bangs she only has the larger side of the bangs). She wears the normal clothes of this time area, usually red to match what element she is from, but when she's dancing she wears the exact same clothes that the girls that the first series would wear. ((Added that :P))
Extra Info: If she gets an extreme amount of an emotion she will probably burn anything nearby, even if she doesn't want to. Be warned, childrens.
Title: Just a normal person. Possibly poor person if you wanted to think of it like that.
Other: Kyoshi, player might not always be on, player is awesome.
((Anything else you need me to put or if there's anything I need to clarify just let me know! Oh, and awesome roleplay. *THUMBS UP*))
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darkjinx
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| 29 Jan 2013 10:45 AM |
(Not be selfish. But my characters the Avatar >.>....)
Name: Sy-Tee(Sie-Tee) Chu(Cee-U) A.g.e: 16(16-17)
Element(Put Non-Bender If not a Elemental-Bender): Blood.
Ho.me: Island of Ice, Blood-bender Port of MonRule.
Occupation: Student of Bending
Family: Jah-Si(Sister) Bechi(Brother) Yin-Su(Mother) Yang(Farther)
Bio: Born In the Ice Caps of MonRule. I have had strong connections with the Spirits of Blood. The Moon And The Core. I lived quiet wealthy. MonRule is an Icy mountain with 6 Levels. I lived on the 5th. The 1st down from the Palace. I was trained in a private training Dojo. I was trained by the leader of the Blood-Bender group of defence called the Yei-Nu. My blood-bending is strong. but I lack pure quality and emotion which dims my bending.
Extra Info: His farther is MonRules senior Representative to the Earth Kingdom, Water Tribes of North and South, All Air Normad temples and the Fire Nation.
Title(Like if Royal or Aristocrat?): Sy-Tee Chu High Aristocrat of MonRule of the Family of Chu-Ne-Li.
Other: Kyoshi. She's my Favourite apart from Hama c; |
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darkjinx
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| 29 Jan 2013 10:49 AM |
(Ignore top. Yea add Description c;. Also Admin because you made a good CS and joined 1st c;)
(Not be selfish. But my characters the Avatar >.>....)
Name: Sy-Tee(Sie-Tee) Chu(Cee-U) A.g.e: 16(16-17)
Element(Put Non-Bender If not a Elemental-Bender): Blood.
Ho.me: Island of Ice, Blood-bender Port of MonRule.
Occupation: Student of Bending
Family: Jah-Si(Sister) Bechi(Brother) Yin-Su(Mother) Yang(Farther)
Bio: Born In the Ice Caps of MonRule. I have had strong connections with the Spirits of Blood. The Moon And The Core. I lived quiet wealthy. MonRule is an Icy mountain with 6 Levels. I lived on the 5th. The 1st down from the Palace. I was trained in a private training Dojo. I was trained by the leader of the Blood-Bender group of defence called the Yei-Nu. My blood-bending is strong. but I lack pure quality and emotion which dims my bending.
Description: He is very un-settled mostly and struggles to find peace. He can be very fearful by the fact his hole Kingdom could control him. He is aggressive and loud. He can control his bending but only to an extent.
Extra Info: His farther is MonRules senior Representative to the Earth Kingdom, Water Tribes of North and South, All Air Normad temples and the Fire Nation.
Title(Like if Royal or Aristocrat?): Sy-Tee Chu High Aristocrat of MonRule of the Family of Chu-Ne-Li.
Other: Kyoshi. She's my Favourite apart from Hama c; |
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darkjinx
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| 29 Jan 2013 10:52 AM |
| -To add. Description: He has short brown hair. A long fringe that covers his left eye. He is average height and Slim. He is very pale(Blood-Benders are born with phew blood, To protect them from each other)He wears black robes with trim of Red mixed with Ice Blue and Rock Brown. It has a hood that he barely wears up. |
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| 29 Jan 2013 01:04 PM |
(I may join with a earth bender desended from Toph, making her blind. But I dunno.) |
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darkjinx
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darkjinx
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| 29 Jan 2013 01:14 PM |
(If shes blind. She could make her senses bigger maybe making her powers better c;
±I have a theory, Bravery and Selflessness are the Same± - Beatrice Prior. |
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| 29 Jan 2013 01:44 PM |
| (I haven't done an Avatar rp in a while, so I may be a bit rusty. I'll post my CS soon. Also, would she not be considered royalty, sice she is a decendant?) |
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darkjinx
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| 29 Jan 2013 02:07 PM |
| (Okay c; When we get 3 or 4. We can start) |
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| 29 Jan 2013 02:10 PM |
(Is Ba Sing Se still there? And is a decendant of Toph royalty?_) |
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| 29 Jan 2013 09:36 PM |
((Okee; thanks for the admin; even though I don't need it :P. Oh, and could you tell me the possible places that I could put? Thanks! ^^))
Name: Kal'i (Kahl-Ee) Milan (Mih-Lahn)
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Element: Fire
Home: ((I dunno, a huge fire-bending city?))
Occupation: He works in one of the many factories at minimum wage.
Family: Mother: Kan'a (Kah-Nah) (Deceased) Father: Kar'u (Kah-Roo) (Deceased) Sister: Kai'u (Kai-ooh)
Bio: Same as his sister, but change working as a dancer to working at a factory. That and his fire bending skills didn't come until he went to the school.
Description: Kal'i has short cut hair and wears the normal attire of this time period, mainly in red like his sister. He has a fingerless glove he wears all the time, it's a faded red, and he never takes it off.
Extra Info: He has a pet rat named Shoh (Google translate->Rat->Chinese Traditional->Listen), she's a dark grey with brown eyes. He's also his sister's guardian.
Title: Just a normal person. Possibly poor person if you wanted to think of it like that.
Other: Kyoshi, player might not always be on, player is awesome.
((And I forgot to put that Kai'u has a pet baby tigerdillo name Hu-mu. (Search tiger in chinese (traditional) on google translate for pronounciation)) |
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Quasar99
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| 29 Jan 2013 09:44 PM |
Name: Fang (I think you know how to pronounce it.) - Korr-vae (Khorr-vay)
A.g.e: 21
Element(Put Non-Bender If not a Elemental-Bender): Fire
Ho.me: His palace in the mountains. Sometimes will venture out to some Fire Nation outposts.
Occupation: Lord of the Fire Nation.
Family: Mother: Jenna Korr-vae [Jeh-nuh[ Father: (DECEASED) Halka Korr-vae [Howl-kuh] Brother: (DECEASED) Kenray Korr-vae [Ken-ray]
Bio: Fang was always given an odd name from birth. His mother had always been a working girl while his father usually watched duels between players at stadiums most of the time. He couldn't even hold his anger when his brother had died. He hated his father, and his mother had ran away to the Earth Kingdom to work for their army. She complained she wasn't being paid enough and needed a better job.
Extra Info: Fang also rides a polar bear (ironically). He named it Uthrake, as he was a baby when he found him and shouted out the first words that came in to mind.
Title(Like if Royal or Aristocrat?) Lord Korr-Vae
Other: Kyoshi
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Quasar99
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| 29 Jan 2013 09:46 PM |
(forgot description)
Description: Fang wears a helmet with tall, rising horns coming out of the top holes inside of it. It has a mask that comes with it that kind of looks like that 'comedy' mask you would find except bended a bit more and without the weird face on it. He wears black trousers extending out from his Fire Nation armour that he wears practically everywhere. He has ginger-ish blonde hair that he almost never shows because of his helmet.
i am a karat karat |
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tobin2006
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| 29 Jan 2013 09:57 PM |
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Name: Jim Newt A.g.e: 28 Element(Put Non-Bender If not a Elemental-Bender): Earth Ho.me: Yu Dao Occupation: Earth Bending Teacher Family: Father:Baron Newt Mother: Tye Newt Son: Feron Newt Wife: Tara Newt (deceased) Bio: Learning how to earth bend at a young age, Jim started to become the best earth bender in Yu Dao. He started to fight others for money, but stoped for hopes of a new life. When he was twenty-two he started his earth bending school. Tara and him met one day while he was teaching her niece. They started dating and were married. Tara died giving birth to Feron. Extra Info: Has a Hybrid Pig named Tank Title(Like if Royal or Aristocrat?) Teacher Other:Kyoshi |
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tobin2006
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| 29 Jan 2013 09:59 PM |
(also forgot description)
5 foot 7, he has short brown hair, he also has brown eyes. Right next to his left ear is a scar from one of his earth bending fights. He has some muscles but not that much that he looks like a freak. |
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darkjinx
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| 30 Jan 2013 10:50 AM |
(i know that theres the "Fire bending Capital" which looks like volcano filed up with rock and a city built on it, It has a circle stone structure in the centre, Ba Sing Se is still there. And no. Toph's distant relative would be Lord/Lady's/Aristocracy. I guess we can start too.)
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darkjinx
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| 30 Jan 2013 11:22 AM |
Sy-Tee;
My feet are warm, I wear black leather boots as I skid down the Ice path down the 8 Level mountain. I stare at the Ice that is being demolished to make way for the new marble structure. It's mean't to be grey with red paths. The hole mountain demolished. Great, At least we won't look like the great city of the Southern Waterbenders any more. Unlucky. The Northern Island looks like the Eastern AirTemple. I carry on down. All houses are Japanese style dojo looking. They have black paper-looking stone walls, Small windows and a Red room trim and outlined red. On the trim's wave carving made of Ice clash with carvings of Blood, they mix together to make a man.
I carry on, I reach Level 3. It's the home of Business, Schools and basically town style. Level 4 Is for Upper Class, Level 5 Is for Aristocracy, Level 6 is for Government and Court of Blood, Level 7 Is mine. Home of Dukes and Duchess's. Level 8 is a gigantic marble black palace. With amazing windows, And a structure like a brain-messing picture. It has 9 Towers Tower 1,2 and 3 are all joined by a bridge. While Tower 9 Is in the centre. The other towers hang off it. Either by bridges, rope or brick. Level 3 Is where all the minor business's are. Like Bakery's or Charity Shops. Level 2 Is for the 'Working Class', Level 1 Is for the Poor citizens. Its dark and covered in by smoke. And the smell of labour. Ground Level is a park. And Ice park. It holds a statue of Hama. Our Waterbender creator. It has a big fort entrance with Waterfalls of Red outside. No one ever leaves. I reach Ground. Where our Leader Kein Koi Is standing, Here we don't say leader we call them our Controller or High Maiden.
She walks up onto the stand before the statue of Hama waterbending in the left hand and Bloodblending in Right. Kein has Red fiery hair. It dangles to her hips. Usually it's in a bun or braids. But it must be celebration. She wears bright Red robes, Black outlines them. She's very pale like most of us. But she has a small blush in her cheeks and red around her eyes with black. She looks quite evil and cunning, She's far from. Intelligent and Honest. Though she can be arrogant. She wears a small tiara thats golden ruby. It glimmers from the sun.
"BloodBenders, Gather!" She screams out. "Today Is a day of Fear, worry and Celebration!" Some cheer but others look anxious. "In Ba Sing Se the Fire Lady, Earth Queen, Air Normad Representative and Governor, Northern and Southern water tribe chiefs and myself met. In a discussion. In the watertribes the sun has turned black. We discussed with a Monk from Earth and Air. They told of the cycle. And how the Avatar rules. For 200 Years Bloodbenders have known we may not produce an Avatar, Fire Avatar Kirrith told us so. After our war." Most start to chatter between eachother. I stand and watch "The sun has turned black as an omen. The moon spirit, Yue and spirits tell us. A season of Pensence comes. It will have Wind and Snowfalls. I am told It is the season of Blood. It will rain red and red poppies will grow." Everyone mutters, except me. "We are told, and shown. The net Avatar will be a Bloodbender. Not an Airbender" People cheer. I stand still in shock. "A celebration!"
I see she is hiding something. This can't be good. I walk through the secret entrance so high class don't haft to walk through Level 1, 2 and 3. I get out on 4. I realise that my parents weren't there and rush to Level 7. I run out of breath and stop at 6. I walk slowly up the stairs. I yawn. About time, I reach Level 7. I live in the House highest up the small sledge of Ice. Its practically a mansion, But It seems like a normal home to me. I walk in. I catch my breath again. My god that was enough exercise for today!...
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