lego258
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| 26 Feb 2013 10:55 PM |
About 20 years before I was born, my hometown' s streets were always bustling, and business was booming. My mom told me about how great the town used to be. She remembered a young couple who owned an ice cream shop. Their names were Mike and Pam. She also said that one day, they had vanished, and the shop was gone. Then, a few months later, the city started losing business. What happened? Is the lack of business due to the disappearance ? I went to the address where the shop was, to see a space between two buildings. What was there, however, was something I didn't expect. An old Magnavox Oddessy! It was in an unopened box, completely undamaged! The console itself, had a sentence written on the bottom. "I miss you". I toke it home and hooked it up to an old color TV in the house, and turned it on. I was greeted with a start up screen. A Magnavox Oddessy doesn't have a start up screen, but I pressed on, ready to play whatever was inside the slot. A red... Thing appeared on the screen, making a sort of 8-bit bellowing sound. I shut the Damn thing off. I put it into my car's trunk, and drove to the empty lot where the store was. But defying logic, |
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lego258
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| 26 Feb 2013 11:00 PM |
(Continued) it was there! The old ice cream parlor! Being inquisitive by nature, I went inside. I was not ready for what I was about to see. Two bodies (presumably Mike and Pam) on the ground. Skinned. Blood on the ground, with entrails everywhere. This was sickening, so I turned for the door. But it wasn't there. I looked out the Windows, to see blackness. I turned again to see the corpses had gotten up. "We miss you" they said.
My eyes shot open, and I was drenched in sweat. I miss them. I think I'll pay them a visit.
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Tekkit123
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| 26 Feb 2013 11:01 PM |
lel
"that was actually offensive no offense" -tnt91, 2/24/13 |
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xOwlHeart
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| 26 Feb 2013 11:03 PM |
Waht. :| I was really hoping to sleep tonight |
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lego258
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Tekkit123
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| 26 Feb 2013 11:06 PM |
um needs more creativity to me it seems like an average "these people are dead but aren't but are but alive and i make a joke about dieing at the end" kind of story
"that was actually offensive no offense" -tnt91, 2/24/13 |
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| 26 Feb 2013 11:08 PM |
Copypasta?
ˢᵒ ᵖˡᵉᵃˢᵉ ᵈᵒᶰ'ᵗ ˢᶜʳᵉᵃᵐ ʷʰᵉʳᵉ ʷᵉ ᵗᵃᵏᵉ ʸᵒᵘ; ᵗʰᵉ ʷᵒʳˡᵈ ᶤˢ ᵠᵘᶤᵉᵗ ʰᵉʳᵉˑ |
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lego258
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lopj245
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