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Re: I would like to test OT's writing skills.

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Boeing717 is not online. Boeing717
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06 Sep 2010 10:30 AM
Write a story in exactly 50 words, if you can do it, you are a good writer, as it's hard to do.
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06 Sep 2010 10:32 AM
-Lucas' POV-

For a minute I think I've said something stupid, why else would she be smiling? But regardless, she kisses me again, and that euphoria returns. The feeling of her hands roaming me like that… it was both soothing and exciting at the same time. I wonder how she'd react if I did that too? I give it a shot, wrapping my arms around her back and rubbing it. I'm a little surprised when I hear a light moan. I'm afraid I did something wrong, but when she pulls me into a tighter grip those worries go away. We lay here, writhing on the floor as we kiss, and I love it. My motions are starting to be less thought-out and more instinctual, but I still have the sense not to rub her too low.

Eventually we break the kiss, less quickly this time, and her eyes aren't wide this time. Her eyes are glazed over, she's blushing and even shaking a little. "What's wrong? You're shaking…"

"I… L-Lucas…" she stutters. "I'm not sure if I can keep going… I don't want to take things too far… I mean, you're still a kid and… I don't want to do something we'll both regret…"

I can feel the worry in her voice. "Go too far…" It's then that I realize just where we're both headed with this situation. "You mean… make love?" That's when her eyes widen in complete surprise. "I'm not totally ignorant… Dad gave me the talk…"

She eases up a little. "Well… at least you know what's going on…" she mutters. "But… seriously… I won't do something you don't want…"

It's something I have to think about. Losing my virginity is a big deal… you're supposed to give it to the person you love. But really the closest person I have to a girlfriend, the only person who really understands me, is on top of me right now… "I… I don't mind, Kumatora…" She looks at me anxiously. "No one should be alone on Valentine's Day, anyway…"

Okay, that was cheesy, but it got the point across. "You're… sure about this?"

I nod slowly. "I'm sure…"

Nervously she lowers her face down to resume our kiss, but within a small moment we both regain that passion. I can tell that she wants… no, needs this as much as I do. This time our actions are unhindered by any kind of doubt, and I can feel myself spiraling into a mindset of pure, lustful instinct with each move we make. Gone are the inhibitions of age and feelings.

This time we break the kiss slowly, taking the time to revel in the sweet feelings. Kumatora gets off of me and grabs my hand, pulling me to my feet. She starts guiding me down the hallways, and I don't resist. I have a fairly good idea of where we're going, and I'm correct; she opens a door and almost shoves me into her bedroom, and intentionally shoves me down onto the bed. I watch with fascination as she pulls up on her robe and throws it off, revealing a thin, light-blue nightgown. She crawls back on top of me immediately afterward, resuming our kiss. I run my hands along her back, feeling the warmth of her skin through the fabric. She responds by moaning into my mouth and sliding her hands through the wide collar of my robe, massaging my back. I moan as well, enjoying her warm hands against my skin.

Suddenly she thrusts her hips against mine, pressing against me sensually. With this sudden stimulation to my growing arousal, I break the kiss and gasp audibly, wrapping my arms around her back. I want her to do that again. Our eyes meet, and she smirks at me. "Do you like that?" she asks seductively.

"Y-yes…" I rasp out, begging her to continue. She thrusts forward again in a repeated motion this time, grinding our hips together slowly and sensually. The bliss and the heat are sapping my strength, letting my arms slide off of her. She smiles at me with a lustful stare, moving her head down to my neck and planting a kiss there. "Ah…" I whimper out, quickly getting overwhelmed but these new and exciting sensations. Her hand starts rubbing my chest under the robe. I groan at the touch. I gaze up at the ceiling, letting her have her way with me… I know she won't hurt me.

Suddenly she tugs on the collar of my robe, taking her attention off of my neck for a moment to look at me. "Can I?" she asks simply, tugging on the robe again. I know what she wants, and I nod slowly. Gently she pulls up on the robe, and I sit up to let her take it off of me. She throws it away, and I blush when I realize I'm naked in front of her and that she is gazing at my body.

-Kumatora's POV-

I can only look at the timid boy in fascination. For someone at the tender age of thirteen – or is it fourteen? – he has a decently-built body. If his father acted anything like the cowboy he looked like, he was sure to have worked the boy hard. Seeing his nervousness, I kiss him on the lips once more and ease him back down to the bed before I let my hands travel along his chest. He's so warm… I feel him shudder at my touch. He's getting anxious… I won't keep him waiting any longer then. I creep my hand down his chest and grab hold of his erection, and he moans with surprise into my mouth. I stroke it slowly to begin with, not wanting to frighten or hurt him. We break the kiss and look at each other. His eyes are glazed over. "Kuma…" he moans out. I can't help but smile broadly at him, realizing that he's at my mercy.
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Boeing717 is not online. Boeing717
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06 Sep 2010 10:34 AM
Any 50 word stories?
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Brixxter is not online. Brixxter
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06 Sep 2010 10:36 AM
The Meow

meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow then meow said meow to meow who just ended up meowing. meow meow meow meow meow finally met meow and they laughed and meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow. then end
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ZapCorp is not online. ZapCorp
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06 Sep 2010 10:36 AM
@ZX: erm....
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UpIoader is not online. UpIoader
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06 Sep 2010 10:38 AM
One day, there was a boy named Boeing717. He wanted to test my writing skills, to see if I could write a story in exactly 50 words. I said that I can, so I am. Boeing will say that this doesn’t count, because it is happening right this very second.
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Boeing717 is not online. Boeing717
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06 Sep 2010 10:39 AM
@Up: It counts.
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Ooko is not online. Ooko
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06 Sep 2010 10:39 AM
This was never a good idea, coming to the Roblox forums. Full of haters and trolls, spammers and attention seekers. One day I logged on and found a thread called "smile." I clicked, naturally curious, and there was a link, which I copied into the address bar. Then I fainted.

:D
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Sneak4001 is not online. Sneak4001
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06 Sep 2010 10:39 AM
You see, computers are death.
Death.
Death.
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Brixxter is not online. Brixxter
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06 Sep 2010 10:41 AM
DID MY AWESOME STORY COUNT?!
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rocknrolldude3212 is not online. rocknrolldude3212
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06 Sep 2010 10:42 AM
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Boeing717 is not online. Boeing717
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06 Sep 2010 10:43 AM
No.
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06 Sep 2010 10:46 AM
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Boeing717 is not online. Boeing717
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06 Sep 2010 10:49 AM
It was the person before your post.
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Ooko is not online. Ooko
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06 Sep 2010 10:49 AM
Did I win?
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babyhero09 is not online. babyhero09
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06 Sep 2010 10:51 AM
I woke up, it was very dark and humid for some reason.I went out side to see what was going on.It seems if time was frozen.Strangely though There were still 2 other people excluding me that were moving.I was starting to get scared as they came closer...
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Boeing717 is not online. Boeing717
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06 Sep 2010 10:52 AM
@baby: The lack of an ending disqualifies it.
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punky99nye is not online. punky99nye
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06 Sep 2010 10:55 AM
I can't write 50 words.
But I can write a good story.

I sat on the bench outside of school. My name is Luna,I'm 16 and the love of my life doesn't even know I exsist. I swung my feet,and there he was. Damien walked out of the school. "I have to talk to him...I have to..I just have to." I got up,and went over to him. "Damien...hi." He looked at me awkwardly. His lusious black hair shimmering in the sun. "Who are you?" Those three words killed me. "Sorry,I don't talk to awkward girls." And he walked away. I sighed watching him get on the bus. I walked down the block,going to my house. Oh? Did I tell you,I have long black,wavy hair and one green eye,one blue. Maybe that's why people never talked to me. I wasn't goth,nor emo. But that's what people think. Suddenly,Damien got out of the bus right infront of me. It pulled up,I guess this was his house? He looked at me. He blinked. Stared blankly. "...Sorry about earlier. I was just upset. My girlfriend just broke up with me...and..I'm just really stressed. You know I'm Damien,and you are?" My cheeks got hot. I was blushing. "I'm Luna." I said,looking down at my Black beat-up Converse. "Hey,wanna go get a coffee or something in an hour?" I scratched the back of my head. "Sure..." I smiled. "Here's my number." He wrote it down on a card,and I took it. "Cya." He said,and walked in his house. I walked to my house. I was so happy.


~The Next Day~
I met Damien at the coffee shop. We talked,we laughed. We were perfect for eachother. We got together,went to prom,went to the same college,and got married. And today here I am with one beautiful daughter and a dog. We are still like teenagers,holding the love we had since that one day.
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SideAccount1 is not online. SideAccount1
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06 Sep 2010 11:18 AM
Rather than simply make one short story, I made multiple. Consider them chapters, if you will. Each indention marks a new chapter. And yes, each chapter contains 50 words exactly. In fact, even this introduction does. Go ahead, just check. I think you’ll find the results quite satisfying, after all.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Once, a long, long time ago, there was nothing but a single baseplate. Eventually, the Gods of Plastic created bricks to add onto that baseplate, and as more baseplates were created, they invented skyboxes, a way of defining the barrier between each baseplate. But this couldn’t entertain them for long.

Eventually, they got bored of simply building all day, and decided to create living beings to build for them. They called these beings “Robloxians”, and gave them the necessary tools to create new structures. As the Robloxians became more skilled, they learned more, and soon began to carve out landscapes.

But the peace that resided was not meant to last. Eventually, more and more Robloxians were born. They were a strange creature; rather than following the pattern of typical human birth, these Robloxians were created at full growth, and stayed the same forever, aside from wardrobe changes. But, something happened…

One Robloxian was created, a “special” Robloxian. He was born with the ability to see past the dimensions that defined this baseplate-covered world. Normal Robloxians saw in three dimensions; he saw in four. He kept this gift to himself, using it to create wondrous things. Eventually, he locked himself in.

He separated himself from the rest of the Robloxian world, locking himself deep within a lab of his own creation; this lab was the first, albeit forgotten, structure in the history of what is today known as C-framing. While confined within this lab, he created something unique: a four-dimensional brick.

Now, before you get ahead of yourself, this is not, nor will it ever be, the story of 1x1x1x1’s creation. No, although rumor has it that this tale inspired the famed user who has long been accused of heinous crimes. This, rather, is the tale of the Era of Spam.

You see, despite being apart from the rest of the world for so long, this four-dimensional Robloxian had gained quite a bit of popularity for his amazing building abilities which he had made outside of his lab. But when he created a fourth dimension for that brick, he went insane.

Nobody knows quite what happened. Some who have heard his story say that having finally created the impossible, he realized that he had gone against the very fiber of existence, causing a logical tear that drove him to the edge. Others say it was a punishment from the Plastic Gods.

But no matter how it went, the fact still stands: He became the first of what we today call “spammers”. His insanity caused him to stumble about, babbling ridiculous things, even claiming the knowledge of how to get free monetary objects. His reputation preceded him, and many people followed along.

You see, due to his cutting-edge ability to build along with modern trends, many Robloxians assumed that his inane babble of free tickets and hats were true, or at the very least something that everyone did for fun. So, when he “spammed”, so did they. This is how it began.

As his new habit became more and more popular, the comment boards of thousands of items began flooding over with spam and scams. Eventually people began polluting the boards with their own variations, such as advertising their constructions, or telling others to buy their products. That man was soon forgotten.

As the days went on and the now-forgotten man who had caused the Age of Spam was punished for causing such chaos, tossed into the pits of Banland forever, the Plastic Gods became troubled with the current conundrum: They despised the spammers, but couldn’t kill them all off very easily.

So, in an effort to spread some intelligence to the world, the Plastic Gods created a special breed of Robloxian, and gave them their own territory to roam. This land was known as The Forums, and had many subsections to please everyone. The most famous were Roblox Talk and Off-Topic.

You see, some may claim that the forums were created long before spam arrived, and that the forumers, as they were called, had been around for quite some time as well. This is true, however, they were a small percentage compared to the rest of the world…They were reborn now.

The forums were now quite popular, as many Robloxians who came to this world were smart enough to realize that the spammers were incapable of building anything worth the time, and quickly found their way to the forums to join the ranks of whatever group they chose to be in.

The forums exist now today, and occasionally a spammer will come across these lands and soon be banned for attempting to corrupt them, but mainly time here is spent speaking of topics that are much more mature than they would be had they been discussed in the infamous “outside world”.

So, welcome to the forums, young one. Just remember, people here don’t often speak of this tale, and will almost always deny knowledge of the story, for fear it may happen again if it is remembered. Just act intelligently, don’t think that nobody cares. And please, don’t feed the trolls.
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Sneak4001 is not online. Sneak4001
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06 Sep 2010 11:25 AM
@Side:
Amazing.
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06 Sep 2010 11:25 AM
@Sneak:

I just sat there and wrote that entire thing after I read this thread.
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DeadlyGlance is not online. DeadlyGlance
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20 Feb 2013 12:07 AM
50 words, eh? Ponies ponies ponies. Everywhere! Oh, I want one to bring to the human world so very much! They're amazing. I brought one, but when it went to sleep, my dog tore it to shreds. Blood was everwhere, nothing could be saved... Three ponies... So amazing. So many ponies ponies ponies!
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hart4jena is not online. hart4jena
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20 Feb 2013 12:15 AM
I remember,it was a cold night. When I saw your face I instantly knew I loved you. I miss all those little talks,all my blushing. Now it's not the same. Now you act like I am a ghost. Now I regret taking you pie. Forgive me please.
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lul, free bump
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